Lots of description changes and grammar fixes for heretics (#81761)

## About The Pull Request

Changes a lot of text. Apart from grammar fixes, here are the notable
changes:

- Ash jaunt description just said it is a "short range jaunt" without
explaining what exactly a jaunt is. I believe it is better to describe
without comparing to another spell the player may not have experience
with.
- Cosmic grasp now explains what the deal is with star marks and cosmic
fields. It is still possible to crosspath into a star mark spell,
skipping this description, but I assume a player like that is
experienced enough to know what the star mark does anyway...
- The knowledge for ash spirits no longer refers to them as "Ash Men" -
"Ash Spirit" is the mob's actual name. If you think "Ash Man" is a
better name, I can change it around so that the mob gets renamed that
instead.
- Removes the lines from paradoxical curio's description about causing
brain damage on examination - many heretic items cause adverse effects
to heathens who try to interact with them, and there is never a need to
clutter the description with them.
- Changes the eldritch coin description, because the old one was, in my
opinion, awkward. I changed it to be more inline with the other items'
descriptions, and to not tell non-heretics what its purpose is. If you
liked the old one better, I can revert this change.
## Why It's Good For The Game

Grammar good. Accurate descriptions good.
## Changelog
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fix: made some heretic descriptions more accurate
spellcheck: improved english of the heretical eldritch patrons
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ViktorKoL
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@@ -614,7 +614,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(sand_recipes, list(\
/obj/item/coin/eldritch
name = "eldritch coin"
desc = "Everytime it lands it bolts or opens doors, except for you."
desc = "A surprisingly heavy, ornate coin. Its sides seem to depict a different image each time you look."
icon_state = "coin_heretic"
custom_materials = list(/datum/material/diamond =HALF_SHEET_MATERIAL_AMOUNT, /datum/material/plasma =HALF_SHEET_MATERIAL_AMOUNT)
sideslist = list("heretic", "blade")