From d0dffe7ca643db2624424fdcebf45863f85c0448 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: zeckle/licks-the-crystal <79835169+mikederkan@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 31 Jul 2023 22:18:45 +1000 Subject: [PATCH] Fixes a large amount of spelling and grammatical errors in the Exploration Drones section. Also fixes an angry pine tree quip. (#77095) ## About The Pull Request Title ## Why It's Good For The Game It bothered me ## Changelog :cl: Licks-The-Crystal spellcheck: Corrected a large quantity of spelling, grammatical and phrasing errors with Exploration Drone content. /:cl: --------- Co-authored-by: tattle <66640614+dragomagol@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: Zephyr <12817816+ZephyrTFA@users.noreply.github.com> --- .../basic_subtrees/speech_subtree.dm | 2 +- code/modules/explorer_drone/exodrone.dm | 4 +- .../exploration_events/danger.dm | 40 +++---- .../exploration_events/resource.dm | 112 ++++++++++-------- .../exploration_events/trader.dm | 14 +-- .../explorer_drone/exploration_site.dm | 18 +-- code/modules/explorer_drone/loot.dm | 2 +- code/modules/explorer_drone/scanner_array.dm | 10 +- 8 files changed, 105 insertions(+), 97 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/datums/ai/basic_mobs/basic_subtrees/speech_subtree.dm b/code/datums/ai/basic_mobs/basic_subtrees/speech_subtree.dm index 3032632771d..a04765b1a88 100644 --- a/code/datums/ai/basic_mobs/basic_subtrees/speech_subtree.dm +++ b/code/datums/ai/basic_mobs/basic_subtrees/speech_subtree.dm @@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ /datum/ai_planning_subtree/random_speech/tree speech_chance = 3 - emote_see = list("photosynthesizes angirly.") + emote_see = list("photosynthesizes angrily.") /datum/ai_planning_subtree/random_speech/pig speech_chance = 3 diff --git a/code/modules/explorer_drone/exodrone.dm b/code/modules/explorer_drone/exodrone.dm index b8838f642ad..d2ddc6d2535 100644 --- a/code/modules/explorer_drone/exodrone.dm +++ b/code/modules/explorer_drone/exodrone.dm @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_EMPTY(exodrone_launchers) /// Exploration drone /obj/item/exodrone name = "exploration drone" - desc = "long range semi-autonomous exploration drone" + desc = "A long range, semi-autonomous exploration drone." icon = 'icons/obj/exploration.dmi' icon_state = "drone" w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_BULKY @@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_EMPTY(exodrone_launchers) if(!fuel_canister) return - to_chat(user, span_notice("You remove [fuel_canister] from [src].")) + to_chat(user, span_notice("You remove the [fuel_canister] from the [src].")) fuel_canister.forceMove(drop_location()) fuel_canister = null update_icon() diff --git a/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/danger.dm b/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/danger.dm index 0c0c28bd1c5..605974fa828 100644 --- a/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/danger.dm +++ b/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/danger.dm @@ -35,12 +35,12 @@ name = "space carp attack" required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SPACE) blacklisted_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_CIVILIZED) - deep_scan_description = "You detect damage patterns to the site hinting at a presence of space carp." + deep_scan_description = "You detect damage patterns to the site indicating the presence of space carp." description = "You are ambushed by a solitary space carp!" has_tool_action_text = "Fight" no_tool_action_text = "Escape!" has_tool_description = "You charge your laser to fend it off." - no_tool_description = "Unfortunately you have no weaponry so the only option is flight." + no_tool_description = "Without any weaponry, you can only attempt a hasty escape!" avoid_log = "Defeated a space carp." /// They get everywhere @@ -55,15 +55,15 @@ has_tool_action_text = "Fight" no_tool_action_text = "Escape!" has_tool_description = "You charge your laser to fend it off." - no_tool_description = "Unfortunately you have no weaponry so the only option is flight." + no_tool_description = "Without any weaponry, you can only attempt a hasty escape!" avoid_log = "Defeated an assistant." /datum/exploration_event/simple/danger/collapse name = "collapse" required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_DRILL - deep_scan_description = "The architecture of the site is unstable, caution advised." - description = "A damaged ceiling gives up as you search an unexplored passage! You're trapped by the debris." + deep_scan_description = "The scan indicates that the site's structure is decrepit; caution is advised." + description = "A damaged ceiling gives out as you search an unexplored passage! You're trapped by the debris." has_tool_action_text = "Dig out" no_tool_action_text = "Squeeze." has_tool_description = "You can use your drill to get out." @@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ name = "loose wires" required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL - deep_scan_description = "Damaged wiring detected on site." + deep_scan_description = "Scans indicate a huge quantity of damaged wiring detected on site." description = "You hear a loud snap behind you! A stack of sparking high-voltage wires is blocking you way out." has_tool_action_text = "Disable power" no_tool_action_text = "Get fried." @@ -87,24 +87,24 @@ required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL deep_scan_description = "Site is exposed to space radiation. Using self-diagnostic multiool attachment advised." - description = "Drone feed suddenly goes haywire! It seems that the drone got hit by extremely rare cosmic ray burst! You'll have to wait for signal to be restored." - has_tool_description = "Multitool extension self-diagnostic attachement should deal with most of the damage automatically." - no_tool_description = "Nothing more to be done than wait and asses the damage." + description = "The drone feed suddenly goes haywire! It seems that the drone got hit by a burst of cosmic rays! You'll have to wait for the signal to be restored." + has_tool_description = "Your multitool should allow a significant amount of the damage to be repaired on its own." //wait, what? + no_tool_description = "Nothing more to be done than to wait and assess the damage." has_tool_action_text = "Wait" no_tool_action_text = "Wait" - avoid_log = "Prevented cosmic ray damage with multitool" + avoid_log = "Prevented cosmic ray damage with multitool." /datum/exploration_event/simple/danger/alien_sentry name = "alien security measure" required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_ALIEN) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_TRANSLATOR deep_scan_description = "Automated security measures of unknown origin detected on site." - description = "A dangerous looking machine slides out the floor and start flashing strange glyphs while emitting high-pitched sound." - has_tool_description = "Your translator recognizes the glyphs as security hail and suggests identyfing yourself as guest." + description = "A dangerous looking machine slides out the floor and start flashing strange glyphs while emitting a high-pitched sound!" + has_tool_description = "Your translator recognizes the glyphs as security hail and suggests identyfing yourself as a guest." no_tool_description = "The machine start shooting soon after." has_tool_action_text = "Identify yourself" no_tool_action_text = "Escape" - avoid_log = "Avoided alien security" + avoid_log = "Avoided alien security." /datum/exploration_event/simple/danger/beast name = "alien encounter" @@ -112,12 +112,12 @@ blacklisted_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_CIVILIZED) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_LASER deep_scan_description = "Dangerous fauna detected on site." - description = "You encounter BEAST. It prepares to strike." + description = "You encounter an unusual beast! It prepares to strike." has_tool_action_text = "Fight" no_tool_action_text = "Escape" has_tool_description = "You ready your laser." - no_tool_description = "Time to run." - avoid_log = "Defeated BEAST" + no_tool_description = "Without any weaponry, you can only attempt a hasty escape!" + avoid_log = "Defeated a beast." /datum/exploration_event/simple/danger/beast/New() . = ..() @@ -129,10 +129,10 @@ name = "irradiated section" required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SHIP) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL - deep_scan_description = "Sections of the vessel are irradiated." + deep_scan_description = "Scans indicate dangerous radioactive presence." description = "You enter a nondescript ship section." has_tool_action_text = "Detour" no_tool_action_text = "Escape and mitigate damage." - has_tool_description = "Your multitool suddenly screams in warning! Section ahead is irradiated, you'll have to go around" - no_tool_description = "Suddenly the drone reports significant damage, it seems this section was heavily irradiated." - avoid_log = "Avoided irradiated section" + has_tool_description = "Your multitool suddenly flashes in warning! The section ahead is irradiated, you'll have to go around to avoid damage." + no_tool_description = "Suddenly the drone reports significant damage, it seems that this section was heavily irradiated." + avoid_log = "Avoided irradiated section." diff --git a/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/resource.dm b/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/resource.dm index 01f8c083c63..fdfc6b420f7 100644 --- a/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/resource.dm +++ b/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/resource.dm @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ /// Simple event type that checks if you have a tool and after a retrieval delay adds loot to drone. /datum/exploration_event/simple/resource - name = "Retrievable resource" + name = "retrievable resource" root_abstract_type = /datum/exploration_event/simple/resource - discovery_log = "Encountered recoverable resource" + discovery_log = "Encountered recoverable resource." action_text = "Extract" /// Tool type required to recover this resource var/required_tool @@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ /// Message logged on success var/success_log = "Retrieved something" /// Description shown when you don't have the tool - var/no_tool_description = "You can't retrieve it without a tool" + var/no_tool_description = "You can't retrieve it without a drill." /// Description shown when you have the necessary tool - var/has_tool_description = "You can get it out with that tool." + var/has_tool_description = "You can get it out with your drill!" var/delay = 30 SECONDS var/delay_message = "Recovering resource..." /// How many times can this be extracted @@ -71,13 +71,13 @@ // All /datum/exploration_event/simple/resource/concealed_cache - name = "Concealed Cache" + name = "concealed cache" band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_DENSITY=1) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_WELDER - discovery_log = "Discovered concealed and locked cache." + discovery_log = "Discovered a concealed, locked cache." description = "You spot a cleverly hidden metal container." no_tool_description = "You see no way to open it without a welder." - has_tool_description = "You can try to open it with your welder" + has_tool_description = "You can try and open it with your welder." action_text = "Weld open" delay_message = "Welding open the cache..." loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/maintenance @@ -87,10 +87,10 @@ name = "dessicated corpse" required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL - discovery_log = "You discovered a corpse of a humanoid." - description = "You find a dessicated corpose of a humanoid, it's too damaged to identify. A locked briefcase is lying nearby." - no_tool_description = "You can't open it without a multiool" - has_tool_description = "You can try to hack it open" + discovery_log = "Discovered a corpse of a humanoid." + description = "You find a dessicated corpose of a humanoid, though it's too damaged to identify. A locked briefcase is lying nearby." + no_tool_description = "You can't open it without a multiool." + has_tool_description = "You can try to hack it open with your multitool!" action_text = "Hack open" delay_message = "Hacking..." loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/simple/cash @@ -99,9 +99,10 @@ name = "gunfight leftovers" required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_DRILL - discovery_log = "You discovered a site of some past gunfight." - description = "You find a site full of gun casing and scorched with laser marks. You notice something under rubble nearby." - no_tool_description = "You can't get to it without a drill" + discovery_log = "Discovered a site of a past gunfight." + description = "You find a site full of gun casings and scorched with laser marks. You notice something under some nearby rubble." + no_tool_description = "You can't get to it without a drill." + has_tool_description = "You can remove the rubble with your drill!" action_text = "Remove rubble" delay_message = "Drilling..." loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/simple/weapons @@ -111,10 +112,11 @@ name = "locked maintenance room" required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY,EXPLORATION_SITE_STATION) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL - discovery_log = "You discovered a locked maintenance room." - success_log = "Retrieved contents of maintenance room." - description = "You discover a locked maintenance room. You can see marks of something being moved often from it nearby." - no_tool_description = "You can't open it without a multitool" + discovery_log = "Discovered a locked maintenance room." + success_log = "Retrieved the contents of a locked maintenance room." + description = "You discover a locked maintenance room. You can see marks from frequent movement nearby." + no_tool_description = "You can't open it without a multitool." + has_tool_description = "You can try to open it with your multitool!" action_text = "Hack" delay_message = "Hacking..." loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/maintenance @@ -124,10 +126,11 @@ name = "storage room" required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY,EXPLORATION_SITE_STATION) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_TRANSLATOR - discovery_log = "You discovered a storage room full of crates." - success_log = "Used translated manifest to find a crate with double bottom." - description = "You find a storage room full of empty crates. There's a manifest in some obscure language pinned near the entrance." - no_tool_description = "You can only see empty crates, and can't understand the manifest without a translator." + discovery_log = "Discovered a storage room full of crates." + success_log = "Used a translated manifest to find a crate of medication." + description = "You find a storage room full of unidentified crates. There's a manifest in an obscure language pinned near the entrance." + no_tool_description = "All the crates around are devoid of useful contents, and the manifest is unreadable without a translator." + has_tool_description = "You can translate the manifest with your translator!" action_text = "Translate" delay_message = "Translating manifest..." loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/simple/drugs @@ -138,10 +141,10 @@ required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_ALIEN) band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH=1,EXOSCANNER_BAND_RADIATION=1) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_TRANSLATOR - discovery_log = "Discovered a alien sarcophagus covered in unknown glyphs" - success_log = "Retrieved contents of alien sarcophagus" - description = "You find an giant sarcophagus of alien origin covered in unknown script." - no_tool_description = "You see no way to open the sarcophagus or translate the glyphs without a tool." + discovery_log = "Discovered an alien sarcophagus covered in unknown glyphs." + success_log = "Retrieved contents of an alien sarcophagus." + description = "You find a giant sarcophagus of alien origin, covered in unknown script." + no_tool_description = "You see no way to open the sarcophagus nor translate the glyphs without a multitool." has_tool_description = "You translate the glyphs and find a description of a hidden mechanism for unlocking the tomb." delay_message = "Opening..." action_text = "Open" @@ -153,10 +156,10 @@ band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE=1) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_LASER discovery_log = "Discovered an alien pod." - success_log = "Retrieved contents of the alien pod" - description = "You encounter an alien biomachinery full of sacks containing some lifeform." - no_tool_description = "You can't open them without precise laser." - has_tool_description = "You can try to cut one open with a laser." + success_log = "Retrieved contents of the alien pod." + description = "You encounter an alien biopod full of strange sacks containing abducted lifeforms." + no_tool_description = "You can't breach the biopod without a precise laser." + has_tool_description = "You can try to cut one open with your laser!" delay_message = "Opening..." action_text = "Open" loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/pet @@ -168,9 +171,10 @@ band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_PLASMA=1) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL discovery_log = "Discovered ship fuel storage." - description = "You find the ship fuel storage. Unfortunately it's locked with electronic lock." + description = "You find the ship's fuel storage. Unfortunately, it has an electronic lock." success_log = "Retrieved fuel from storage." - no_tool_description = "You'll need multitool to open it." + no_tool_description = "You can't breach the lock without a multitool." + has_tool_description = "You can try and short circuit the lock with your multitool!" delay_message = "Opening..." action_text = "Open" loot_type = /obj/item/fuel_pellet/exotic @@ -180,9 +184,10 @@ required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SHIP) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_TRANSLATOR discovery_log = "Discovered ship navigation systems." - description = "You find the ship navigation systems. With proper tools you can retrieve any data stored here." + description = "You find the ship's navigation systems encoded in a strange language. You'll be able to use the data with a translator." success_log = "Retrieved shipping data from navigation systems." no_tool_description = "You'll need a translator to decipher the data." + has_tool_description = "You can try and translate the navigation data with your multitool!" delay_message = "Retrieving data..." action_text = "Retrieve data" loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/cargo @@ -195,7 +200,8 @@ discovery_log = "Discovered a isolated microbiome." description = "You discover a giant fungus colony." success_log = "Retrieved samples of the fungus for future study." - no_tool_description = "With a laser tool you could slice off a sample for study." + no_tool_description = "With a precise laser, you could slice off a sample for study." + has_tool_description = "You can carefully cut a sample from the colony with your laser!" delay_message = "Taking samples..." action_text = "Take sample" loot_type = /obj/item/petri_dish/random @@ -206,9 +212,9 @@ band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE=1) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_TRANSLATOR discovery_log = "Met a creepy stranger." - description = "You meet an inhabitant of this site. Smelling horribly and clearly agitated about something." - no_tool_description = "You have no idea what it wants from you without a translator." - has_tool_description = "Your best translation is that it wants to share its hobby with you. " + description = "You meet an inhabitant of this site, looking ragged and clearly agitated about something." + no_tool_description = "You can't tell what it's trying to convey without a translator." + has_tool_description = "Your best translation dictates that it would like to share its hobby with you!" success_log = "Recieved a gift from a stranger." delay_message = "Enduring..." action_text = "Accept gift." @@ -219,10 +225,11 @@ name = "derelict comms satellite" required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SPACE) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL - discovery_log = "You discovered a derelict communication satellite." - description = "You discover a derelict communication satellite. Its encryption module seem intact and can be retrieved." - no_tool_description = "You'll need a multiool to crack open the lock." - success_log = "Retrieved encryption keys from derelict satellite" + discovery_log = "Discovered a derelict communication satellite." + description = "You discover a derelict communication satellite. Its encryption key is intact, but has a complicated electronic lock." + no_tool_description = "You'll need a multiool to retrieve the encryption key." + has_tool_description = "You can disable the lock to retrieve the key with your multitool!" + success_log = "Retrieved an encryption key from a derelict satellite." delay_message = "Hacking..." action_text = "Hack lock" loot_type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/heads/captain @@ -231,9 +238,10 @@ name = "welded locker" required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SPACE) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_WELDER - discovery_log = "You discovered a welded shut locker." - description = "You discover a welded shut locker floating through space. What could be inside ?" - success_log = "Retrieved bones of unfortunate spaceman from a welded locker." + discovery_log = "Discovered a hastily welded locker." + description = "You discover a welded locker floating through space. What could be inside...?" + no_tool_description = "You'll need a welding tool to take the contents of the locker." + success_log = "Retrieved... a severed head." delay_message = "Welding open..." action_text = "Weld open" loot_type = /obj/item/bodypart/head @@ -253,11 +261,11 @@ required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE) band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_PLASMA=3) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_DRILL - discovery_log = "Discovered a sizeable plasma deposit" - success_log = "Extracted plasma." + discovery_log = "Discovered a sizeable plasma deposit." + success_log = "Extracted the plasma from the deposit." description = "You locate a rich surface deposit of plasma." - no_tool_description = "You'll need to come back with a drill to mine it." - has_tool_description = "" + no_tool_description = "You'll need a drill to take anything from the deposit." + has_tool_description = "Your drill will allow you to extract the deposit!" action_text = "Mine" delay_message = "Mining..." loot_type = /obj/item/stack/sheet/mineral/plasma/thirty @@ -267,11 +275,11 @@ required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE) band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_DENSITY=3) required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_DRILL - discovery_log = "Discovered a sizeable MATRIAL deposit" - success_log = "Extracted MATERIAL." + discovery_log = "Discovered a sizeable MATRIAL deposit." + success_log = "Extracted the MATERIAL from the deposit." description = "You locate a rich surface deposit of MATERIAL." - no_tool_description = "You'll need to come back with a drill to mine it." - has_tool_description = "" + no_tool_description = "You'll need a drill to take anything from the deposit." + has_tool_description = "Your drill will allow you to extract the deposit!" action_text = "Mine" delay_message = "Mining..." var/static/list/possible_materials = list(/datum/material/silver,/datum/material/bananium,/datum/material/pizza) //only add materials with sheet type here diff --git a/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/trader.dm b/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/trader.dm index 8a0171c344c..626411cb935 100644 --- a/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/trader.dm +++ b/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/trader.dm @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/proc/trade(obj/item/exodrone/drone) var/obj/trade_good = locate(required_path) in drone.contents var/obj/loot = new traded_path() - drone.drone_log("Traded [trade_good] for [loot]") + drone.drone_log("Traded [trade_good] for [loot].") qdel(trade_good) drone.try_transfer(loot) @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/farmer_market name = "farmer's market" - deep_scan_description = "You detect a spot with unusal concentraction of edibles on the site." + deep_scan_description = "You detect an area with an unusually high concentration of edibles on site." required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE) band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE=2) required_path = /obj/item/stock_parts/servo/nano @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/fish name = "interstellar fish trader" requires_translator = FALSE - deep_scan_description = "You spot gian \"FRESH FISH\" sign on the site." + deep_scan_description = "You spot a giant \"FRESH FISH\" sign on site." required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE) band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE=2) required_path = /obj/item/stock_parts/cell/high @@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/surplus name = "military surplus trader" - deep_scan_description = "You decrypt a transmission advertising military surplus sale on the site." + deep_scan_description = "You decrypt a transmission advertising military surplus for sale on site." required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_CIVILIZED) band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE=1) required_path = list(/obj/item/clothing/suit/armor,/obj/item/clothing/shoes/jackboots) @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/flame_card name = "id card artisan" - deep_scan_description = "You spy a adveristment for an id card customization workshop." + deep_scan_description = "You spy an advertisment for an ID card customisation workshop." required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_CIVILIZED) band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH=1) required_path = list(/obj/item/card/id) //If you trade a better card for worse that's on you @@ -114,10 +114,10 @@ var/static/list/possible_card_states = list("card_flames","card_carp","card_rainbow") /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/flame_card/get_discovery_message(obj/item/exodrone/drone) - return "Encountered [name] willing to customize any id card you bring them." + return "Encountered [name] willing to customise any ID card you bring them." /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/flame_card/get_description(obj/item/exodrone/drone) - return "You encounter local craftsman willing to improve an id card for you free of charge." + return "You encounter a local craftsman willing to customise an ID card for you, free of charge." /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/flame_card/trade(obj/item/exodrone/drone) var/obj/item/card/id/card = locate(required_path) in drone.contents diff --git a/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_site.dm b/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_site.dm index 903a30ade53..9a21203d596 100644 --- a/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_site.dm +++ b/code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_site.dm @@ -190,13 +190,13 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_EMPTY(exploration_sites) /datum/exploration_site/abandoned_refueling_station name = "abandoned refueling station" - description = "old shuttle refueling station drifting through the void." + description = "An old shuttle refueling station drifting through the void." band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH = 1) site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS,EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY,EXPLORATION_SITE_STATION) /datum/exploration_site/trader_post name = "unregistered trading station" - description = "Weak radio transmission advertises this place as RANDOMIZED_NAME" + description = "A weak radio transmission advertises this place as RANDOMIZED_NAME" band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH = 1, EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE = 1) site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY,EXPLORATION_SITE_STATION,EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_CIVILIZED) fluff_type = "fluff_trading" @@ -209,19 +209,19 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_EMPTY(exploration_sites) /datum/exploration_site/cargo_wreck name = "interstellar cargo ship wreckage" - description = "wreckage of long-range cargo shuttle" + description = "Wreckage of a long-range cargo shuttle." band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH = 1, EXOSCANNER_BAND_DENSITY = 1) site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SHIP,EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY) /datum/exploration_site/alien_spaceship name = "ancient alien spaceship" - description = "a gigantic spaceship of unknown origin, it doesnt respond to your hails but does not prevent you boarding either" + description = "A gigantic spaceship of unknown origin. It doesn't respond to your hails but does not prevent you boarding, either." band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH = 1, EXOSCANNER_BAND_RADIATION = 1) site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SHIP,EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_ALIEN) /datum/exploration_site/uncharted_planet name = "uncharted planet" - description = "planet missing from nanotrasen starcharts." + description = "A planet missing from Nanotrasen starcharts." band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE = 3) site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE) @@ -240,26 +240,26 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_EMPTY(exploration_sites) /datum/exploration_site/alien_ruins name = "alien ruins" - description = "alien ruins on small moon surface." + description = "Alien ruins on a small moon's surface." site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE,EXPLORATION_SITE_ALIEN,EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS) fluff_type = "fluff_ruins" /datum/exploration_site/asteroid_belt name = "asteroid belt" - description = "dense asteroid belt" + description = "A dense asteroid belt." site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE) fluff_type = "fluff_space" /datum/exploration_site/spacemine name = "mining facility" - description = "abandoned mining facility attached to ore-heavy asteroid" + description = "An abandoned mining facility attached to an ore-rich asteroid." band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_PLASMA = 3) site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS,EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE) fluff_type = "fluff_ruins" /datum/exploration_site/junkyard name = "space junk field" - description = "a giant cluster of space junk." + description = "A giant cluster of space junk." band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_DENSITY = 3) site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY,EXPLORATION_SITE_SPACE) fluff_type = "fluff_space" diff --git a/code/modules/explorer_drone/loot.dm b/code/modules/explorer_drone/loot.dm index 78b224c852e..121880af7ce 100644 --- a/code/modules/explorer_drone/loot.dm +++ b/code/modules/explorer_drone/loot.dm @@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(adventure_loot_generator_index,generate_generator_index()) /obj/item/antique name = "antique" - desc = "Valuable and completly incomprehensible." + desc = "Valuable and completely incomprehensible." icon = 'icons/obj/exploration.dmi' icon_state = "antique" diff --git a/code/modules/explorer_drone/scanner_array.dm b/code/modules/explorer_drone/scanner_array.dm index 498e4a16c2b..e5b5f7a026c 100644 --- a/code/modules/explorer_drone/scanner_array.dm +++ b/code/modules/explorer_drone/scanner_array.dm @@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(scan_conditions,init_scan_conditions()) name = "Scanner array" icon = 'icons/obj/exploration.dmi' icon_state = "scanner_off" - desc = "Sophisticated scanning array. Easily influenced by enviroment." + desc = "A sophisticated scanning array. Easily influenced by its environment." /obj/machinery/exoscanner/Initialize(mapload) . = ..() @@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(scan_conditions,init_scan_conditions()) /datum/scan_condition/nebula name = "Nebula" - description = "Site is within a unusually dense nebula, to reduce scanner noise position dishes at least 15 tiles apart" + description = "Site is within an unusually dense nebula. To reduce scanner noise, position dishes at least 15 tiles apart." var/distance = 15 /datum/scan_condition/nebula/check_dish(obj/machinery/exoscanner/dish) @@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(scan_conditions,init_scan_conditions()) /datum/scan_condition/pulsar name = "Pulsar" - description = "Pulsar near the site requires dishes to be shielded from electomagnetic noise, ensure no other machines are working near the dish." + description = "A pulsar near the site requires dishes to be shielded from electomagnetic noise. Ensure no other machines are working near the dish." var/distance = 2 /datum/scan_condition/pulsar/check_dish(obj/machinery/exoscanner/dish) @@ -342,7 +342,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(scan_conditions,init_scan_conditions()) /datum/scan_condition/asteroid_belt name = "Asteroid Belt" - description = "An asteroid belt is obscuring the direct line of sight from the station to the site, ensure the dishes are placed outside of station z level." + description = "An asteroid belt is obscuring the direct line of sight from the station to the site. Ensure the dishes are placed outside of the station z level." /datum/scan_condition/asteroid_belt/check_dish(obj/machinery/exoscanner/dish) var/turf/dish_turf = get_turf(dish) @@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(scan_conditions,init_scan_conditions()) /datum/scan_condition/black_hole name = "Black Hole" - description = "Background black hole requires you to focus the scan point precisely, ensure the dishes isolated from rest of the station with at least 6 walls around them." + description = "A background black hole requires you to focus the scan point precisely. Ensure the dishes are isolated from rest of the station with at least 6 walls around them." /datum/scan_condition/black_hole/check_dish(obj/machinery/exoscanner/dish) var/wall_count = 0