From cfddfb5c8ca96a31eee5594b4cefade22163ca62 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: vincentiusvin <54709710+vincentiusvin@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 25 Aug 2022 04:38:33 +0700 Subject: [PATCH] [NO GBP] Fix NT Frontier Partner Typo & Better Experiment Descriptions For Ordnance (#69408) * Fix typo * Better descriptions * Fix errant the * Better perf hint --- code/modules/experisci/experiment/experiments.dm | 16 ++++++++-------- .../experisci/experiment/types/ordnance.dm | 2 +- .../research/ordnance/scipaper_partner.dm | 2 +- 3 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/modules/experisci/experiment/experiments.dm b/code/modules/experisci/experiment/experiments.dm index 276926476e7..553eb06acd8 100644 --- a/code/modules/experisci/experiment/experiments.dm +++ b/code/modules/experisci/experiment/experiments.dm @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ /datum/experiment/ordnance/explosive/lowyieldbomb name = "Low-Yield Explosives" - description = "Low-yield explosives may prove useful for our asset protection teams. Perform research and publish papers on this field. Explosion from any source is allowed." + description = "Low-yield explosives may prove useful for our asset protection teams. Capture a small explosion with a Doppler Array and publish the data in a paper." gain = list(10,15,20) target_amount = list(5,10,20) experiment_proper = TRUE @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ /datum/experiment/ordnance/explosive/highyieldbomb name = "High-Yield Explosives" - description = "Several reactions react very energetically and can be utilized for bigger explosives. Perform research and publish papers on this field. Any gas reaction is allowed." + description = "Several reactions react very energetically and can be utilized for bigger explosives. Capture any tank explosion with a Doppler Array and publish the data in a paper. Any gas reaction is allowed." gain = list(10,50,100) target_amount = list(50,100,300) experiment_proper = TRUE @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ /datum/experiment/ordnance/explosive/hydrogenbomb name = "Hydrogen Explosives" - description = "Combustion of Hydrogen and it's derivatives can be very powerful. Perform research and publish papers on this field. Only the specified gas reactions are allowed." + description = "Combustion of Hydrogen and it's derivatives can be very powerful. Capture any tank explosion with a Doppler Array and publish the data in a paper. Only Hydrogen or Tritium Fires are allowed." gain = list(15,40,60) target_amount = list(50,75,150) experiment_proper = TRUE @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ /datum/experiment/ordnance/explosive/nobliumbomb name = "Noblium Explosives" - description = "The formation of Hyper-Noblium is very energetic and can be harnessed for explosives. Perform research and publish papers on this field. Only the specified gas reaction is allowed." + description = "The formation of Hyper-Noblium is very energetic and can be harnessed for explosives. Capture any tank explosion with a Doppler Array and publish the data in a paper. Only Hyper-Noblium Condensation is allowed." gain = list(15,60,120) target_amount = list(50,100,300) experiment_proper = TRUE @@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ /datum/experiment/ordnance/explosive/pressurebomb name = "Reactionless Explosives" - description = "Gases with high specific heat can heat up those with a low one and produce a lot of pressure. Perform research and publish papers on this field. No gas reactions are allowed." + description = "Gases with high specific heat can heat up those with a low one and produce a lot of pressure.Capture any tank explosion with a Doppler Array and publish the data in a paper. No gas reactions are allowed." gain = list(10,50,100) target_amount = list(20,50,100) experiment_proper = TRUE @@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ /datum/experiment/ordnance/gaseous/nitrous_oxide name = "Nitrous Oxide Gas Shells" - description = "The delivery of N2O into an area of operation might prove useful. Perform research and publish papers on this field." + description = "The delivery of N2O into an area of operation might prove useful. Pack the specified gas into a tank and burst it using a Tank Compressor. Publish the data in a paper." gain = list(10,40) target_amount = list(200,600) experiment_proper = TRUE @@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ /datum/experiment/ordnance/gaseous/bz name = "BZ Gas Shells" - description = "The delivery of BZ gas into an area of operation might prove useful. Perform research and publish papers on this field." + description = "The delivery of BZ gas into an area of operation might prove useful. Pack the specified gas into a tank and burst it using a Tank Compressor. Publish the data in a paper." gain = list(10,30,60) target_amount = list(50,125,400) experiment_proper = TRUE @@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ /datum/experiment/ordnance/gaseous/noblium name = "Hypernoblium Gas Shells" - description = "The delivery of Hypernoblium gas into an area of operation might prove useful. Perform research and publish papers on this field." + description = "The delivery of Hypernoblium gas into an area of operation might prove useful. Pack the specified gas into a tank and burst it using a Tank Compressor. Publish the data in a paper." gain = list(10,40,80) target_amount = list(15,55,250) experiment_proper = TRUE diff --git a/code/modules/experisci/experiment/types/ordnance.dm b/code/modules/experisci/experiment/types/ordnance.dm index 56d1c9735c7..8f186e42fce 100644 --- a/code/modules/experisci/experiment/types/ordnance.dm +++ b/code/modules/experisci/experiment/types/ordnance.dm @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ name = "Toxin Research" description = "An experiment conducted in the ordnance subdepartment." exp_tag = "ordnance" - performance_hint = "Perform research experiments in the ordnance lab and publish them with NT Frontier." + performance_hint = "Perform research experiments in the ordnance lab using the specified equipment, print them unto a data disk, and publish them with the NT Frontier app." /// Lookup experiments are initialized using subtypes, /// this lets us ignore the ones made for subtyping. var/experiment_proper = FALSE diff --git a/code/modules/research/ordnance/scipaper_partner.dm b/code/modules/research/ordnance/scipaper_partner.dm index f5f6eb62fd5..422079a6b8f 100644 --- a/code/modules/research/ordnance/scipaper_partner.dm +++ b/code/modules/research/ordnance/scipaper_partner.dm @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ /datum/scientific_partner/medical name = "Biological Research Division" - flufftext = "A collegiate of the best medical researchers Nanotrason employs. They seem to be interested in the biological effects of some more exotic gases. Especially stimulants and neurosupressants." + flufftext = "A collegiate of the best medical researchers Nanotrasen employs. They seem to be interested in the biological effects of some more exotic gases. Especially stimulants and neurosupressants." accepted_experiments = list( /datum/experiment/ordnance/gaseous/nitrous_oxide, /datum/experiment/ordnance/gaseous/bz,