From c003cd802ef7d3fb96c164841242722b4a98e9c2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lizardqueenlexi <105025397+lizardqueenlexi@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 13 Oct 2022 14:53:55 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Made revisions to cargo bounty descriptions. (#70470) Made numerous revisions to cargo bounty descriptions, and added one new bounty. --- code/modules/cargo/bounties/assistant.dm | 12 ++++++------ code/modules/cargo/bounties/botany.dm | 2 +- code/modules/cargo/bounties/chef.dm | 4 ++-- code/modules/cargo/bounties/medical.dm | 10 +++++----- code/modules/cargo/bounties/mining.dm | 4 ++-- code/modules/cargo/bounties/science.dm | 15 ++++++++++----- code/modules/cargo/bounties/security.dm | 4 ++-- code/modules/cargo/bounties/special.dm | 4 ++-- 8 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/assistant.dm b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/assistant.dm index 123c64dda5e..2e9c81d3bb4 100644 --- a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/assistant.dm +++ b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/assistant.dm @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ /datum/bounty/item/assistant/strange_object name = "Strange Object" - description = "Nanotrasen has taken an interest in strange objects. Find one in maint, and ship it off to CentCom right away." + description = "Nanotrasen has taken an interest in strange objects. Find one in maintenance, and ship it off to CentCom right away." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 2.4 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/relic = TRUE) @@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ /datum/bounty/item/assistant/corgimeat name = "Raw Corgi Meat" - description = "The Syndicate recently stole all of CentCom's Corgi meat. Ship out a replacement immediately." + description = "The Syndicate recently stole all of CentCom's corgi meat. Ship out a replacement immediately." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 6 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/food/meat/slab/corgi = TRUE) @@ -178,14 +178,14 @@ /datum/bounty/item/assistant/crayons name = "Crayons" - description = "Dr Jones' kid ate all our crayons again. Please send us yours." + description = "Dr. Jones's kid ate all of our crayons again. Please send us yours." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 4 required_count = 24 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/toy/crayon = TRUE) /datum/bounty/item/assistant/pens name = "Pens" - description = "We are hosting the intergalactic pen balancing competition. We need you to send us some standardized ball point pens." + description = "We are hosting the intergalactic pen balancing competition. We need you to send us some standardized black ballpoint pens." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 4 required_count = 10 include_subtypes = FALSE @@ -198,14 +198,14 @@ wanted_types = list(/obj/structure/reagent_dispensers/watertank = TRUE) /datum/bounty/item/assistant/pneumatic_cannon - name = "Penumatic Cannon" + name = "Pneumatic Cannon" description = "We're figuring out how hard we can launch supermatter shards out of a pneumatic cannon. Send us one as soon as possible." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 4 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/pneumatic_cannon/ghetto = TRUE) /datum/bounty/item/assistant/improvised_shells name = "Improvised Shotgun Shells" - description = "Budget cuts are hitting our security deparetment pretty hard. Send some improvised shotgun shells when you can." + description = "Budget cuts are hitting our security department pretty hard. Send some improvised shotgun shells when you can." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 4 required_count = 5 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/ammo_casing/shotgun/improvised = TRUE) diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/botany.dm b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/botany.dm index bc8f5c4b472..905122584bf 100644 --- a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/botany.dm +++ b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/botany.dm @@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ /datum/bounty/item/botany/bonfire name = "Lit Bonfire" - description = "Space heaters are malfunctioning and the cargo crew of Central Command is starting to feel cold. Grow some logs and Ship a lit bonfire to warm them up." + description = "Our space heaters are malfunctioning and the cargo crew of Central Command is starting to feel cold. Grow some logs and ship a lit bonfire to warm them up." wanted_types = list(/obj/structure/bonfire = TRUE) /datum/bounty/item/botany/bonfire/applies_to(obj/O) diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/chef.dm b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/chef.dm index 88a534143f1..905e04dbba1 100644 --- a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/chef.dm +++ b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/chef.dm @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ /datum/bounty/item/chef/birthday_cake name = "Birthday Cake" - description = "Nanotrasen's birthday is coming up! Ship them a birthday cake to celebrate!" + description = "Nanotrasen's birthday is coming up! Ship Central Command a birthday cake to celebrate!" reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 8 wanted_types = list( /obj/item/food/cake/birthday = TRUE, @@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ /datum/bounty/item/chef/soylentgreen name = "Soylent Green" - description = "CentCom has heard wonderful things about the product 'Soylent Green', and would love to try some. If you endulge them, expect a pleasant bonus." + description = "CentCom has heard wonderful things about the product 'Soylent Green', and would love to try some. If you indulge them, expect a pleasant bonus." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 10 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/food/soylentgreen = TRUE) diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/medical.dm b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/medical.dm index 9cb2723ef72..f45a9d94178 100644 --- a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/medical.dm +++ b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/medical.dm @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ /datum/bounty/item/medical/lung name = "Lungs" - description = "A recent explosion at Central Command has left multiple staff with punctured lungs. Ship spare lungs to be rewarded. We'll take a better cybernetic one, if need be." + description = "A recent explosion at Central Command has left multiple staff with punctured lungs. Ship spare lungs to be rewarded. We'll take a better cybernetic one, if need be." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 10 required_count = 3 wanted_types = list( @@ -23,13 +23,13 @@ /datum/bounty/item/medical/appendix name = "Appendix" - description = "Chef Gibb of Central Command wants to prepare a meal using a very special delicacy: an appendix. If you ship one, he'll pay. We'll take a better cybernetic one, if need be." + description = "Chef Gibb of Central Command wants to prepare a meal using a very special delicacy: an appendix. If you ship one, he'll pay." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 5 //there are no synthetic appendixes wanted_types = list(/obj/item/organ/internal/appendix = TRUE) /datum/bounty/item/medical/ears name = "Ears" - description = "Multiple staff at Station 12 have been left deaf due to unauthorized clowning. Ship them new ears. " + description = "Multiple staff at Station 12 have been left deaf due to unauthorized clowning. Ship them new ears. We'll take better cybernetic ones, if need be." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 10 required_count = 3 wanted_types = list( @@ -93,12 +93,12 @@ /datum/bounty/item/medical/surgerycomp name = "Surgery Computer" - description = "After another freak bombing incident at our annual cheesefest at centcom, we have a massive stack of injured crew on our end. Please send us a fresh surgery computer, if at all possible." + description = "After another freak bombing incident at our annual cheesefest at CentCom, we have a massive stack of injured crew on our end. Please send us a fresh surgery computer, if at all possible." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 12 wanted_types = list(/obj/machinery/computer/operating = TRUE) /datum/bounty/item/medical/surgerytable name = "Operating Table" - description = "After a recent influx of infected crew members recently, we've seen that masks just aren't cutting it alone. Silver Operating tables might just do the trick though, send us one to use." + description = "After a recent influx of infected crew members, we've seen that masks just aren't cutting it alone. Silver operating tables might just do the trick though, send us one to use." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 6 wanted_types = list(/obj/structure/table/optable = TRUE) diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/mining.dm b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/mining.dm index 4e44ae58b4e..a552e62aeb1 100644 --- a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/mining.dm +++ b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/mining.dm @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ /datum/bounty/item/mining/goliath_steaks name = "Lava-Cooked Goliath Steaks" - description = "Admiral Pavlov has gone on hunger strike ever since the canteen started serving only monkey and monkey byproducts. She is demanding lava-cooked Goliath steaks." + description = "Admiral Pavlov has gone on hunger strike ever since the canteen started serving only monkey and monkey byproducts. She is demanding lava-cooked goliath steaks." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 10 required_count = 3 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/food/meat/steak/goliath = TRUE) @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ /datum/bounty/item/mining/bone_dagger name = "Bone Daggers" - description = "Central Command's canteen is undergoing budget cuts. Ship over some bone daggers so our Chef can keep working." + description = "Central Command's canteen is undergoing budget cuts. Ship over some bone daggers so our chef can keep working." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 10 required_count = 3 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/knife/combat/bone = TRUE) diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/science.dm b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/science.dm index e21604d579c..05c3247cb20 100644 --- a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/science.dm +++ b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/science.dm @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ //******Modular Computer Bounties****** /datum/bounty/item/science/ntnet name = "Modular Tablets" - description = "Turns out that NTNet wasn't actually a fad afterall, who knew. Ship us some fully constructed tablets and send it turned on." + description = "Turns out that NTNet wasn't actually a fad afterall, who knew. Fully construct some tablets and send them powered on." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 6 required_count = 4 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/modular_computer/tablet = TRUE) @@ -72,14 +72,14 @@ /datum/bounty/item/science/ntnet/laptops name = "Modular Laptops" - description = "Central command brass need something more powerful than a tablet, but more portable than a console. Help these old fogeys out by shipping us some working laptops. Send it turned on." + description = "Central command brass need something more powerful than a tablet, but more portable than a console. Help these old fogeys out by shipping us some working laptops. Send them turned on." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 3 required_count = 2 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/modular_computer/laptop = TRUE) /datum/bounty/item/science/ntnet/console name = "Modular Computer Console" - description = "Our big data devision needs more powerful hardware to play 'Outbomb Cuban Pe-', err, to closely monitor threats in your sector. Send us a working modular computer console." + description = "Our big data division needs more powerful hardware to play 'Outbomb Cuban Pe-', err, to closely monitor threats in your sector. Send us a working modular computer console." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 6 required_count = 1 wanted_types = list(/obj/machinery/modular_computer/console = TRUE) @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ //******Anomaly Cores****** /datum/bounty/item/science/ref_anomaly name = "Refined Bluespace Core" - description = "We need a bluespace core to fit in a Phazon, ship us one, please." + description = "We need a bluespace core to fit in a Phazon. Ship us one, please." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 20 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/assembly/signaler/anomaly/bluespace = TRUE) @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ /datum/bounty/item/science/ref_anomaly/flux name = "Refined Flux Core" - description = "We're trying to make a tesla cannon to handle some moths, ship us a flux core, please." + description = "We're trying to make a tesla cannon to handle some moths. Ship us a flux core, please." wanted_types = list(/obj/item/assembly/signaler/anomaly/flux = TRUE) /datum/bounty/item/science/ref_anomaly/pyro @@ -136,3 +136,8 @@ name = "Refined Bioscrambler Core" description = "Our janitor lizard lost all their limbs, send us a bioscrambler core to replace them." wanted_types = list(/obj/item/assembly/signaler/anomaly/bioscrambler = TRUE) + +/datum/bounty/item/science/ref_anomaly/dimensional + name = "Refined Dimensional Core" + description = "We're trying to save money on our annual renovations at CentCom. Send us a dimensional core." + wanted_types = list(/obj/item/assembly/signaler/anomaly/dimensional = TRUE) diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/security.dm b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/security.dm index ab395ebcc73..a938b92a078 100644 --- a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/security.dm +++ b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/security.dm @@ -14,14 +14,14 @@ /datum/bounty/item/security/prison_clothes name = "Prison Uniforms" - description = "Terragov has been unable to source any new prisoner uniforms, so if you have any spares, we'll take them off your hands." + description = "TerraGov has been unable to source any new prisoner uniforms, so if you have any spares, we'll take them off your hands." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 4 required_count = 4 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/clothing/under/rank/prisoner = TRUE) /datum/bounty/item/security/plates name = "License Plates" - description = "As a result of a bad clown car crash, we could use an advance on some of your prisoner's license plates." + description = "As a result of a bad clown car crash, we could use an advance on some of your prisoners' license plates." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 2 required_count = 10 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/stack/license_plates/filled = TRUE) diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/special.dm b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/special.dm index 4924abeb711..6fefa572a52 100644 --- a/code/modules/cargo/bounties/special.dm +++ b/code/modules/cargo/bounties/special.dm @@ -31,14 +31,14 @@ /datum/bounty/item/adamantine name = "Adamantine" - description = "Nanotrasen's anomalous materials division is in desparate need for Adamantine. Send them a large shipment and we'll make it worth your while." + description = "Nanotrasen's anomalous materials division is in desparate need of adamantine. Send them a large shipment and we'll make it worth your while." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 70 required_count = 10 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/stack/sheet/mineral/adamantine = TRUE) /datum/bounty/item/trash name = "Trash" - description = "Recently a group of janitors have run out of trash to clean up, without any trash CentCom wants to fire them to cut costs. Send a shipment of trash to keep them employed, and they'll give you a small compensation." + description = "Recently a group of janitors have run out of trash to clean up, and CentCom wants to fire them to cut costs. Send a shipment of trash to keep them employed, and they'll give you a small compensation." reward = CARGO_CRATE_VALUE * 2 required_count = 10 wanted_types = list(/obj/item/trash = TRUE)