diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate.dm index d499a8034d8..31639b3688e 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate.dm @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ /datum/antagonist/pirate/greet() . = ..() - to_chat(owner, "The station refused to pay for your protection, protect the ship, siphon the credits from the station and raid it for even more loot.") + to_chat(owner, "The station refused to pay for your protection. Protect the ship, siphon the credits from the station, and raid it for even more loot.") owner.announce_objectives() /datum/antagonist/pirate/get_team() @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ /datum/objective/loot var/obj/machinery/computer/piratepad_control/cargo_hold - explanation_text = "Acquire valuable loot and store it in designated area." + explanation_text = "Acquire valuable loot and store it in the designated area." var/target_value = 50000 diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_gangs.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_gangs.dm index a0a9a1caf56..5afce41b751 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_gangs.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_gangs.dm @@ -73,9 +73,9 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(heavy_pirate_gangs, init_pirate_gangs(is_heavy = TRUE)) threat_title = "Sector protection offer" threat_content = "Hey, pal, this is the %SHIPNAME. Can't help but notice you're rocking a wild \ and crazy shuttle there with NO INSURANCE! Crazy. What if something happened to it, huh?! We've \ - done a quick evaluation on your rates in this sector and we're offering %PAYOFF to cover for your \ + done a quick evaluation of your rates in this sector, and we're offering %PAYOFF to cover your \ shuttle in case of any disaster." - arrival_announcement = "Do you want to reconsider our offer? Unfortunately, the time for negotiations has passed. Open up, we're coming aboard soon." + arrival_announcement = "Do you want to reconsider our offer? Unfortunately, the time for negotiations has passed. Open up; we're coming aboard soon." possible_answers = list("Purchase Insurance.","Reject Offer.") response_received = "Sweet, free cash. Let's get outta here, boys." @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(heavy_pirate_gangs, init_pirate_gangs(is_heavy = TRUE)) threat_title = "Transfer of goods" threat_content = "Ahoy! This be the %SHIPNAME. Cough up %PAYOFF credits or you'll walk the plank." - arrival_announcement = "The Jolly Roger won't wait forever, maties; we're laying alongside ready to send you some gifts." + arrival_announcement = "The Jolly Roger won't wait forever, maties; we're lying alongside, ready to send you some gifts." possible_answers = list("We'll pay.","We will not be extorted.") response_received = "Thanks for the credits, landlubbers." @@ -125,9 +125,9 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(heavy_pirate_gangs, init_pirate_gangs(is_heavy = TRUE)) threat_title = "Junkie tribute" threat_content = "Hello, you psychically dormant pawn-pieces. It's the %SHIPNAME! Our funds are running a little low, and we're not going to be able to continue our gore-binge! %PAYOFF credits should do, wanna help us out?" - arrival_announcement = "We didn't blaze this far just to send some idle threats. Just you wait, we'll make you wish you were in a mental asylum." + arrival_announcement = "We didn't blaze this far just to send some idle threats. Just you wait; we'll make you wish you were in a mental asylum." possible_answers = list("Send some funds so they go away.","We're not funding these junkies.") - response_received = "You guys aren't so bad for being dormants. Next gore-fest goes to you guys. Peace!" + response_received = "You guys aren't so bad for being dormants. The next gore-fest goes to you guys. Peace!" response_too_late = "Oh, now you think we're worth the money. Pathetic dormants." response_not_enough = "You really shouldn't have messed with us. You're in for a psychic nightmare." diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_roles.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_roles.dm index caa538fa8ec..8d1c32f0820 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_roles.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_roles.dm @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ density = FALSE show_flavor = FALSE //Flavour only exists for spawners menu you_are_text = "You are a space pirate." - flavour_text = "The station refused to pay for your protection, protect the ship, siphon the credits from the station and raid it for even more loot." + flavour_text = "The station refused to pay for your protection. Protect the ship, siphon the credits from the station, and raid it for even more loot." spawner_job_path = /datum/job/space_pirate ///Rank of the pirate on the ship, it's used in generating pirate names! var/rank = "Deserter" @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ /obj/effect/mob_spawn/ghost_role/human/pirate/skeleton name = "pirate remains" - desc = "Some unanimated bones. They feel like they could spring to life any moment!" + desc = "Some inanimate bones. They feel like they could spring to life at any moment!" density = FALSE icon = 'icons/effects/blood.dmi' icon_state = "remains" diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_shuttle_equipment.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_shuttle_equipment.dm index fe877a12320..b38b67563a4 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_shuttle_equipment.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_shuttle_equipment.dm @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ AddComponent(/datum/component/gps, "Nautical Signal") active = TRUE to_chat(user,span_notice("You toggle [src] [active ? "on":"off"].")) - to_chat(user,span_warning("The scrambling signal can be now tracked by GPS.")) + to_chat(user,span_warning("The scrambling signal can now be tracked by GPS.")) START_PROCESSING(SSobj,src) /obj/machinery/shuttle_scrambler/interact(mob/user) @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ to_chat(user,span_notice("There's nothing to withdraw.")) /obj/machinery/shuttle_scrambler/proc/send_notification() - priority_announce("Data theft signal detected, source registered on local gps units.") + priority_announce("Data theft signal detected; source registered on local GPS units.") /obj/machinery/shuttle_scrambler/proc/toggle_off(mob/user) SSshuttle.clearTradeBlockade(src) @@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ /obj/machinery/computer/camera_advanced/shuttle_docker/syndicate/pirate/psyker name = "psyker navigation warper" - desc = "Used to designate a precise transit location for the psyker shuttle, using sent out brainwaves as detailed sight." + desc = "Uses amplified brainwaves to designate and map a precise transit location for the psyker shuttle." icon_screen = "recharge_comp_on" interaction_flags_machine = INTERACT_MACHINE_ALLOW_SILICON | INTERACT_MACHINE_SET_MACHINE //blind friendly x_offset = 0 diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_special_items.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_special_items.dm index b52fac273ee..6fe47dab8dd 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_special_items.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/pirate/pirate_special_items.dm @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ /obj/item/reagent_containers/hypospray/medipen/gore name = "gore autoinjector" - desc = "A ghetto looking autoinjector filled with gore, aka dirty kronkaine. Probably shouldn't take this while in the job, but it is a super-stimulant. Don't take two at once." + desc = "A ghetto-looking autoinjector filled with gore, aka dirty kronkaine. You probably shouldn't take this while on the job, but it is a super-stimulant. Don't take two at once." volume = 15 amount_per_transfer_from_this = 15 list_reagents = list(/datum/reagent/drug/kronkaine/gore = 15) diff --git a/code/modules/clothing/gloves/color.dm b/code/modules/clothing/gloves/color.dm index ff7a1ffd225..afeb4e3ce8c 100644 --- a/code/modules/clothing/gloves/color.dm +++ b/code/modules/clothing/gloves/color.dm @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ // SKYRAT EDIT ADDITION END /obj/item/clothing/gloves/fingerless name = "fingerless gloves" - desc = "Plain black gloves without fingertips for the hard working." + desc = "Plain black gloves without fingertips for the hard-working." icon_state = "fingerless" greyscale_colors = "#2f2e31" strip_delay = 40 diff --git a/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/pirate.dm b/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/pirate.dm index bfc4d056ffc..9dd5c215a9f 100644 --- a/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/pirate.dm +++ b/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/pirate.dm @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ /obj/item/clothing/suit/space/pirate name = "modified EVA suit" - desc = "A modified suit to allow space pirates to board shuttles and stations while avoiding the maw of the void. Comes with additional protection, and is lighter to move in." + desc = "A modified suit to allow space pirates to board shuttles and stations while avoiding the maw of the void. Comes with additional protection and is lighter to move in." icon_state = "spacepirate" w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_NORMAL allowed = list(/obj/item/gun, /obj/item/ammo_box, /obj/item/ammo_casing, /obj/item/melee/baton, /obj/item/restraints/handcuffs, /obj/item/tank/internals, /obj/item/melee/energy/sword/pirate, /obj/item/clothing/glasses/eyepatch, /obj/item/reagent_containers/cup/glass/bottle/rum) diff --git a/code/modules/clothing/under/syndicate.dm b/code/modules/clothing/under/syndicate.dm index c16a7816d0e..51533953c18 100644 --- a/code/modules/clothing/under/syndicate.dm +++ b/code/modules/clothing/under/syndicate.dm @@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ /obj/item/clothing/under/syndicate/sniper name = "tactical turtleneck suit" - desc = "A double seamed tactical turtleneck disguised as a civilian grade silk suit. Intended for the most formal operator. The collar is really sharp." + desc = "A double seamed tactical turtleneck disguised as a civilian-grade silk suit. Intended for the most formal operator. The collar is really sharp." icon_state = "tactical_suit" inhand_icon_state = "bl_suit" can_adjust = FALSE