grammar never ends (#4421)

* Update Sleeper.dm

* Update robot_fabricator.dm

* Update requests_console.dm

* Update vr_console.dm

* Update teleporter.dm

* Update records_scanner.dm

* Update mercrenegade.dm

* Update clown_items.dm

* Update firstaid.dm

* Update teleporter.dm

* capitalization fixes

* Update clown_items.dm

code/game/gamemodes/mixed/mercrenegade.dm

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 /datum/game_mode/mercren
 	name = "Mercenaries & Renegades"
-	round_description = "A mercenary team has invaded the station, as well as other having brought their own form protection."
+	round_description = "A mercenary team has invaded the station, and others have brought their own form of protection."
-	extended_round_description = "Mercenaries and traitors spawn during this round."
+	extended_round_description = "Mercenaries and renegades spawn during this round."
 	config_tag = "mercren"
 	required_players = 16			//What could possibly go wrong?
 	required_players_secret = 15

code/game/machinery/Sleeper.dm

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 /obj/machinery/sleep_console
-	name = "Sleeper Console"
+	name = "sleeper console"
 	icon = 'icons/obj/Cryogenic2.dmi'
 	icon_state = "sleeperconsole"
 	var/obj/machinery/sleeper/sleeper
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 		return 1
 
 	if(sleeper.panel_open)
-		user << "<span class='notice'>Close the maintenance panel first.</span>"
+		to_chat(user, "<span class='notice'>Close the maintenance panel first.</span>")
 		return
 
 	if(!sleeper)
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 	else if(sleeper)
 		return sleeper.ui_interact(user)
 	else
-		user << "<span class='warning'>Sleeper not found!</span>"
+		to_chat(user, "<span class='warning'>Sleeper not found!</span>")
 
 /obj/machinery/sleep_console/attackby(var/obj/item/I, var/mob/user)
 	if(computer_deconstruction_screwdriver(user, I))
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
 
 /obj/machinery/sleeper
 	name = "sleeper"
-	desc = "A fancy bed with built-in injectors, a dialysis machine, and a limited health scanner."
+	desc = "A stasis pod with built-in injectors, a dialysis machine, and a limited health scanner."
 	icon = 'icons/obj/Cryogenic2.dmi'
 	icon_state = "sleeper_0"
 	density = 1
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@
 		return 1
 
 	if(usr == occupant)
-		usr << "<span class='warning'>You can't reach the controls from the inside.</span>"
+		to_chat(usr, "<span class='warning'>You can't reach the controls from the inside.</span>")
 		return
 
 	add_fingerprint(usr)
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@
 			I.loc = src
 			user.visible_message("<span class='notice'>\The [user] adds \a [I] to \the [src].</span>", "<span class='notice'>You add \a [I] to \the [src].</span>")
 		else
-			user << "<span class='warning'>\The [src] has a beaker already.</span>"
+			to_chat(user, "<span class='warning'>\The [src] has a beaker already.</span>")
 		return
 
 /obj/machinery/sleeper/verb/move_eject()
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@
 			if(DEAD)
 				return
 			if(UNCONSCIOUS)
-				usr << "<span class='notice'>You struggle through the haze to hit the eject button. This will take a couple of minutes...</span>"
+				to_chat(usr, "<span class='notice'>You struggle through the haze to hit the eject button. This will take a couple of minutes...</span>")
 				sleep(2 MINUTES)
 				if(!src || !usr || !occupant || (occupant != usr)) //Check if someone's released/replaced/bombed him already
 					return
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@
 	if(stat & (BROKEN|NOPOWER))
 		return
 	if(occupant)
-		user << "<span class='warning'>\The [src] is already occupied.</span>"
+		to_chat(user, "<span class='warning'>\The [src] is already occupied.</span>")
 		return
 
 	if(M == user)
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@
 
 	if(do_after(user, 20))
 		if(occupant)
-			user << "<span class='warning'>\The [src] is already occupied.</span>"
+			to_chat(user, "<span class='warning'>\The [src] is already occupied.</span>")
 			return
 		M.stop_pulling()
 		if(M.client)
@@ -333,8 +333,8 @@
 		if(occupant.reagents.get_reagent_amount(chemical) + amount <= 20)
 			use_power(amount * CHEM_SYNTH_ENERGY)
 			occupant.reagents.add_reagent(chemical, amount)
-			user << "Occupant now has [occupant.reagents.get_reagent_amount(chemical)] units of [available_chemicals[chemical]] in their bloodstream."
+			to_chat(user, "Occupant now has [occupant.reagents.get_reagent_amount(chemical)] units of [available_chemicals[chemical]] in their bloodstream.")
 		else
-			user << "The subject has too many chemicals."
+			to_chat(user, "The subject has too many chemicals in their bloodstream.")
 	else
-		user << "There's no suitable occupant in \the [src]."
+		to_chat(user, "There's no suitable occupant in \the [src].")

code/game/machinery/records_scanner.dm

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 //not a computer
 obj/machinery/scanner
-	name = "Identity Analyser"
+	name = "identity analyzer"
 	var/outputdir = 0
 	icon = 'icons/obj/stationobjs.dmi'
 	icon_state = "scanner_idle"
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ obj/machinery/scanner/attack_hand(mob/living/carbon/human/user)
 	<b><u>Black Marks</u></b>:<br> "}
 	for(var/A in marks)
 		text += "<span class='danger'>[A]</span><br>"
-	user << "<span class='notice'>You feel a sting as the scanner extracts some of your blood.</span>"
+	to_chat(user, "<span class='notice'>You feel a sting as the scanner extracts some of your blood.</span>")
 	var/turf/T = get_step(src,outputdir)
 	var/obj/item/weapon/paper/print = new(T)
 	print.name = "[mname] Report"

code/game/machinery/requests_console.dm

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ var/req_console_information = list()
 var/list/obj/machinery/requests_console/allConsoles = list()
 
 /obj/machinery/requests_console
-	name = "Requests Console"
+	name = "requests console"
 	desc = "A console intended to send requests to different departments on the station."
 	anchored = 1
 	icon = 'icons/obj/terminals.dmi'
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ var/list/obj/machinery/requests_console/allConsoles = list()
 	announcement.title = "[department] announcement"
 	announcement.newscast = 1
 
-	name = "[department] Requests Console"
+	name = "[department] requests console"
 	allConsoles += src
 	if(departmentType & RC_ASSIST)
 		req_console_assistance |= department
@@ -198,15 +198,15 @@ var/list/obj/machinery/requests_console/allConsoles = list()
 	updateUsrDialog()
 	return
 
-					//err... hacking code, which has no reason for existing... but anyway... it was once supposed to unlock priority 3 messanging on that console (EXTREME priority...), but the code for that was removed.
+					//err... hacking code, which has no reason for existing... but anyway... it was once supposed to unlock priority 3 messaging on that console (EXTREME priority...), but the code for that was removed.
 /obj/machinery/requests_console/attackby(var/obj/item/weapon/O as obj, var/mob/user as mob)
 	if(computer_deconstruction_screwdriver(user, O))
 		return
 	if(istype(O, /obj/item/device/multitool))
 		if(panel_open)
-			var/input = sanitize(input(usr, "What Department id would you like to give this Request Console?", "Multitool-Request Console interface", department))
+			var/input = sanitize(input(usr, "What Department ID would you like to give this request console?", "Multitool-Request Console Interface", department))
 			if(!input)
-				usr << "No input found please hang up and try your call again."
+				to_chat(usr, "No input found. Please hang up and try your call again.")
 				return
 			department = input
 			announcement.title = "[department] announcement"

code/game/machinery/robot_fabricator.dm

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 /obj/machinery/robotic_fabricator
-	name = "Robotic Fabricator"
+	name = "robotic fabricator"
 	icon = 'icons/obj/robotics.dmi'
 	icon_state = "fab-idle"
 	density = 1
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 					overlays -= "fab-load-metal"
 					updateDialog()
 		else
-			user << "The robot part maker is full. Please remove metal from the robot part maker in order to insert more."
+			to_chat(user, "The robot part maker is full. Please remove metal from the robot part maker in order to insert more.")
 
 /obj/machinery/robotic_fabricator/attack_hand(user as mob)
 	var/dat

code/game/machinery/teleporter.dm

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 /obj/machinery/computer/teleporter
-	name = "Teleporter Control Console"
+	name = "teleporter control console"
 	desc = "Used to control a linked teleportation Hub and Station."
 	icon_keyboard = "teleport_key"
 	icon_screen = "teleport"
@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@
 			L = locate("landmark*[C.data]") // use old stype
 
 		if(istype(L, /obj/effect/landmark/) && istype(L.loc, /turf))
-			usr << "You insert the coordinates into the machine."
+			to_chat(usr, "You insert the coordinates into the machine.")
-			usr << "A message flashes across the screen reminding the traveller that the nuclear authentication disk is to remain on the station at all times."
+			to_chat(usr, "A message flashes across the screen, reminding the user that the nuclear authentication disk is not transportable via insecure means.")
 			user.drop_item()
 			qdel(I)
 

code/game/machinery/vr_console.dm

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 /obj/machinery/vr_sleeper
-	name = "VR sleeper"
+	name = "virtual reality sleeper"
 	desc = "A fancy bed with built-in sensory I/O ports and connectors to interface users' minds with their bodies in virtual reality."
 	icon = 'icons/obj/Cryogenic2.dmi'
 	icon_state = "syndipod_0"
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@
 		occupant.enter_vr(avatar)
 
 		// Prompt for username after they've enterred the body.
-		var/newname = sanitize(input(avatar, "You are enterring virtual reality. Your username is currently [src.name]. Would you like to change it to something else?", "Name change") as null|text, MAX_NAME_LEN)
+		var/newname = sanitize(input(avatar, "You are entering virtual reality. Your username is currently [src.name]. Would you like to change it to something else?", "Name change") as null|text, MAX_NAME_LEN)
 		if (newname)
 			avatar.real_name = newname
 

code/game/objects/items/weapons/clown_items.dm

@@ -33,23 +33,23 @@
 	//I couldn't feasibly  fix the overlay bugs caused by cleaning items we are wearing.
 	//So this is a workaround. This also makes more sense from an IC standpoint. ~Carn
 	if(user.client && (target in user.client.screen))
-		user << "<span class='notice'>You need to take that [target.name] off before cleaning it.</span>"
+		to_chat(user, "<span class='notice'>You need to take that [target.name] off before cleaning it.</span>")
 	else if(istype(target,/obj/effect/decal/cleanable/blood))
-		user << "<span class='notice'>You scrub \the [target.name] out.</span>"
+		to_chat(user, "<span class='notice'>You scrub \the [target.name] out.</span>")
 		target.clean_blood()
 		return	//Blood is a cleanable decal, therefore needs to be accounted for before all cleanable decals.
 	else if(istype(target,/obj/effect/decal/cleanable))
-		user << "<span class='notice'>You scrub \the [target.name] out.</span>"
+		to_chat(user, "<span class='notice'>You scrub \the [target.name] out.</span>")
 		qdel(target)
 	else if(istype(target,/turf))
-		user << "<span class='notice'>You scrub \the [target.name] clean.</span>"
+		to_chat(user, "<span class='notice'>You scrub \the [target.name] clean.</span>")
 		var/turf/T = target
 		T.clean(src, user)
 	else if(istype(target,/obj/structure/sink))
-		user << "<span class='notice'>You wet \the [src] in the sink.</span>"
+		to_chat(user, "<span class='notice'>You wet \the [src] in the sink.</span>")
 		wet()
 	else
-		user << "<span class='notice'>You clean \the [target.name].</span>"
+		to_chat(user, "<span class='notice'>You clean \the [target.name].</span>")
 		target.clean_blood()
 	return
 

code/game/objects/items/weapons/storage/firstaid.dm

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
  * First Aid Kits
  */
 /obj/item/weapon/storage/firstaid
-	name = "first-aid kit"
+	name = "first aid kit"
 	desc = "It's an emergency medical kit for those serious boo-boos."
 	icon_state = "firstaid"
 	throw_speed = 2
@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@
 
 
 /obj/item/weapon/storage/firstaid/fire
-	name = "fire first-aid kit"
+	name = "fire first aid kit"
-	desc = "It's an emergency medical kit for when the toxins lab <i>-spontaneously-</i> burns down."
+	desc = "It's an emergency medical kit for when the toxins lab <i>spontaneously</i> burns down."
 	icon_state = "ointment"
 	item_state_slots = list(slot_r_hand_str = "firstaid-ointment", slot_l_hand_str = "firstaid-ointment")
 
@@ -55,8 +55,8 @@
 		return
 
 /obj/item/weapon/storage/firstaid/toxin
-	name = "toxin first aid"
+	name = "poison first aid kit" //IRL the term used would be poison first aid kit.
-	desc = "Used to treat when you have a high amoutn of toxins in your body."
+	desc = "Used to treat when one has a high amount of toxins in their body."
 	icon_state = "antitoxin"
 	item_state_slots = list(slot_r_hand_str = "firstaid-toxin", slot_l_hand_str = "firstaid-toxin")
 
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
 		return
 
 /obj/item/weapon/storage/firstaid/o2
-	name = "oxygen deprivation first aid"
+	name = "oxygen deprivation first aid kit"
 	desc = "A box full of oxygen goodies."
 	icon_state = "o2"
 	item_state_slots = list(slot_r_hand_str = "firstaid-o2", slot_l_hand_str = "firstaid-o2")
@@ -94,8 +94,8 @@
 		return
 
 /obj/item/weapon/storage/firstaid/adv
-	name = "advanced first-aid kit"
+	name = "advanced first aid kit"
-	desc = "Contains advanced medical treatments."
+	desc = "Contains advanced medical treatments, for <b>serious</b> boo-boos."
 	icon_state = "advfirstaid"
 	item_state_slots = list(slot_r_hand_str = "firstaid-advanced", slot_l_hand_str = "firstaid-advanced")