diff --git a/code/datums/mutations/actions.dm b/code/datums/mutations/actions.dm index b90295e064c..f2fecbfa2f9 100644 --- a/code/datums/mutations/actions.dm +++ b/code/datums/mutations/actions.dm @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ return if(!tracking_target) - to_chat(user,"You're not holding anything to smell, and you haven't smelled anything you can track. You smell your palm instead; it's kinda salty.") + to_chat(user,"You're not holding anything to smell, and you haven't smelled anything you can track. You smell your skin instead; it's kinda salty.") return on_the_trail(user) diff --git a/code/datums/mutations/antenna.dm b/code/datums/mutations/antenna.dm index ffd7d77b282..842e6894859 100644 --- a/code/datums/mutations/antenna.dm +++ b/code/datums/mutations/antenna.dm @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ to_chat(user, "You find that their intent is to [H.a_intent]...") var/datum/dna/the_dna = H.has_dna() if(the_dna) - to_chat(user, "You uncover that their true identity is [the_dna.real_name].") + to_chat(user, "You uncover that [H.p_their()] true identity is [the_dna.real_name].") else to_chat(user, "You can't find a mind to read inside of [M].") diff --git a/code/datums/mutations/body.dm b/code/datums/mutations/body.dm index b3cee91681b..ae2b268a044 100644 --- a/code/datums/mutations/body.dm +++ b/code/datums/mutations/body.dm @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ //Clumsiness has a very large amount of small drawbacks depending on item. /datum/mutation/human/clumsy name = "Clumsiness" - desc = "A genome that inhibits certain brain functions, causing the holder to appear clumsy. Honk" + desc = "A genome that inhibits certain brain functions, causing the holder to appear clumsy. Honk!" quality = MINOR_NEGATIVE text_gain_indication = "You feel lightheaded." @@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ /datum/mutation/human/fire name = "Fiery Sweat" - desc = "The user's skin will randomly combust, but is generally alot more resilient to burning." + desc = "The user's skin will randomly combust, but is generally a lot more resilient to burning." quality = NEGATIVE text_gain_indication = "You feel hot." text_lose_indication = "You feel a lot cooler." @@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ /datum/mutation/human/badblink/on_life() if(prob(warpchance)) var/warpmessage = pick( - "With a sickening 720 degree twist of their back, [owner] vanishes into thin air.", + "With a sickening 720-degree twist of [owner.p_their()] back, [owner] vanishes into thin air.", "[owner] does some sort of strange backflip into another dimension. It looks pretty painful.", "[owner] does a jump to the left, a step to the right, and warps out of reality.", "[owner]'s torso starts folding inside out until it vanishes from reality, taking [owner] with it.", @@ -291,10 +291,10 @@ /datum/mutation/human/acidflesh name = "Acidic Flesh" - desc = "Subject has acidic chemicals building up underneath their skin. This is often lethal." + desc = "Subject has acidic chemicals building up underneath the skin. This is often lethal." quality = NEGATIVE text_gain_indication = "A horrible burning sensation envelops you as your flesh turns to acid!" - text_lose_indication = "A feeling of relief covers you as your flesh goes back to normal." + text_lose_indication = "A feeling of relief fills you as your flesh goes back to normal." difficulty = 18//high so it's hard to unlock and use on others var/msgcooldown = 0 @@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ /datum/mutation/human/gigantism name = "Gigantism"//negative version of dwarfism - desc = "The cells within the subject spread out to cover more area, making them appear larger." + desc = "The cells within the subject spread out to cover more area, making the subject appear larger." quality = MINOR_NEGATIVE difficulty = 12 conflicts = list(DWARFISM) diff --git a/code/datums/ruins/lavaland.dm b/code/datums/ruins/lavaland.dm index 4006c13a2c1..76189a3de6f 100644 --- a/code/datums/ruins/lavaland.dm +++ b/code/datums/ruins/lavaland.dm @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ /datum/map_template/ruin/lavaland/sin/pride name = "Ruin of Pride" id = "pride" - description = "Wormhole lifebelts are for LOSERS, who you are better than." + description = "Wormhole lifebelts are for LOSERS, whom you are better than." suffix = "lavaland_surface_pride.dmm" /datum/map_template/ruin/lavaland/sin/sloth @@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ /datum/map_template/ruin/lavaland/ratvar name = "Dead God" id = "ratvar" - description = "Ratvars final resting place." + description = "Ratvar's final resting place." suffix = "lavaland_surface_dead_ratvar.dmm" cost = 0 allow_duplicates = FALSE @@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ /datum/map_template/ruin/lavaland/pizza name = "Ruined Pizza Party" id = "pizza" - description = "Little Timmy's birthday pizza-bash took a turn for the worse when a bluespace anomaly passed by." + description = "Little Timmy's birthday pizza bash took a turn for the worse when a bluespace anomaly passed by." suffix = "lavaland_surface_pizzaparty.dmm" allow_duplicates = FALSE cost = 5 @@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ /datum/map_template/ruin/lavaland/cultaltar name = "Summoning Ritual" id = "cultaltar" - description = "A place of vile worship, the scrawling of blood in the middle glowing eerily. A demonic laugh echoes throughout the caverns" + description = "A place of vile worship, the scrawling of blood in the middle glowing eerily. A demonic laugh echoes throughout the caverns." suffix = "lavaland_surface_cultaltar.dmm" allow_duplicates = FALSE cost = 10 diff --git a/code/datums/ruins/space.dm b/code/datums/ruins/space.dm index 25c8829272a..36ca2d6e9b3 100644 --- a/code/datums/ruins/space.dm +++ b/code/datums/ruins/space.dm @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ suffix = "asteroid4.dmm" name = "Asteroid 4" description = "Nanotrasen Escape Pods have a 100%* success rate, and a 99%* customer satisfaction rate. \ - *Please note that these statistics, are taken from pods that have successfully docked with a recovery vessel." + *Please note that these statistics are taken from pods that have successfully docked with a recovery vessel." /datum/map_template/ruin/space/asteroid5 id = "asteroid5" @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ id = "deep-storage" suffix = "deepstorage.dmm" name = "Survivalist Bunker" - description = "Assume the best, prepare for the worst. Generally, you should do so by digging a three man heavily fortified bunker into a giant unused asteroid. \ + description = "Assume the best, prepare for the worst. Generally, you should do so by digging a three-man heavily fortified bunker into a giant unused asteroid. \ Then make it self sufficient, mask any evidence of construction, hook it covertly into the telecommunications network and hope for the best." /datum/map_template/ruin/space/bigderelict1 @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ id = "empty-shell" suffix = "emptyshell.dmm" name = "Empty Shell" - description = "Cosy, rural property availible for young professional couple. Only twelve parsecs from the nearest hyperspace lane!" + description = "Cosy, rural property available for young professional couple. Only twelve parsecs from the nearest hyperspace lane!" /datum/map_template/ruin/space/gas_the_lizards id = "gas-the-lizards" @@ -186,28 +186,28 @@ suffix = "abandonedteleporter.dmm" name = "Abandoned Teleporter" description = "In space construction the teleporter is often the first system brought online. \ - This lonely half built teleporter is a sign of a proposed structure that for one reason or another just never got built." + This lonely, half-built teleporter is a sign of a proposed structure that for one reason or another just never got built." /datum/map_template/ruin/space/crashedclownship id = "crashedclownship" suffix = "crashedclownship.dmm" name = "Crashed Clown Ship" description = "For centuries the promise of a new clown homeworld has been the siren call for countless clown vessels. \ - Alas the clown's lust for shinanagans means that successful voyages are almost unheard of, with most vessels falling to hilarious consequences almost immediately." + Alas, the clown's lust for shenanigans means that successful voyages are almost unheard of, with most vessels falling to hilarious consequences almost immediately." /datum/map_template/ruin/space/crashedship id = "crashedship" suffix = "crashedship.dmm" name = "Crashed Ship" description = "Among civilian vessels the most common cause of tragedy is lack of food. \ - This ship was outfited with a multitude of food generating features, then summarily ran into an asteroid shortly after takeoff." + This ship was outfitted with a multitude of food-generating features, then summarily ran into an asteroid shortly after takeoff." /datum/map_template/ruin/space/listeningstation id = "listeningstation" suffix = "listeningstation.dmm" name = "Syndicate Listening Station" - description = "Listening stations form the backbone of the syndicate's information gathering operations. \ - Assignment to these stations is dreaded by most agents, as it entails long and lonely shifts listening to nearby stations chatter incessently about the most meaningless things." + description = "Listening stations form the backbone of the syndicate's information-gathering operations. \ + Assignment to these stations is dreaded by most agents, as it entails long and lonely shifts listening to nearby stations chatter incessantly about the most meaningless things." /datum/map_template/ruin/space/oldAIsat id = "oldAIsat" @@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ id = "bus" suffix = "bus.dmm" name = "Waylaid Buses" - description = "There seems to be a pair of buses that pulled over for repairs. What were they doing..? Their shipment sure seems to be filled with a strange mix. \ + description = "There seems to be a pair of buses that pulled over for repairs. What were they doing...? Their shipment sure seems to be filled with a strange mix. \ Anyway, it looks like some people tried to fix it up for a long time but didn't really get anywhere..." /datum/map_template/ruin/space/oldstation @@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ id = "miracle" suffix = "miracle.dmm" name = "Ordinary Space Tile" - description = "Absolutely nothing strange going on here please move along, plenty more space to see right this way!" + description = "Absolutely nothing strange going on here, please move along, plenty more space to see right this way!" /datum/map_template/ruin/space/gondoland id = "gondolaasteroid" diff --git a/code/modules/surgery/bodyparts/head.dm b/code/modules/surgery/bodyparts/head.dm index c6b237bc00a..b844bd9cb76 100644 --- a/code/modules/surgery/bodyparts/head.dm +++ b/code/modules/surgery/bodyparts/head.dm @@ -72,11 +72,11 @@ to_chat(user, "It seems to be leaking some kind of... clear fluid? The brain inside must be in pretty bad shape... There is no coming back from that.") else if(brainmob) if(brainmob.get_ghost(FALSE, TRUE)) - to_chat(user, "It's muscles are still twitching slightly... It still seems to have a bit of life left to it.") + to_chat(user, "Its muscles are still twitching slightly... It still seems to have a bit of life left to it.") else to_chat(user, "It seems seems particularly lifeless. Perhaps there'll be a chance for them later.") else if(brain?.decoy_override) - to_chat(user, "It seems seems particularly lifeless. Perhaps there'll be a chance for them later.") + to_chat(user, "It seems particularly lifeless. Perhaps there'll be a chance for them later.") else to_chat(user, "It seems completely devoid of life.") diff --git a/code/modules/surgery/bodyparts/robot_bodyparts.dm b/code/modules/surgery/bodyparts/robot_bodyparts.dm index 8c967ccc59d..44919704951 100644 --- a/code/modules/surgery/bodyparts/robot_bodyparts.dm +++ b/code/modules/surgery/bodyparts/robot_bodyparts.dm @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ var/single_flash = FALSE if(!flash1 || !flash2) single_flash = TRUE - to_chat(user, "One of it's eye sockets are currently occupied by a flash.") + to_chat(user, "One of its eye sockets is currently occupied by a flash.") to_chat(user, "It has an empty eye socket for another flash.") else to_chat(user, "It has two eye sockets occupied by flashes.") diff --git a/code/modules/vehicles/scooter.dm b/code/modules/vehicles/scooter.dm index e2225b8b5e3..5489c43b965 100644 --- a/code/modules/vehicles/scooter.dm +++ b/code/modules/vehicles/scooter.dm @@ -186,12 +186,12 @@ /obj/vehicle/ridden/scooter/wheelys/post_unbuckle_mob(mob/living/M) if(!has_buckled_mobs()) - to_chat(M, "You pop the Wheely-Heel's wheels back into place.") + to_chat(M, "You pop the Wheely-Heels' wheels back into place.") moveToNullspace() return ..() /obj/vehicle/ridden/scooter/wheelys/post_buckle_mob(mob/living/M) - to_chat(M, "You pop out the Wheely-Heel's wheels.") + to_chat(M, "You pop out the Wheely-Heels' wheels.") return ..() /obj/vehicle/ridden/scooter/wheelys/Bump(atom/A) diff --git a/code/modules/vending/liberation.dm b/code/modules/vending/liberation.dm index 821a3989c7f..cdf0905d6c0 100644 --- a/code/modules/vending/liberation.dm +++ b/code/modules/vending/liberation.dm @@ -2,8 +2,8 @@ name = "\improper Liberation Station" desc = "An overwhelming amount of ancient patriotism washes over you just by looking at the machine." icon_state = "liberationstation" - product_slogans = "Liberation Station: Your one-stop shop for all things second ammendment!;Be a patriot today, pick up a gun!;Quality weapons for cheap prices!;Better dead than red!" - product_ads = "Float like an astronaut, sting like a bullet!;Express your second ammendment today!;Guns don't kill people, but you can!;Who needs responsibilities when you have guns?" + product_slogans = "Liberation Station: Your one-stop shop for all things second amendment!;Be a patriot today, pick up a gun!;Quality weapons for cheap prices!;Better dead than red!" + product_ads = "Float like an astronaut, sting like a bullet!;Express your second amendment today!;Guns don't kill people, but you can!;Who needs responsibilities when you have guns?" vend_reply = "Remember the name: Liberation Station!" products = list(/obj/item/reagent_containers/food/snacks/burger/plain = 5, //O say can you see, by the dawn's early light /obj/item/reagent_containers/food/snacks/burger/baseball = 3, //What so proudly we hailed at the twilight's last gleaming