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SkyratBot 8be2fd4d88 [MIRROR] Rephrases advisory level descriptions (#27281)
* Rephrases advisory level descriptions (#82585)

## About The Pull Request

Some of the station alert descriptions contained grammatical errors.
This PR corrects some word choice, punctuation, and grammar mistakes as
well as editing some sections for clarity. For example, Pulsar Star's
current warning

> "Your sector's advisory level is Pulsar Star. A large unknown
electromagnetic field has stormed through nearby surveillance equipment.
No surveillance data has been able to be obtained showing no credible
threats to Nanotrasen assets within the Spinward Sector. The Department
advises maintaining high alert against potential threats, regardless of
a lack of information."

has been changed to

> "Your sector's advisory level is Pulsar Star. A large, unknown
electromagnetic field has stormed through nearby surveillance equipment
causing major data loss. Partial data was recovered and showed no
credible threats to Nanotrasen assets within the Spinward Sector;
however, the Department of Intelligence advises maintaining high alert
against potential threats due to the lack of complete data."

## Why It's Good For The Game

Readability is important

## Changelog
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spellcheck: grammar fixes in the roundstart advisory warnings
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Co-authored-by: MrMelbert <51863163+MrMelbert@ users.noreply.github.com>

* Rephrases advisory level descriptions

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Co-authored-by: Horatio22 <69338705+Horatio22@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: MrMelbert <51863163+MrMelbert@ users.noreply.github.com>
2024-04-15 22:20:40 -04:00
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