From eff745bf08e663867e3958ca3541dd07b77aa6c6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: tattle <66640614+dragomagol@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 28 Mar 2023 22:25:04 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Minor typo fixes (#74317) ## About The Why It's Good For The Game Pull Request Immersion ## Changelog :cl: Tattle spellcheck: fixed a few typos, mostly around breathing /:cl: Co-authored-by: tattle --- code/datums/diseases/heart_failure.dm | 2 +- code/datums/status_effects/debuffs/choke.dm | 4 ++-- .../dna_infuser/infuser_entries/infuser_tier_one_entries.dm | 2 +- code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/void_lore.dm | 2 +- code/modules/events/heart_attack.dm | 2 +- 5 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/datums/diseases/heart_failure.dm b/code/datums/diseases/heart_failure.dm index f398dfeb890..dfb40d56318 100644 --- a/code/datums/diseases/heart_failure.dm +++ b/code/datums/diseases/heart_failure.dm @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ to_chat(affected_mob, span_warning("You feel dizzy.")) affected_mob.adjust_confusion(6 SECONDS) if(DT_PROB(1.5, delta_time)) - to_chat(affected_mob, span_warning("You feel [pick("full", "nauseated", "sweaty", "weak", "tired", "short on breath", "uneasy")].")) + to_chat(affected_mob, span_warning("You feel [pick("full", "nauseated", "sweaty", "weak", "tired", "short of breath", "uneasy")].")) if(3 to 4) if(!sound) affected_mob.playsound_local(affected_mob, 'sound/health/slowbeat.ogg', 40, FALSE, channel = CHANNEL_HEARTBEAT, use_reverb = FALSE) diff --git a/code/datums/status_effects/debuffs/choke.dm b/code/datums/status_effects/debuffs/choke.dm index ab9edec1a04..89c9d50ab9e 100644 --- a/code/datums/status_effects/debuffs/choke.dm +++ b/code/datums/status_effects/debuffs/choke.dm @@ -59,8 +59,8 @@ check_audio_state() owner.visible_message(span_bolddanger("[owner] tries to speak, but can't! They're choking!"), \ - span_userdanger("You try to breath, but there's a block! You're choking!"), \ - ) + span_userdanger("You try to breathe, but there's a block! You're choking!"), \ + ) //barticles if(flaming) diff --git a/code/game/machinery/dna_infuser/infuser_entries/infuser_tier_one_entries.dm b/code/game/machinery/dna_infuser/infuser_entries/infuser_tier_one_entries.dm index 9604a065fc3..99431834d83 100644 --- a/code/game/machinery/dna_infuser/infuser_entries/infuser_tier_one_entries.dm +++ b/code/game/machinery/dna_infuser/infuser_entries/infuser_tier_one_entries.dm @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ desc = "The guy who said 'Whoever fights monsters should see to it that in the process he does not become a monster' clearly didn't see what a goliath miner can do!" threshold_desc = "you can walk on lava!" qualities = list( - "can breath both the station and lavaland air, but be careful around pure oxygen", + "can breathe both the station and lavaland air, but be careful around pure oxygen", "immune to ashstorms", "eyes that can see in the dark", "a tendril hand can easily dig through basalt and obliterate hostile fauna, but your glove-wearing days are behind you...", diff --git a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/void_lore.dm b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/void_lore.dm index f992d31d01f..a30dafaea33 100644 --- a/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/void_lore.dm +++ b/code/modules/antagonists/heretic/knowledge/void_lore.dm @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ /datum/heretic_knowledge/cold_snap name = "Aristocrat's Way" - desc = "Grants you immunity to cold temperatures, and removes your need breathe. \ + desc = "Grants you immunity to cold temperatures, and removes your need to breathe. \ You can still take damage due to a lack of pressure." gain_text = "I found a thread of cold breath. It lead me to a strange shrine, all made of crystals. \ Translucent and white, a depiction of a nobleman stood before me." diff --git a/code/modules/events/heart_attack.dm b/code/modules/events/heart_attack.dm index 67795d52458..8a8902d5724 100644 --- a/code/modules/events/heart_attack.dm +++ b/code/modules/events/heart_attack.dm @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ /datum/round_event/heart_attack/proc/attack_heart() var/mob/living/carbon/human/winner = pick_weight(victims) if(winner.has_status_effect(/datum/status_effect/exercised)) //Stuff that should "block" a heart attack rather than just deny eligibility for one goes here. - winner.visible_message(span_warning("[winner] grunts and clutches their chest for a moment, catching their breath."), span_medal("Your chest lurches in pain for a brief moment, which quickly fades. \ + winner.visible_message(span_warning("[winner] grunts and clutches their chest for a moment, catching [winner.p_their()] breath."), span_medal("Your chest lurches in pain for a brief moment, which quickly fades. \ You feel like you've just avoided a serious health disaster."), span_hear("You hear someone's breathing sharpen for a moment, followed by a sigh of relief."), 4) winner.playsound_local(get_turf(winner), 'sound/health/slowbeat.ogg', 40, 0, channel = CHANNEL_HEARTBEAT, use_reverb = FALSE) winner.Stun(3 SECONDS)