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Lots of description changes and grammar fixes for heretics (#81761)
## About The Pull Request Changes a lot of text. Apart from grammar fixes, here are the notable changes: - Ash jaunt description just said it is a "short range jaunt" without explaining what exactly a jaunt is. I believe it is better to describe without comparing to another spell the player may not have experience with. - Cosmic grasp now explains what the deal is with star marks and cosmic fields. It is still possible to crosspath into a star mark spell, skipping this description, but I assume a player like that is experienced enough to know what the star mark does anyway... - The knowledge for ash spirits no longer refers to them as "Ash Men" - "Ash Spirit" is the mob's actual name. If you think "Ash Man" is a better name, I can change it around so that the mob gets renamed that instead. - Removes the lines from paradoxical curio's description about causing brain damage on examination - many heretic items cause adverse effects to heathens who try to interact with them, and there is never a need to clutter the description with them. - Changes the eldritch coin description, because the old one was, in my opinion, awkward. I changed it to be more inline with the other items' descriptions, and to not tell non-heretics what its purpose is. If you liked the old one better, I can revert this change. ## Why It's Good For The Game Grammar good. Accurate descriptions good. ## Changelog 🆑 fix: made some heretic descriptions more accurate spellcheck: improved english of the heretical eldritch patrons /🆑
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desc = "Patient seems to oxidise things around them at random, and seem to believe they are aiding a creature in climbing a mountin."
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scan_desc = "C_)L(#_I_##M;B"
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gain_text = span_warning("The rusted climb shall finish at the peak")
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lose_text = span_notice("The rusted climb? Whats that? An odd dream to be sure.")
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lose_text = span_notice("The rusted climb? What's that? An odd dream to be sure.")
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random_gain = FALSE
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/datum/brain_trauma/severe/rusting/on_life(seconds_per_tick, times_fired)
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