From 728e2c629fdd4e09a425ef23f5ef2d9b4738eeb5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SkyratBot <59378654+SkyratBot@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sun, 29 Jan 2023 03:18:50 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] [MIRROR] Spellchecks a lot of Heretic stuff [MDB IGNORE] (#18999) Spellchecks a lot of Heretic stuff (#72995) ## About The Pull Request Heretic is awesome, but I've always noticed a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes in a lot of its descriptions and explanations, which I feel detract from the otherwise very high quality feeling of heretic. ps. I've never touched tgUI before and it gave me a bunch of unrelated errors while working on some minor fixes in the main heretic screen, while compiling fine. Tell me if I did a bad, thanks! ## Why It's Good For The Game Fixes a bunch of small errors and changes wording around in some cases to be, in my opinion, clearer in meaning. ## Changelog :cl: spellcheck: Heretic has received a minor grammar and spelling check over. Wrong kind of heresy, there. /:cl: Co-authored-by: Unit2E <41054578+Unit2E@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: Unit2E --- .../antagonists/heretic/items/heretic_necks.dm | 2 +- .../antagonists/heretic/items/madness_mask.dm | 2 +- .../antagonists/heretic/knowledge/ash_lore.dm | 2 +- .../antagonists/heretic/knowledge/blade_lore.dm | 8 ++++---- .../antagonists/heretic/knowledge/flesh_lore.dm | 2 +- .../antagonists/heretic/knowledge/rust_lore.dm | 2 +- .../sacrifice_knowledge/sacrifice_knowledge.dm | 2 +- .../heretic/knowledge/side_blade_rust.dm | 2 +- .../antagonists/heretic/knowledge/side_rust_ash.dm | 4 ++-- .../antagonists/heretic/knowledge/void_lore.dm | 14 +++++++------- tgui/packages/tgui/interfaces/AntagInfoHeretic.tsx | 10 +++++----- 11 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/items/heretic_necks.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/items/heretic_necks.dm index e72d2e8172f..341a167f51a 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/items/heretic_necks.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/items/heretic_necks.dm @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ /obj/item/clothing/neck/heretic_focus name = "Amber Focus" - desc = "A amber focusing glass that provides a link to the world beyond. The necklace seems to twitch, but only when you look at it from the corner of your eye." + desc = "An amber focusing glass that provides a link to the world beyond. The necklace seems to twitch, but only when you look at it from the corner of your eye." icon_state = "eldritch_necklace" w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_SMALL resistance_flags = FIRE_PROOF diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/items/madness_mask.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/items/madness_mask.dm index 36cbb426c6f..27a613b0a97 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/items/madness_mask.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/items/madness_mask.dm @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ // The spooky "void" / "abyssal" / "madness" mask for heretics. /obj/item/clothing/mask/madness_mask name = "Abyssal Mask" - desc = "A mask created from the suffering of existance. Looking down it's eyes, you notice something gazing back at you." + desc = "A mask created from the suffering of existence. Looking down it's eyes, you notice something gazing back at you." icon_state = "mad_mask" inhand_icon_state = null w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_SMALL diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/ash_lore.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/ash_lore.dm index b158475f0e9..7274f4c6d8c 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/ash_lore.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/ash_lore.dm @@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ /datum/heretic_knowledge/ultimate/ash_final name = "Ashlord's Rite" desc = "The ascension ritual of the Path of Ash. \ - Bring 3 burning or husked corpses to a transumation rune to complete the ritual. \ + Bring 3 burning or husked corpses to a transmutation rune to complete the ritual. \ When completed, you become a harbinger of flames, gaining two abilites. \ Cascade, which causes a massive, growing ring of fire around you, \ and Oath of Flame, causing you to passively create a ring of flames as you walk. \ diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/blade_lore.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/blade_lore.dm index e2f9e2d9051..fb0943b26d8 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/blade_lore.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/blade_lore.dm @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ */ /datum/heretic_knowledge/limited_amount/starting/base_blade name = "The Cutting Edge" - desc = "Opens up the path of blades to you. \ + desc = "Opens up the Path of Blades to you. \ Allows you to transmute a knife with two bars of silver to create a Sundered Blade. \ You can create up to five at a time." gain_text = "Our great ancestors forged swords and practiced sparring on the eve of great battles." @@ -221,8 +221,8 @@ /datum/heretic_knowledge/spell/realignment name = "Realignment" desc = "Grants you Realignment a spell that wil realign your body rapidly for a short period. \ - During this process, you will rapidly regenerate stamina and stuns, however, you will be unable to attack. \ - This spell can be casted in rapid succession, but doing so will increase the cooldown." + During this process, you will rapidly regenerate stamina and quickly recover from stuns, however, you will be unable to attack. \ + This spell can be cast in rapid succession, but doing so will increase the cooldown." gain_text = "In the flurry of death, he found peace within himself. Despite insurmountable odds, he forged on." next_knowledge = list(/datum/heretic_knowledge/duel_stance) spell_to_add = /datum/action/cooldown/spell/realignment @@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ These blades will protect you from all attacks, but are consumed on use. \ Your Furious Steel spell will also have a shorter cooldown. \ Additionally, you become a master of combat, gaining full wound and stun immunity. \ - Your Sundered Blades deal bonus damage and healing you on attack for a portion of the damage dealt." + Your Sundered Blades deal bonus damage and heal you on attack for a portion of the damage dealt." gain_text = "The Torn Champion is freed! I will become the blade reunited, and with my greater ambition, \ I AM UNMATCHED! A STORM OF STEEL AND SILVER IS UPON US! WITNESS MY ASCENSION!" route = PATH_BLADE diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/flesh_lore.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/flesh_lore.dm index bca5e3d5d20..03ec4e77897 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/flesh_lore.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/flesh_lore.dm @@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ /datum/heretic_knowledge/ultimate/flesh_final name = "Priest's Final Hymn" desc = "The ascension ritual of the Path of Flesh. \ - Bring 4 corpses to a transumation rune to complete the ritual. \ + Bring 4 corpses to a transmutation rune to complete the ritual. \ When completed, you gain the ability to shed your human form \ and become the Lord of the Night, a supremely powerful creature. \ Just the act of transforming causes nearby heathens great fear and trauma. \ diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/rust_lore.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/rust_lore.dm index 239ee89b97d..020b83865d7 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/rust_lore.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/rust_lore.dm @@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ /datum/heretic_knowledge/ultimate/rust_final name = "Rustbringer's Oath" desc = "The ascension ritual of the Path of Rust. \ - Bring 3 corpses to a transumation rune on the bridge of the station to complete the ritual. \ + Bring 3 corpses to a transmutation rune on the bridge of the station to complete the ritual. \ When completed, the ritual site will endlessly spread rust onto any surface, stopping for nothing. \ Additionally, you will become extremely resilient on rust, healing at triple the rate \ and becoming immune to many effects and dangers." diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/sacrifice_knowledge/sacrifice_knowledge.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/sacrifice_knowledge/sacrifice_knowledge.dm index e9911809def..d51a176b940 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/sacrifice_knowledge/sacrifice_knowledge.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/sacrifice_knowledge/sacrifice_knowledge.dm @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ /datum/heretic_knowledge/hunt_and_sacrifice name = "Heartbeat of the Mansus" desc = "Allows you to sacrifice targets to the Mansus by bringing them to a rune in critical (or worse) condition. \ - If you have no targets, stand on a transmutation rune and invoke it to aquire some." + If you have no targets, stand on a transmutation rune and invoke it to acquire some." required_atoms = list(/mob/living/carbon/human = 1) cost = 0 priority = MAX_KNOWLEDGE_PRIORITY // Should be at the top diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/side_blade_rust.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/side_blade_rust.dm index 28fb3acacc2..09c5f6cd8eb 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/side_blade_rust.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/side_blade_rust.dm @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ desc = "Allows you to transmute any ballistic weapon, such as a pipegun, with hide \ from any animal, a plank of wood, and a camera to create the Lionhunter's rifle. \ The Lionhunter's Rifle is a long ranged ballistic weapon with three shots. \ - These shots function as normal, albiet weak high caliber mutitions when fired from \ + These shots function as normal, albeit weak high caliber mutitions when fired from \ close range or at inanimate objects. You can aim the rifle at distant foes, \ causing the shot to deal massively increased damage and hone in on them." gain_text = "I met an old man in an anique shop who wielded a very unusual weapon. \ diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/side_rust_ash.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/side_rust_ash.dm index 2467e854b17..37f29a6472b 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/side_rust_ash.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/side_rust_ash.dm @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ desc = "Allows you to transmute a tank of water and a glass shard into a Flask of Eldritch Essence. \ Eldritch water can be consumed for potent healing, or given to heathens for deadly poisoning." gain_text = "This is an old recipe. The Owl whispered it to me. \ - Created by the Priest - the Liquid that is both was and is not." + Created by the Priest - the Liquid that both was and is not." next_knowledge = list( /datum/heretic_knowledge/rust_regen, /datum/heretic_knowledge/spell/ash_passage, @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ /datum/heretic_knowledge/curse/corrosion name = "Curse of Corrosion" - desc = "Allows you to transmute wirecutters, a pool of vomit, and a heart to cast a curse of sickness on a crew member.\ + desc = "Allows you to transmute wirecutters, a pool of vomit, and a heart to cast a curse of sickness on a crew member. \ While cursed, the victim will repeatedly vomit while their organs will take constant damage. You can additionally supply an item \ that a victim has touched or is covered in the victim's blood to empower the curse." gain_text = "The body of humanity is temporary. Their weaknesses cannot be stopped, like iron falling to rust. Show them all." diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/void_lore.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/void_lore.dm index 30b4da72645..1c4e5dcaa01 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/void_lore.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/void_lore.dm @@ -28,11 +28,11 @@ */ /datum/heretic_knowledge/limited_amount/starting/base_void name = "Glimmer of Winter" - desc = "Opens up the path of void to you. \ + desc = "Opens up the Path of Void to you. \ Allows you to transmute a knife in sub-zero temperatures into a Void Blade. \ You can only create five at a time." //SKYRAT EDIT two to five gain_text = "I feel a shimmer in the air, the air around me gets colder. \ - I start to realize the emptiness of existance. Something's watching me." + I start to realize the emptiness of existence. Something's watching me." next_knowledge = list(/datum/heretic_knowledge/void_grasp) required_atoms = list(/obj/item/knife = 1) result_atoms = list(/obj/item/melee/sickly_blade/void) @@ -77,8 +77,8 @@ /datum/heretic_knowledge/cold_snap name = "Aristocrat's Way" - desc = "Grants you immunity to cold temperatures, and removing your need breathe. \ - You can still take damage due to lack of pressure." + desc = "Grants you immunity to cold temperatures, and removes your need breathe. \ + You can still take damage due to a lack of pressure." gain_text = "I found a thread of cold breath. It lead me to a strange shrine, all made of crystals. \ Translucent and white, a depiction of a nobleman stood before me." next_knowledge = list( @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ /datum/heretic_knowledge/spell/void_cone name = "Void Blast" - desc = "Grants you Void Blast, a spell that shoots out a freezing blast in a code ahead of you, \ + desc = "Grants you Void Blast, a spell that shoots out a freezing blast in a cone in front of you, \ freezing the ground and any victims within." gain_text = "Every door I open racks my body. I am afraid of what is behind them. Someone is expecting me, \ and my legs start to drag. Is that... snow?" @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ name = "Void Pull" desc = "Grants you Void Pull, a spell that pulls all nearby heathens towards you, stunning them briefly." gain_text = "All is fleeting, but what else stays? I'm close to ending what was started. \ - The Aristocrat reveals themself to me again. They tell me I am late. Their pull is immense, I cannot turn back." + The Aristocrat reveals themselves to me again. They tell me I am late. Their pull is immense, I cannot turn back." next_knowledge = list( /datum/heretic_knowledge/ultimate/void_final, /datum/heretic_knowledge/spell/cleave, @@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ /datum/heretic_knowledge/ultimate/void_final name = "Waltz at the End of Time" desc = "The ascension ritual of the Path of Void. \ - Bring 3 corpses to a transumation rune in sub-zero temperatures to complete the ritual. \ + Bring 3 corpses to a transmutation rune in sub-zero temperatures to complete the ritual. \ When completed, causes a violent storm of void snow \ to assault the station, freezing and damaging heathens. Those nearby will be silenced and frozen even quicker. \ Additionally, you will become immune to the effects of space." diff --git a/tgui/packages/tgui/interfaces/AntagInfoHeretic.tsx b/tgui/packages/tgui/interfaces/AntagInfoHeretic.tsx index 56e0ecf00c5..34ed5f5ed07 100644 --- a/tgui/packages/tgui/interfaces/AntagInfoHeretic.tsx +++ b/tgui/packages/tgui/interfaces/AntagInfoHeretic.tsx @@ -136,17 +136,17 @@ const GuideSection = () => { - Follow your Living Heart to find your targets. Bring them back to a  - transmutation rune in critical  - or worse condition to  + transmutation rune in critical or + worse condition to  sacrifice them for  knowledge points. The Mansus{' '} ONLY accepts targets pointed to by the  Living Heart. - - Make yourself a focus to be  - able to cast various advanced spells to assist you in acquire  - harder and harder sacrifices. + - Make yourself a focus to be able + to cast various advanced spells to assist you in acquiring harder and + harder sacrifices. - Accomplish all of your objectives to be able to learn the{' '}