Surgery grammar fixes

code/modules/surgery/appendix.dm

@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@
 		return ..() && target.op_stage.appendix == 0
 
 	begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("[user] starts to separating [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool].", \
+		user.visible_message("[user] starts to separate [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool].", \
-		"You start to separating [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool]." )
+		"You start to separate [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool]." )
 		target.custom_pain("The pain in your abdomen is living hell!",1)
 		..()
 

code/modules/surgery/bones.dm

@@ -88,8 +88,8 @@
 		return affected.name == "head" && affected.open == 2 && affected.stage == 1
 
 	begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("[user] is beginning piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool]."  , \
+		user.visible_message("[user] is beginning to piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool]."  , \
-			"You are beginning piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool].")
+			"You are beginning to piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool].")
 		..()
 
 	end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)

code/modules/surgery/braincore.dm

@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
 		..()
 
 	end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut through [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].",		\
+		user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].",		\
-		"\blue You have cut through [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].")
+		"\blue You have cut [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].")
 		target.brain_op_stage = 2
 
 	fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -122,13 +122,13 @@
 		return ..() && target.brain_op_stage == 2
 
 	begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("[user] starts taking out bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].", \
+		user.visible_message("[user] starts taking bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].", \
-		"You start taking out bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].")
+		"You start taking bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].")
 		..()
 
 	end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("\blue [user] takes out all bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].",	\
+		user.visible_message("\blue [user] takes out all the bone chips in [target]'s brain with \the [tool].",	\
-		"\blue You take out all bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].")
+		"\blue You take out all the bone chips in [target]'s brain with \the [tool].")
 		target.brain_op_stage = 3
 
 
@@ -189,12 +189,12 @@
 		return ..() && target.brain_op_stage == 0
 
 	begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("[user] starts cutting [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].", \
+		user.visible_message("[user] starts cutting through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].", \
-		"You start cutting [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].")
+		"You start cutting through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].")
 
 	end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].",	\
+		user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].",	\
-		"\blue You cut [target]'s flesh with \the [tool], exposing the cores")
+		"\blue You cut through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool], exposing the cores.")
 		target.brain_op_stage = 1
 
 	fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -219,8 +219,8 @@
 		"You start cutting [target]'s silky innards apart with \the [tool].")
 
 	end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores",	\
+		user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores.",	\
-		"\blue You cut [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores")
+		"\blue You cut [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores.")
 		target.brain_op_stage = 2
 
 	fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -256,5 +256,5 @@
 
 
 	fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, failing to cut core out!", \
+		user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, causing \him to miss the core!", \
-		"\red Your hand slips, failing to cut core out!")
+		"\red Your hand slips, causing you to miss the core!")

code/modules/surgery/face.dm

@@ -85,13 +85,13 @@
 		return ..() && target.op_stage.face == 2
 
 	begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("[user] starts pulling skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].", \
+		user.visible_message("[user] starts pulling the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].", \
-		"You start pulling skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].")
+		"You start pulling the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].")
 		..()
 
 	end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("\blue [user] pulls skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].",	\
+		user.visible_message("\blue [user] pulls the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].",	\
-		"\blue You pull skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].")
+		"\blue You pull the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].")
 		target.op_stage.face = 3
 
 	fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)

code/modules/surgery/generic.dm

@@ -52,8 +52,8 @@
 
 	fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
 		var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
-		user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in a wrong spot with \the [tool]!", \
+		user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in the wrong place with \the [tool]!", \
-		"\red Your hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in a wrong spot with \the [tool]!")
+		"\red Your hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in the wrong place with \the [tool]!")
 		affected.createwound(CUT, 10)
 
 /datum/surgery_step/generic/clamp_bleeders
@@ -133,14 +133,14 @@
 
 	fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
 		var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
-		var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, tearing the edges of incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!"
+		var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, tearing the edges of the incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!"
-		var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, tearing the edges of incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!"
+		var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, tearing the edges of the incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!"
 		if (target_zone == "chest")
-			msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!"
+			msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!"
-			self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!"
+			self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!"
 		if (target_zone == "groin")
-			msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]"
+			msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]"
-			self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]!"
+			self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]!"
 		user.visible_message(msg, self_msg)
 		target.apply_damage(12, BRUTE, affected)
 

code/modules/surgery/implant.dm

@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
 		user.visible_message("\blue [user] puts \the [tool] inside [target]'s [get_cavity(affected)] cavity.", \
 		"\blue You put \the [tool] inside [target]'s [get_cavity(affected)] cavity." )
 		if (tool.w_class > get_max_wclass(affected)/2 && prob(50))
-			user << "\red You tear some vessels trying to fit such big object in this cavity."
+			user << "\red You tear some blood vessels trying to fit such a big object in this cavity."
 			var/datum/wound/internal_bleeding/I = new (15)
 			affected.wounds += I
 			affected.owner.custom_pain("You feel something rip in your [affected.display_name]!", 1)

code/modules/surgery/ribcage.dm

@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@
 		..()
 
 	end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut through [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].",		\
+		user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].",		\
-		"\blue You have cut through [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].")
+		"\blue You have cut [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].")
 		target.op_stage.ribcage = 1
 
 	fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -111,14 +111,14 @@
 		target.op_stage.ribcage = 1
 
 	fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
-		var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, bending [target]'s ribcage in a wrong shape!"
+		var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, bending [target]'s ribs the wrong way!"
-		var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, bending [target]'s ribcage in a wrong shape!"
+		var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, bending [target]'s ribs the wrong way!"
 		user.visible_message(msg, self_msg)
 		var/datum/organ/external/chest/affected = target.get_organ("chest")
 		affected.createwound(BRUISE, 20)
 		affected.fracture()
 		if (prob(40))
-			user.visible_message("\red Rib pierces the lung!")
+			user.visible_message("\red A rib pierces the lung!")
 			target.rupture_lung()
 
 /datum/surgery_step/ribcage/mend_ribcage

code/modules/surgery/robolimbs.dm

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 		if (affected.parent)
 			affected = affected.parent
 			user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, cutting [target]'s [affected.display_name] open!", \
-			"\red Your hand slips,  cutting [target]'s [affected.display_name] open!")
+			"\red Your hand slips, cutting [target]'s [affected.display_name] open!")
 			affected.createwound(CUT, 10)
 
 
@@ -65,8 +65,8 @@
 
 	begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
 		var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
-		user.visible_message("[user] is beginning reposition flesh and nerve endings where where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].", \
+		user.visible_message("[user] is beginning to reposition flesh and nerve endings where where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].", \
-		"You start repositioning flesh and nerve endings where where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].")
+		"You start repositioning flesh and nerve endings where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].")
 		..()
 
 	end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -101,8 +101,8 @@
 
 	begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
 		var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
-		user.visible_message("[user] starts adjusting area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool].", \
+		user.visible_message("[user] starts adjusting the area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool].", \
-		"You start adjusting area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]..")
+		"You start adjusting the area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool].")
 		..()
 
 	end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -140,14 +140,14 @@
 
 	begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
 		var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
-		user.visible_message("[user] starts attaching [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.", \
+		user.visible_message("[user] starts attaching \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.", \
-		"You start attaching [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.")
+		"You start attaching \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.")
 
 	end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
 		var/obj/item/robot_parts/L = tool
 		var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
-		user.visible_message("\blue [user] has attached [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.",	\
+		user.visible_message("\blue [user] has attached \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.",	\
-		"\blue You have attached [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.")
+		"\blue You have attached \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.")
 		affected.robotize()
 		if(L.sabotaged)
 			affected.sabotaged = 1