From 937e8b82e2e4565bf403a4d00a60d3acefa47a95 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: IsaacExists <125638858+IsaacExists@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 24 Jun 2024 17:38:23 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Embedding and Nutriment Pump Typos (#84239) ## About The Pull Request Fixes small typo errors in the embedding text when removing shrapnel from patients, or yourself. Added the closing parenthesis to the messages missing them, and removed the unnecessary punctuation inside them. Also fixes a typo in the nutriment pump cybernetic implant description, saying "with" instead of "will". --- code/datums/components/embedded.dm | 8 ++++---- code/modules/research/designs/medical_designs.dm | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/datums/components/embedded.dm b/code/datums/components/embedded.dm index b62121d30d0..45a3c07298f 100644 --- a/code/datums/components/embedded.dm +++ b/code/datums/components/embedded.dm @@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ /// everything async that ripOut used to do /datum/component/embedded/proc/complete_rip_out(mob/living/carbon/victim, obj/item/I, obj/item/bodypart/limb, time_taken) - victim.visible_message(span_warning("[victim] attempts to remove [weapon] from [victim.p_their()] [limb.plaintext_zone]."),span_notice("You attempt to remove [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(time_taken)].)")) + victim.visible_message(span_warning("[victim] attempts to remove [weapon] from [victim.p_their()] [limb.plaintext_zone]."),span_notice("You attempt to remove [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(time_taken)])")) if(!do_after(victim, time_taken, target = victim)) return if(!weapon || !limb || weapon.loc != victim || !(weapon in limb.embedded_objects)) @@ -279,12 +279,12 @@ var/pluck_time = rip_time * (weapon.w_class * 0.3) * (self_pluck ? 1.5 : 1) * tweezer_speed * (tweezer_safe ? 1 : 1.5) if(self_pluck) - user.visible_message(span_danger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from [user.p_their()] [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]..."), span_notice("You start plucking [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)].)"),\ + user.visible_message(span_danger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from [user.p_their()] [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]..."), span_notice("You start plucking [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)])"),\ vision_distance=COMBAT_MESSAGE_RANGE, ignored_mobs=victim) else - user.visible_message(span_danger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from [victim]'s [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]..."),span_notice("You start plucking [weapon] from [victim]'s [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)]."), \ + user.visible_message(span_danger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from [victim]'s [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]..."),span_notice("You start plucking [weapon] from [victim]'s [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)])"), \ vision_distance=COMBAT_MESSAGE_RANGE, ignored_mobs=victim) - to_chat(victim, span_userdanger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)].")) + to_chat(victim, span_userdanger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)])")) if(!do_after(user, pluck_time, victim)) if(self_pluck) diff --git a/code/modules/research/designs/medical_designs.dm b/code/modules/research/designs/medical_designs.dm index 46e43b0ac66..4e95e9d4dfd 100644 --- a/code/modules/research/designs/medical_designs.dm +++ b/code/modules/research/designs/medical_designs.dm @@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ /datum/design/cyberimp_nutriment name = "Nutriment Pump Implant" - desc = "This implant with synthesize and pump into your bloodstream a small amount of nutriment when you are starving." + desc = "This implant will synthesize and pump into your bloodstream a small amount of nutriment when you are starving." id = "ci-nutriment" build_type = PROTOLATHE | AWAY_LATHE | MECHFAB construction_time = 4 SECONDS @@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ /datum/design/cyberimp_nutriment_plus name = "Nutriment Pump Implant PLUS" - desc = "This implant with synthesize and pump into your bloodstream a small amount of nutriment when you are hungry." + desc = "This implant will synthesize and pump into your bloodstream a small amount of nutriment when you are hungry." id = "ci-nutrimentplus" build_type = PROTOLATHE | AWAY_LATHE | MECHFAB construction_time = 5 SECONDS