From 7762cf3a6e090abd8f87d35bc57701caa9ae6ced Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SkyratBot <59378654+SkyratBot@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 14 Nov 2020 22:22:32 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] [MIRROR] My Great Big Fat Heretic Proofreading (#1691) * My Great Big Fat Heretic Proofreading (#54705) * My Great Big Fat Heretic Proofreading Co-authored-by: EOBGames <58124831+EOBGames@users.noreply.github.com> --- .../eldritch_cult/eldritch_antag.dm | 10 ++-- .../eldritch_cult/eldritch_book.dm | 2 +- .../eldritch_cult/eldritch_effects.dm | 14 +++--- .../eldritch_cult/eldritch_items.dm | 26 +++++----- .../eldritch_cult/eldritch_knowledge.dm | 12 ++--- .../eldritch_cult/eldritch_magic.dm | 46 ++++++++--------- .../eldritch_cult/knowledge/ash_lore.dm | 50 +++++++++---------- .../eldritch_cult/knowledge/flesh_lore.dm | 46 ++++++++--------- .../eldritch_cult/knowledge/rust_lore.dm | 42 ++++++++-------- 9 files changed, 124 insertions(+), 124 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_antag.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_antag.dm index bc94e6f3ef8..ce6b388ed1b 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_antag.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_antag.dm @@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ to_chat(owner, "You are the Heretic!
\ The old ones gave you these tasks to fulfill:") owner.announce_objectives() - to_chat(owner, "The book whispers, the forbidden knowledge walks once again!
\ - Your book allows you to research abilities, read it very carefully! you cannot undo what has been done!
\ - You gain charges by either collecitng influences or sacrifcing people tracked by the living heart
\ + to_chat(owner, "The book whispers softly, its forbidden knowledge walks this plane once again!
\ + Your book allows you to research abilities. Read it very carefully, for you cannot undo what has been done!
\ + You gain charges by either collecting influences or sacrificing people tracked by the living heart.
\ You can find a basic guide at : https://tgstation13.org/wiki/Heresy_101 ") /datum/antagonist/heretic/on_gain() @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if(mob_override) current = mob_override add_antag_hud(antag_hud_type, antag_hud_name, current) - handle_clown_mutation(current, mob_override ? null : "Knowledge described in the book allowed you to overcome your clownish nature, allowing you to use complex items effectively.") + handle_clown_mutation(current, mob_override ? null : "Ancient knowledge described in the book allows you to overcome your clownish nature, allowing you to use complex items effectively.") current.faction |= "heretics" /datum/antagonist/heretic/remove_innate_effects(mob/living/mob_override) @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ cultiewin = FALSE count++ if(ascended) - parts += "HERETIC HAS ASCENDED!" + parts += "THE HERETIC ASCENDED!" else if(cultiewin) parts += "The heretic was successful!" diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_book.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_book.dm index c14d28b5136..7afaeb1000c 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_book.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_book.dm @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ /obj/item/forbidden_book name = "Codex Cicatrix" - desc = "Book describing the secrets of the veil." + desc = "This book describes the secrets of the veil between worlds." icon = 'icons/obj/eldritch.dmi' icon_state = "book" worn_icon_state = "book" diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_effects.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_effects.dm index 343423f9db8..87ee6344b0b 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_effects.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_effects.dm @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ /obj/effect/eldritch name = "Generic rune" - desc = "Weird combination of shapes and symbols etched into the floor itself. The indentation is filled with thick black tar-like fluid." + desc = "A flowing circle of shapes and runes is etched into the floor, filled with a thick black tar-like fluid." anchored = TRUE icon_state = "" resistance_flags = FIRE_PROOF | UNACIDABLE | ACID_PROOF @@ -97,10 +97,10 @@ return is_in_use = FALSE - to_chat(user,"Your ritual failed! You used either wrong components or are missing something important!") + to_chat(user,"Your ritual failed! You either used the wrong components or are missing something important!") /obj/effect/eldritch/big - name = "Transmutation rune" + name = "transmutation rune" icon = 'icons/effects/96x96.dmi' icon_state = "eldritch_rune1" pixel_x = -32 //So the big ol' 96x96 sprite shows up right @@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ arm.dismember() qdel(arm) else - to_chat(human_user,"You pull your hand away from the hole as the eldritch energy flails trying to catch onto the existance itself!") + to_chat(human_user,"You pull your hand away from the hole as the eldritch energy flails trying to latch onto existance itself!") /obj/effect/broken_illusion/attack_tk(mob/user) @@ -251,12 +251,12 @@ . = ..() if(!IS_HERETIC(user) && ishuman(user)) var/mob/living/carbon/human/human_user = user - to_chat(human_user,"Your brain hurts when you look at this!") + to_chat(human_user,"Your mind burns as you stare at the tear!") human_user.adjustOrganLoss(ORGAN_SLOT_BRAIN,10,190) SEND_SIGNAL(human_user, COMSIG_ADD_MOOD_EVENT, "gates_of_mansus", /datum/mood_event/gates_of_mansus) /obj/effect/reality_smash - name = "/improper reality smash" + name = "reality smash" icon = 'icons/effects/eldritch.dmi' anchored = TRUE resistance_flags = FIRE_PROOF | UNACIDABLE | ACID_PROOF @@ -310,4 +310,4 @@ var/static/list/prefix = list("Omniscient","Thundering","Enlightening","Intrusive","Rejectful","Atomized","Subtle","Rising","Lowering","Fleeting","Towering","Blissful","Arrogant","Threatening","Peaceful","Aggressive") var/static/list/postfix = list("Flaw","Presence","Crack","Heat","Cold","Memory","Reminder","Breeze","Grasp","Sight","Whisper","Flow","Touch","Veil","Thought","Imperfection","Blemish","Blush") - name = pick(prefix) + " " + pick(postfix) + name = "\improper" + pick(prefix) + " " + pick(postfix) diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_items.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_items.dm index f512f0a3d99..c4ac866526e 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_items.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_items.dm @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ /obj/item/living_heart name = "Living Heart" - desc = "Link to the worlds beyond." + desc = "A link to the worlds beyond." icon = 'icons/obj/eldritch.dmi' icon_state = "living_heart" w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_SMALL @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ if(0 to 15) to_chat(user,"[target.real_name] is near you. They are to the [dir2text(dir)] of you!") if(16 to 31) - to_chat(user,"[target.real_name] is somewhere in your vicinty. They are to the [dir2text(dir)] of you!") + to_chat(user,"[target.real_name] is somewhere in your vicinity. They are to the [dir2text(dir)] of you!") if(32 to 127) to_chat(user,"[target.real_name] is far away from you. They are to the [dir2text(dir)] of you!") else @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ /datum/action/innate/heretic_shatter name = "Shattering Offer" - desc = "By breaking your blade you are noticed by the hill or rust and are granted an escape from a dire sitatuion. (Teleports you to a random safe z turf on your current z level but destroys your blade.)" + desc = "By breaking your blade, you will be granted salvation from a dire situation. (Teleports you to a random safe turf on your current z level, but destroys your blade.)" background_icon_state = "bg_ecult" button_icon_state = "shatter" icon_icon = 'icons/mob/actions/actions_ecult.dmi' @@ -57,12 +57,12 @@ /datum/action/innate/heretic_shatter/Activate() var/turf/safe_turf = find_safe_turf(zlevels = sword.z, extended_safety_checks = TRUE) do_teleport(holder,safe_turf,forceMove = TRUE) - to_chat(holder," You feel a gust of energy flow through your body, Rusted Hills heard your call...") + to_chat(holder,"You feel a gust of energy flow through your body... the Rusted Hills heard your call...") qdel(sword) /obj/item/melee/sickly_blade - name = "Sickly blade" + name = "\improper Sickly Blade" desc = "A sickly green crescent blade, decorated with an ornamental eye. You feel like you're being watched..." icon = 'icons/obj/eldritch.dmi' icon_state = "eldritch_blade" @@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ /obj/item/melee/sickly_blade/attack(mob/living/M, mob/living/user) if(!(IS_HERETIC(user) || IS_HERETIC_MONSTER(user))) - to_chat(user,"You feel a pulse of some alien intellect lash out at your mind!") + to_chat(user,"You feel a pulse of alien intellect lash out at your mind!") var/mob/living/carbon/human/human_user = user human_user.AdjustParalyzed(5 SECONDS) return FALSE @@ -112,26 +112,26 @@ eldritch_knowledge_datum.on_eldritch_blade(target,user,proximity_flag,click_parameters) /obj/item/melee/sickly_blade/rust - name = "Rusted Blade" - desc = "This crescent blade is decrepit, wasting to dust. Yet still it bites, catching flesh with jagged, rotten teeth." + name = "\improper Rusted Blade" + desc = "This crescent blade is decrepit, wasting to rust. Yet still it bites, ripping flesh and bone with jagged, rotten teeth." icon_state = "rust_blade" inhand_icon_state = "rust_blade" /obj/item/melee/sickly_blade/ash - name = "Ashen Blade" + name = "\improper Ashen Blade" desc = "Molten and unwrought, a hunk of metal warped to cinders and slag. Unmade, it aspires to be more than it is, and shears soot-filled wounds with a blunt edge." icon_state = "ash_blade" inhand_icon_state = "ash_blade" /obj/item/melee/sickly_blade/flesh name = "Flesh Blade" - desc = "A crescent blade born from a fleshwarped creature. Keenly aware, it seeks to spread to others the excruitations it has endured from dread origins." + desc = "A crescent blade born from a fleshwarped creature. Keenly aware, it seeks to spread to others the suffering it has endured from its dreadful origins." icon_state = "flesh_blade" inhand_icon_state = "flesh_blade" /obj/item/clothing/neck/eldritch_amulet name = "Warm Eldritch Medallion" - desc = "A strange medallion. Peering through the crystalline surface, the world around you melts away. You see your own beating heart, and the pulse of a thousand others." + desc = "A strange medallion. Peering through the crystalline surface, the world around you melts away. You see your own beating heart, and the pulsing of a thousand others." icon = 'icons/obj/eldritch.dmi' icon_state = "eye_medalion" w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_SMALL @@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ /obj/item/clothing/neck/eldritch_amulet/piercing name = "Piercing Eldritch Medallion" - desc = "A strange medallion. Peering through the crystalline surface, the light refracts into new and terrifying spectrums of color. You see yourself, reflected off cascading mirrors, warped into improbable shapes." + desc = "A strange medallion. Peering through the crystalline surface, the light refracts into new and terrifying spectrums of color. You see yourself, reflected off cascading mirrors, warped into impossible shapes." trait = TRAIT_XRAY_VISION /obj/item/clothing/head/hooded/cult_hoodie/eldritch @@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ /obj/item/reagent_containers/glass/beaker/eldritch name = "flask of eldritch essence" - desc = "Toxic to the close minded. Healing to those with knowledge of the beyond." + desc = "Toxic to the closed minded, yet refreshing to those with knowledge of the beyond." icon = 'icons/obj/eldritch.dmi' icon_state = "eldrich_flask" list_reagents = list(/datum/reagent/eldritch = 50) diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_knowledge.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_knowledge.dm index dde0835cb93..21d63e06a35 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_knowledge.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_knowledge.dm @@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ compiled_list[human_to_check.real_name] = human_to_check if(compiled_list.len == 0) - to_chat(user, "The items don't posses required fingerprints or dna.") + to_chat(user, "These items don't possess the required fingerprints or DNA.") return FALSE var/chosen_mob = input("Select the person you wish to curse","Your target") as null|anything in sortList(compiled_list, /proc/cmp_mob_realname_dsc) @@ -225,9 +225,9 @@ /////////////// /datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/basic - name = "Break of dawn" - desc = "Starts your journey in the mansus. Allows you to select a target using a living heart on a transmutation rune." - gain_text = "Another day at a meaningless job. You feel a shimmer around you, as a realization of something weird in your backpack unfolds. You look at it, unknowingly opening a new chapter in your life." + name = "Break of Dawn" + desc = "Starts your journey in the Mansus. Allows you to select a target using a living heart on a transmutation rune." + gain_text = "Another day at a meaningless job. You feel a shimmer around you, as a realization of something strange in your backpack unfolds. You look at it, unknowingly opening a new chapter in your life." next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_rust,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_ash,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_flesh) cost = 0 spell_to_add = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/touch/mansus_grasp @@ -285,7 +285,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/living_heart name = "Living Heart" desc = "Allows you to create additional living hearts, using a heart, a pool of blood and a poppy. Living hearts when used on a transmutation rune will grant you a person to hunt and sacrifice on the rune. Every sacrifice gives you an additional charge in the book." - gain_text = "Gates of mansus open up to your mind." + gain_text = "The Gates of Mansus open up to your mind." cost = 0 required_atoms = list(/obj/item/organ/heart,/obj/effect/decal/cleanable/blood,/obj/item/reagent_containers/food/snacks/grown/poppy) result_atoms = list(/obj/item/living_heart) @@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/codex_cicatrix name = "Codex Cicatrix" desc = "Allows you to create a spare Codex Cicatrix if you have lost one, using a bible, human skin, a pen and a pair of eyes." - gain_text = "Their hand is at your throats, yet you see Them not." + gain_text = "Their hand is at your throat, yet you see Them not." cost = 0 required_atoms = list(/obj/item/organ/eyes,/obj/item/stack/sheet/animalhide/human,/obj/item/storage/book/bible,/obj/item/pen) result_atoms = list(/obj/item/forbidden_book) diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_magic.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_magic.dm index 9202a792c99..1ee726ecc54 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_magic.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/eldritch_magic.dm @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/ethereal_jaunt/shift/ash - name = "Ashen passage" - desc = "Low range spell allowing you to pass through a few walls." + name = "Ashen Passage" + desc = "A short range spell allowing you to pass unimpeded through a few walls." school = "transmutation" invocation = "ASH'N P'SSG'" invocation_type = INVOCATION_WHISPER @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/touch/mansus_grasp name = "Mansus Grasp" - desc = "Touch spell that let's you channel the power of the old gods through you." + desc = "A touch spell that lets you channel the power of the Old Gods through your grip." hand_path = /obj/item/melee/touch_attack/mansus_fist school = "evocation" charge_max = 100 @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ /obj/item/melee/touch_attack/mansus_fist name = "Mansus Grasp" - desc = "A sinister looking aura that distorts the flow of reality around it. Causes knockdown, major stamina damage aswell as some Brute. It gains additional beneficial effects with certain knowledges you can research." + desc = "A sinister looking aura that distorts the flow of reality around it. Causes knockdown and major stamina damage in addition to some brute. It gains additional beneficial effects as you expand your knowledge of the Mansus." icon_state = "disintegrate" inhand_icon_state = "disintegrate" catchphrase = "R'CH T'H TR'TH" @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ if(ishuman(target)) var/mob/living/carbon/human/tar = target if(tar.anti_magic_check()) - tar.visible_message("Spell bounces off of [target]!","The spell bounces off of you!") + tar.visible_message("The spell bounces off of [target]!","The spell bounces off of you!") return ..() var/datum/mind/M = user.mind var/datum/antagonist/heretic/cultie = M.has_antag_datum(/datum/antagonist/heretic) @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/aoe_turf/rust_conversion name = "Aggressive Spread" - desc = "Spreads rust onto nearby turfs." + desc = "Spreads rust onto nearby surfaces." school = "transmutation" charge_max = 300 //twice as long as mansus grasp clothes_req = FALSE @@ -100,12 +100,12 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/aoe_turf/rust_conversion/small name = "Rust Conversion" - desc = "Spreads rust onto nearby turfs." + desc = "Spreads rust onto nearby surfaces." range = 2 /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/pointed/blood_siphon name = "Blood Siphon" - desc = "Touch spell that heals you while damaging the enemy, has a chance to transfer wounds between you and your enemy." + desc = "A touch spell that heals your wounds while damaging the enemy. It has a chance to transfer wounds between you and your enemy." school = "evocation" charge_max = 150 clothes_req = FALSE @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ if(ishuman(target)) var/mob/living/carbon/human/tar = target if(tar.anti_magic_check()) - tar.visible_message("Spell bounces off of [target]!","The spell bounces off of you!") + tar.visible_message("The spell bounces off of [target]!","The spell bounces off of you!") return ..() var/mob/living/carbon/carbon_user = user if(isliving(target)) @@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/projectile/dumbfire/rust_wave name = "Patron's Reach" - desc = "Channels energy into your gauntlet - firing it results in a wave of rust being created in it's wake." + desc = "Channels energy into your gauntlet- unleashing it creates a wave of rust in its wake." proj_type = /obj/projectile/magic/spell/rust_wave charge_max = 350 clothes_req = FALSE @@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/pointed/cleave name = "Cleave" - desc = "Causes severe bleeding on a target and people around them" + desc = "Causes severe bleeding on a target and several targets around them." school = "transmutation" charge_max = 350 clothes_req = FALSE @@ -265,8 +265,8 @@ charge_max = 650 /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/pointed/touch/mad_touch - name = "Touch of madness" - desc = "Touch spell that drains your enemies sanity." + name = "Touch of Madness" + desc = "A touch spell that drains your enemy's sanity." school = "transmutation" charge_max = 150 clothes_req = FALSE @@ -292,7 +292,7 @@ if(ishuman(targets)) var/mob/living/carbon/human/tar = target if(tar.anti_magic_check()) - tar.visible_message("Spell bounces off of [target]!","The spell bounces off of you!") + tar.visible_message("The spell bounces off of [target]!","The spell bounces off of you!") return if(target.mind && !target.mind.has_antag_datum(/datum/antagonist/heretic)) to_chat(user,"[target.name] has been cursed!") @@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/pointed/ash_final name = "Nightwatcher's Rite" - desc = "Powerful spell that releases 5 streams of fire away from you." + desc = "A powerful spell that releases 5 streams of fire away from you." school = "transmutation" invocation = "F'RE" invocation_type = INVOCATION_WHISPER @@ -346,13 +346,13 @@ for(var/mob/living/L in T.contents) if(L.anti_magic_check()) - L.visible_message("Spell bounces off of [L]!","The spell bounces off of you!") + L.visible_message("The spell bounces off of [L]!","The spell bounces off of you!") continue if(L in hit_list || L == source) continue hit_list += L L.adjustFireLoss(20) - to_chat(L, "You're hit by [source]'s fire breath!") + to_chat(L, "You're hit by [source]'s eldritch flames!") new /obj/effect/hotspot(T) T.hotspot_expose(700,50,1) @@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/aoe_turf/fire_cascade name = "Fire Cascade" - desc = "creates hot turfs around you." + desc = "Heats the air around you." school = "transmutation" charge_max = 300 //twice as long as mansus grasp clothes_req = FALSE @@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/fire_sworn name = "Oath of Fire" - desc = "For a minute you will passively create a ring of fire around you." + desc = "For a minute, you will passively create a ring of fire around you." invocation = "FL'MS" invocation_type = INVOCATION_WHISPER clothes_req = FALSE @@ -466,7 +466,7 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/worm_contract name = "Force Contract" - desc = "Forces all the worm parts to collapse onto a single turf" + desc = "Forces your body to contract onto a single tile." invocation_type = "none" clothes_req = FALSE action_background_icon_state = "bg_ecult" @@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/fiery_rebirth name = "Nightwatcher's Rebirth" - desc = "Drains nearby alive people that are engulfed in flames. It heals 10 of each damage type per person. If a person is in critical condition it finishes them off." + desc = "Drains nearby alive people that are engulfed in flames. It heals 10 of each damage type per person. If a target is in critical condition it drains the last of their vitality, killing them." invocation = "GL'RY T' TH' N'GHT'W'TCH'ER" invocation_type = INVOCATION_WHISPER clothes_req = FALSE @@ -528,7 +528,7 @@ /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/pointed/manse_link name = "Mansus Link" - desc = "Piercing through reality, connecting minds. This spell allows you to add people to a mansus net, allowing them to communicate with eachother" + desc = "Piercing through reality, connecting minds. This spell allows you to add people to a Mansus Net, allowing them to communicate with each other from afar." school = "transmutation" charge_max = 300 clothes_req = FALSE @@ -562,7 +562,7 @@ /datum/action/innate/mansus_speech name = "Mansus Link" - desc = "Send a psychic message to everyone connected to your mansus link." + desc = "Send a psychic message to everyone connected to your Mansus Net." button_icon_state = "link_speech" icon_icon = 'icons/mob/actions/actions_slime.dmi' background_icon_state = "bg_ecult" diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/ash_lore.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/ash_lore.dm index ebc7ff6b5ab..53f6a607145 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/ash_lore.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/ash_lore.dm @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_ash - name = "Nightwatcher's secret" - desc = "Opens up the path of ash to you. Allows you to transmute a match with a kitchen knife or it's derivatives into an ashen blade." - gain_text = "City guard knows their watch. If you ask them at night they may tell you about the ashy lantern." + name = "Nightwatcher's Secret" + desc = "Opens up the Path of Ash to you. Allows you to transmute a match with a kitchen knife, or its derivatives, into an Ashen Blade." + gain_text = "The City Guard know their watch. If you ask them at night, they may tell you about the ashy lantern." banned_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_rust,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_flesh,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/rust_final,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/flesh_final) next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/ashen_grasp) required_atoms = list(/obj/item/kitchen/knife,/obj/item/match) @@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/ashen_shift name = "Ashen Shift" - gain_text = "The Nightwatcher was the first of them, his treason has started it all." - desc = "Short range jaunt that can help you escape from bad situations." + gain_text = "The Nightwatcher was the first of them, his treason started it all." + desc = "A short range jaunt that can help you escape from bad situations." cost = 1 spell_to_add = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/ethereal_jaunt/shift/ash next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/ash_mark,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/essence,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/ashen_eyes) @@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/ashen_grasp name = "Grasp of Ash" - gain_text = "He well knew how to walk between the planes." - desc = "Empowers your mansus grasp to blind opponents you touch with it." + gain_text = "He knew how to walk between the planes." + desc = "Empowers your Mansus Grasp to blind opponents you touch with it." cost = 1 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/ashen_shift) route = PATH_ASH @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/ashen_eyes name = "Ashen Eyes" - gain_text = "Piercing eyes may guide me through the mundane." + gain_text = "Piercing eyes, guide me through the mundane." desc = "Allows you to craft thermal vision amulet by transmutating eyes with a glass shard." cost = 1 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/ashen_shift,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_ghoul) @@ -61,9 +61,9 @@ result_atoms = list(/obj/item/clothing/neck/eldritch_amulet) /datum/eldritch_knowledge/ash_mark - name = "Mark of ash" - gain_text = "Nightwatcher was a very particular man, always watching, in the night. In spite of his duty, he has tranced through the manse, with his blazing lantern." - desc = "Your mansus grasp now applies ash mark on hit. Use your sickly blade to proc the mark. Mark of Ash causes stamina damage, and fire loss, and spreads to a nearby carbon. Damage decreases with how many times the mark has spread." + name = "Mark of Ash" + gain_text = "The Nightwatcher was a very particular man, always watching in the dead of night. But in spite of his duty, he regularly tranced through the manse with his blazing lantern held high." + desc = "Your Mansus Grasp now applies the Mark of Ash on hit. Attack the afflicted with your Sickly Blade to detonate the mark. Upon detonation, the Mark of Ash causes stamina damage and burn damage, and spreads to an additional nearby opponent. The damage decreases with each spread." cost = 2 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/curse/blindness) banned_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_mark,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_mark) @@ -77,9 +77,9 @@ living_target.apply_status_effect(/datum/status_effect/eldritch/ash,5) /datum/eldritch_knowledge/curse/blindness - name = "Curse of blindness" - gain_text = "He walks through the world, unnoticed by the masses." - desc = "Curse someone with 2 minutes of complete blindness by sacrificing a pair of eyes, a screwdriver, with an object that the victim has touched with their bare hands." + name = "Curse of Blindness" + gain_text = "He walks the world, unnoticed by the masses." + desc = "Curse someone with 2 minutes of complete blindness by sacrificing a pair of eyes and a screwdriver with an object that the victim has touched with their bare hands." cost = 1 required_atoms = list(/obj/item/organ/eyes,/obj/item/screwdriver) next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/curse/corrosion,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/ash_blade_upgrade,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/curse/paralysis) @@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/flame_birth name = "Flame Birth" - gain_text = "Nightwatcher was a man of principles, and yet he arose from the chaos he vowed to protect from." + gain_text = "The Nightwatcher was a man of principles, and yet his power arose from the chaos he vowed to combat." desc = "Short range spell that allows you to curse someone with massive sanity loss." cost = 1 spell_to_add = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/fiery_rebirth @@ -104,9 +104,9 @@ route = PATH_ASH /datum/eldritch_knowledge/ash_blade_upgrade - name = "Fiery blade" - gain_text = "He has swung and swung, the ash fell from the skies, his city... his people, all gone, and yet he was alive in his charred body." - desc = "Your blade of choice will now add firestacks." + name = "Fiery Blade" + gain_text = "Blade in hand, he swung and swung as the ash fell from the skies. His city, his people... all burnt to cinders, and yet life still remained in his charred body." + desc = "Your blade of choice will now light your enemies ablaze." cost = 2 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/flame_birth) banned_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_blade_upgrade,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_blade_upgrade) @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/curse/corrosion name = "Curse of Corrosion" gain_text = "Cursed land, cursed man, cursed mind." - desc = "Curse someone for 2 minutes of vomiting and major organ damage. Using a wirecutter, a spill of blood, a heart, left arm and a right arm, and an item that the victim touched with their bare hands." + desc = "Curse someone for 2 minutes of vomiting and major organ damage. Using a wirecutter, a pool of blood, a heart, left arm and a right arm, and an item that the victim touched with their bare hands." cost = 1 required_atoms = list(/obj/item/wirecutters,/obj/effect/decal/cleanable/vomit,/obj/item/organ/heart) next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/curse/blindness,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/area_conversion) @@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/curse/paralysis name = "Curse of Paralysis" gain_text = "Corrupt their flesh, make them bleed." - desc = "Curse someone for 5 minutes of inability to walk. Using a knife, pool of blood, left leg, right leg, a hatchet and an item that the victim touched with their bare hands. " + desc = "Curse someone for 5 minutes of inability to walk. Sacrifice a knife, a pool of blood, a pair of legs, a hatchet and an item that the victim touched with their bare hands. " cost = 1 required_atoms = list(/obj/item/bodypart/l_leg,/obj/item/bodypart/r_leg,/obj/item/hatchet) next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/curse/blindness,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/summon/raw_prophet) @@ -159,23 +159,23 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/cleave name = "Blood Cleave" - gain_text = "At first i didn't know these instruments of war, but the priest told me to use them." + gain_text = "At first I didn't understand these instruments of war, but the priest told me to use them regardless. Soon, he said, I would know them well." desc = "Gives AOE spell that causes heavy bleeding and blood loss." cost = 1 spell_to_add = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/pointed/cleave next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/entropic_plume,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/flame_birth) /datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/ash_final - name = "Ashlord's rite" - gain_text = "Nightwacher has found the ascension and shares it between the men! For I am one with the fire, WATCH ME RISE!" - desc = "Bring 3 corpses onto a transmutation rune, you will become immune to fire ,space ,cold and other enviromental hazards and become overall sturdier to all other damages. You will gain a spell that passively creates ring of fire around you as well ,as you will gain a powerful abiltiy that let's you create a wave of flames all around you." + name = "Ashlord's Rite" + gain_text = "The Nightwatcher found the rite and shared it amongst mankind! For now I am one with the fire, WITNESS MY ASCENSION!" + desc = "Bring 3 corpses onto a transmutation rune, you will become immune to fire, the vacuum of space, cold and other enviromental hazards and become overall sturdier to all other damages. You will gain a spell that passively creates ring of fire around you as well ,as you will gain a powerful ability that lets you create a wave of flames all around you." required_atoms = list(/mob/living/carbon/human) cost = 3 route = PATH_ASH var/list/trait_list = list(TRAIT_RESISTHEAT,TRAIT_NOBREATH,TRAIT_RESISTCOLD,TRAIT_RESISTHIGHPRESSURE,TRAIT_RESISTLOWPRESSURE,TRAIT_NOFIRE) /datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/ash_final/on_finished_recipe(mob/living/user, list/atoms, loc) - priority_announce("$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@# Fear the blaze, for Ashlord [user.real_name] has come! $^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#","#$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#", 'sound/ai/spanomalies.ogg') + priority_announce("$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@# Fear the blaze, for the Ashlord, [user.real_name] has ascended! The flames shall consume all! $^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#","#$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#", 'sound/ai/spanomalies.ogg') user.mind.AddSpell(new /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/aoe_turf/fire_cascade/big) user.mind.AddSpell(new /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/fire_sworn) var/mob/living/carbon/human/H = user diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/flesh_lore.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/flesh_lore.dm index aceaf6a3be2..4ff756bed16 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/flesh_lore.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/flesh_lore.dm @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_flesh name = "Principle of Hunger" - desc = "Opens up the path of flesh to you. Allows you to transmute a pool of blood with a kitchen knife into a Flesh Blade" - gain_text = "Hundred's of us starved, but I.. I found the strength in my greed." + desc = "Opens up the Path of Flesh to you. Allows you to transmute a pool of blood with a kitchen knife, or its derivatives, into a Flesh Blade." + gain_text = "Hundreds of us starved, but not me... I found strength in my greed." banned_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_ash,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_rust,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/ash_final,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/rust_final) next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_grasp) required_atoms = list(/obj/item/kitchen/knife,/obj/effect/decal/cleanable/blood) @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_ghoul name = "Imperfect Ritual" desc = "Allows you to resurrect the dead as voiceless dead by sacrificing them on the transmutation rune with a poppy. Voiceless dead are mute and have 50 HP. You can only have 2 at a time." - gain_text = "I found notes.. notes of a ritual, it was unfinished and yet i still did it." + gain_text = "I found notes of a dark ritual, unfinished... yet still, I pushed forward." cost = 1 required_atoms = list(/mob/living/carbon/human,/obj/item/reagent_containers/food/snacks/grown/poppy) next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_mark,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/armor,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/ashen_eyes) @@ -66,8 +66,8 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_grasp name = "Grasp of Flesh" - gain_text = "My new found desire, it drove me to do great things! The Priest said." - desc = "Empowers your mansus grasp to be able to create a single ghoul out of a dead person. Ghouls have only 25 HP and look like husks." + gain_text = "My new found desires drove me to greater and greater heights." + desc = "Empowers your mansus grasp to be able to create a single ghoul out of a dead person. Ghouls have only 25 HP and look like husks to the heathens' eyes." cost = 1 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_ghoul) var/ghoul_amt = 1 @@ -134,9 +134,9 @@ UnregisterSignal(source, COMSIG_LIVING_DEATH) /datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_mark - name = "Mark of flesh" - gain_text = "I saw them, the marked ones. The screams.. the silence." - desc = "Your mansus grasp now applies mark of flesh status effect. To proc the mark, use your sickly blade on the marked. Mark of flesh when procced causeds additional bleeding." + name = "Mark of Flesh" + gain_text = "I saw them, the marked ones. The screams... the silence." + desc = "Your Mansus Grasp now applies the Mark of Flesh on hit. Attack the afflicted with your Sickly Blade to detonate the mark. Upon detonation, the Mark of Flesh causes additional bleeding." cost = 2 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/summon/raw_prophet) banned_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_mark,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/ash_mark) @@ -151,8 +151,8 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_blade_upgrade name = "Bleeding Steel" - gain_text = "It rained blood, that's when i understood the Marchal's advice." - desc = "Your blade will now cause additional bleeding." + gain_text = "And then, blood rained from the heavens. That's when I finally understood the Marshal's teachings." + desc = "Your Sickly Blade will now cause additional bleeding." cost = 2 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/summon/stalker) banned_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/ash_blade_upgrade,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_blade_upgrade) @@ -168,8 +168,8 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/summon/raw_prophet name = "Raw Ritual" - gain_text = "Uncanny man, walks alone in the valley between the worlds , I was able to call his aid." - desc = "You can now summon a Raw Prophet using eyes, a left arm and a pool of blood. Raw prophets have increased seeing range, as well as Xray. But are very fragile and weak." + gain_text = "The Uncanny Man, who walks alone in the valley between the worlds... I was able to summon his aid." + desc = "You can now summon a Raw Prophet by transmutating a pair of eyes, a left arm and a pool of blood. Raw prophets have increased seeing range, as well as X-Ray vision, but they are very fragile." cost = 1 required_atoms = list(/obj/item/organ/eyes,/obj/effect/decal/cleanable/blood,/obj/item/bodypart/l_arm) mob_to_summon = /mob/living/simple_animal/hostile/eldritch/raw_prophet @@ -178,8 +178,8 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/summon/stalker name = "Lonely Ritual" - gain_text = "I was able to combine my greed and desires to summon an eldritch beast i have not seen before. Ever shapeshifting mass of flesh, it well knew my goals." - desc = "You can now summon a Stalker using a pair of eyes , a candle, a pen and a piece of paper. Stalkers can shapeshift into harmeless animals and get close to the victim." + gain_text = "I was able to combine my greed and desires to summon an eldritch beast I had never seen before. An ever shapeshifting mass of flesh, it knew well my goals." + desc = "You can now summon a Stalker by transmutating a pair of eyes, a candle, a pen and a piece of paper. Stalkers can shapeshift into harmless animals to get close to the victim." cost = 1 required_atoms = list(/obj/item/pen,/obj/item/organ/eyes,/obj/item/candle,/obj/item/paper) mob_to_summon = /mob/living/simple_animal/hostile/eldritch/stalker @@ -188,8 +188,8 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/summon/ashy name = "Ashen Ritual" - gain_text = "I combined principle of hunger with desire of destruction. The Nightwatcher has noticed me." - desc = "You can now summon an Ash Man by transmutating a pile of ash , a head and a book." + gain_text = "I combined my principle of hunger with my desire for destruction. And the Nightwatcher knew my name." + desc = "You can now summon an Ash Man by transmutating a pile of ash, a head and a book." cost = 1 required_atoms = list(/obj/effect/decal/cleanable/ash,/obj/item/bodypart/head,/obj/item/book) mob_to_summon = /mob/living/simple_animal/hostile/eldritch/ash_spirit @@ -197,8 +197,8 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/summon/rusty name = "Rusted Ritual" - gain_text = "I combined principle of hunger with desire of corruption. The Rusted Hills call my name." - desc = "You can now summon a Rust Walker transmutating vomit pool, a head and a book." + gain_text = "I combined my principle of hunger with my desire for corruption. And the Rusted Hills called my name." + desc = "You can now summon a Rust Walker by transmutating a vomit pool, a severed head and a book." cost = 1 required_atoms = list(/obj/effect/decal/cleanable/vomit,/obj/item/book,/obj/item/bodypart/head) mob_to_summon = /mob/living/simple_animal/hostile/eldritch/rust_spirit @@ -206,23 +206,23 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/blood_siphon name = "Blood Siphon" - gain_text = "Our blood is all the same after all, the Marshal told me." - desc = "You gain a spell that drains enemies health and restores yours." + gain_text = "No matter the man, we bleed all the same. That's what the Marshal told me." + desc = "You gain a spell that drains health from your enemies to restores your own." cost = 1 spell_to_add = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/pointed/blood_siphon next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/summon/raw_prophet,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/area_conversion) /datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/flesh_final name = "Priest's Final Hymn" - gain_text = "Man of this world. Hear me! For the time of the lord of arms has come! Emperor of Flesh guides my army!" - desc = "Bring 3 bodies onto a transmutation rune to gain the ability of shedding your human form, and gaining untold power." + gain_text = "Men of this world. Hear me, for the time of the Lord of Arms has come! The Emperor of Flesh guides my army!" + desc = "Bring 3 bodies onto a transmutation rune to shed your human form and ascend to untold power." required_atoms = list(/mob/living/carbon/human) cost = 3 route = PATH_FLESH /datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/flesh_final/on_finished_recipe(mob/living/user, list/atoms, loc) . = ..() - priority_announce("$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@# Ever coiling vortex, Reality unfoiled. KING OF ARMS [user.real_name] has come! Fear the ever twisting hand! $^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#","#$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#", 'sound/ai/spanomalies.ogg') + priority_announce("$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@# Ever coiling vortex. Reality unfolded. THE LORD OF ARMS, [user.real_name] has ascended! Fear the ever twisting hand! $^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#","#$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#", 'sound/ai/spanomalies.ogg') user.mind.AddSpell(new /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/shed_human_form) if(!ishuman(user)) return diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/rust_lore.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/rust_lore.dm index 9b4caaec8bf..7435496f5db 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/rust_lore.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/eldritch_cult/knowledge/rust_lore.dm @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_rust name = "Blacksmith's Tale" - desc = "Opens up the path of rust to you. Allows you to transmute a knife with any trash item into a Rusty Blade." - gain_text = "Let me tell you a story, blacksmith said as he glazed into his rusty blade." + desc = "Opens up the Path of Rust to you. Allows you to transmute a kitchen knife, or its derivatives, with any trash item into a Rusty Blade." + gain_text = "'Let me tell you a story', said the Blacksmith, as he gazed deep into his rusty blade." banned_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_ash,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/base_flesh,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/ash_final,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/flesh_final) next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_fist) required_atoms = list(/obj/item/kitchen/knife,/obj/item/trash) @@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ route = PATH_RUST /datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_fist - name = "Grasp of rust" - desc = "Empowers your mansus grasp to deal 500 damage to non-living matter and rust any turf it touches. Destroys already rusted turfs." - gain_text = "Rust grows on the ceiling of the mansus." + name = "Grasp of Rust" + desc = "Empowers your Mansus Grasp to deal 500 damage to non-living matter and rust any surface it touches. Already rusted surfaces are destroyed." + gain_text = "On the ceiling of the Mansus, rust grows as moss does on a stone." cost = 1 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_regen) var/rust_force = 500 @@ -35,8 +35,8 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/area_conversion name = "Agressive Spread" - desc = "Spreads rust to nearby turfs. Destroys already rusted walls." - gain_text = "All men wise know not to touch the bound king." + desc = "Spreads rust to nearby surfaces. Already rusted surfaces are destroyed." + gain_text = "All wise men know well not to touch the Bound King." cost = 1 spell_to_add = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/aoe_turf/rust_conversion next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_blade_upgrade,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/curse/corrosion,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/blood_siphon) @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_regen name = "Leeching Walk" desc = "Passively heals you when you are on rusted tiles." - gain_text = "The strength was unparallel, it was unnatural. Blacksmith was smiling." + gain_text = "The strength was unparalleled, unnatural. The Blacksmith was smiling." cost = 1 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_mark,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/armor,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/essence) route = PATH_RUST @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_mark name = "Mark of Rust" - desc = "Your mansus grasp now applies a rust mark. Rust mark has a chance to deal between 0 to 200 damage to 75% of enemies items. To Detonate the mark use your eldritch blade on it." + desc = "Your Mansus Grasp now applies the Mark of Rust on hit. Attack the afflicted with your Sickly Blade to detonate the mark. Upon detonation, the Mark of Rust has a chance to deal between 0 to 200 damage to 75% of your enemy's held items." gain_text = "Rusted Hills help those in dire need at a cost." cost = 2 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/area_conversion) @@ -80,9 +80,9 @@ living_target.apply_status_effect(/datum/status_effect/eldritch/rust) /datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_blade_upgrade - name = "Toxic blade" - gain_text = "Let the blade guide you through the flesh." - desc = "Your blade of choice will now add toxin to enemies bloodstream." + name = "Toxic Blade" + gain_text = "The Blade will guide you through the flesh, should you let it." + desc = "Your blade of choice will now poison your enemies on hit." cost = 2 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/entropic_plume) banned_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/ash_blade_upgrade,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_blade_upgrade) @@ -96,26 +96,26 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/entropic_plume name = "Entropic Plume" - desc = "You can now send a befuddling plume that blinds, poisons and makes enemies strike each other. Also converts the area into rust." - gain_text = "Messenger's of hope fear the rustbringer!" + desc = "You can now send a disorienting plume of pure entropy that blinds, poisons and makes enemies strike each other. It also rusts any tiles it affects." + gain_text = "Messengers of Hope, fear the Rustbringer!" cost = 1 spell_to_add = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/cone/staggered/entropic_plume next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/rust_final,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/cleave,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/summon/rusty) route = PATH_RUST /datum/eldritch_knowledge/armor - name = "Armorer's ritual" - desc = "You can now create eldritch armor using a table and a gas mask." - gain_text = "Rusted Hills have welcomed Blacksmith with their generosity." + name = "Armorer's Ritual" + desc = "You can now create Eldritch Armor using a table and a gas mask." + gain_text = "The Rusted Hills welcomed the Blacksmith in their generosity." cost = 1 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_regen,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/flesh_ghoul) required_atoms = list(/obj/structure/table,/obj/item/clothing/mask/gas) result_atoms = list(/obj/item/clothing/suit/hooded/cultrobes/eldritch) /datum/eldritch_knowledge/essence - name = "Priest's ritual" + name = "Priest's Ritual" desc = "You can now transmute a tank of water into a bottle of eldritch water." - gain_text = "Old recipe, the Owl has whispered it to me." + gain_text = "This is an old recipe. The Owl whispered it to me." cost = 1 next_knowledge = list(/datum/eldritch_knowledge/rust_regen,/datum/eldritch_knowledge/spell/ashen_shift) required_atoms = list(/obj/structure/reagent_dispensers/watertank) @@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ /datum/eldritch_knowledge/final/rust_final name = "Rustbringer's Oath" desc = "Bring 3 corpses onto the transmutation rune. After you finish the ritual rust will now automatically spread from the rune. Your healing on rust is also tripled, while you become more resillient overall." - gain_text = "Champion of rust. Corruptor of steel. Fear the dark for Rustbringer has come! Rusted Hills YELL MY NAME!" + gain_text = "Champion of rust. Corruptor of steel. Fear the dark for the Rustbringer has come! Rusted Hills, CALL MY NAME!" cost = 3 required_atoms = list(/mob/living/carbon/human) route = PATH_RUST @@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ H.physiology.brute_mod *= 0.5 H.physiology.burn_mod *= 0.5 H.client?.give_award(/datum/award/achievement/misc/rust_ascension, H) - priority_announce("$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@# Fear the decay, for Rustbringer [user.real_name] has come! $^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#","#$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#", 'sound/ai/spanomalies.ogg') + priority_announce("$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@# Fear the decay, for the Rustbringer, [user.real_name] has ascended! None shall escape the corrosion! $^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#","#$^@&#*$^@(#&$(@&#^$&#^@#", 'sound/ai/spanomalies.ogg') new /datum/rust_spread(loc) return ..()