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Surgery grammar fixes

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LightningIron
2013-11-10 12:48:23 -06:00
parent 6f19999a9c
commit b5671e8bd8
8 changed files with 45 additions and 45 deletions
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code/modules/surgery/appendix.dm
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@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@
return ..() && target.op_stage.appendix == 0
begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("[user] starts to separating [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool].", \
"You start to separating [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool]." )
user.visible_message("[user] starts to separate [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool].", \
"You start to separate [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool]." )
target.custom_pain("The pain in your abdomen is living hell!",1)
..()

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code/modules/surgery/bones.dm
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@@ -88,8 +88,8 @@
return affected.name == "head" && affected.open == 2 && affected.stage == 1
begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("[user] is beginning piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool]." , \
"You are beginning piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool].")
user.visible_message("[user] is beginning to piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool]." , \
"You are beginning to piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool].")
..()
end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)

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code/modules/surgery/braincore.dm
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@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
..()
end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut through [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].", \
"\blue You have cut through [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].")
user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].", \
"\blue You have cut [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].")
target.brain_op_stage = 2
fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -122,13 +122,13 @@
return ..() && target.brain_op_stage == 2
begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("[user] starts taking out bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].", \
"You start taking out bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].")
user.visible_message("[user] starts taking bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].", \
"You start taking bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].")
..()
end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("\blue [user] takes out all bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].", \
"\blue You take out all bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].")
user.visible_message("\blue [user] takes out all the bone chips in [target]'s brain with \the [tool].", \
"\blue You take out all the bone chips in [target]'s brain with \the [tool].")
target.brain_op_stage = 3
@@ -189,12 +189,12 @@
return ..() && target.brain_op_stage == 0
begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("[user] starts cutting [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].", \
"You start cutting [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].")
user.visible_message("[user] starts cutting through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].", \
"You start cutting through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].")
end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].", \
"\blue You cut [target]'s flesh with \the [tool], exposing the cores")
user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].", \
"\blue You cut through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool], exposing the cores.")
target.brain_op_stage = 1
fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -219,8 +219,8 @@
"You start cutting [target]'s silky innards apart with \the [tool].")
end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores", \
"\blue You cut [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores")
user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores.", \
"\blue You cut [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores.")
target.brain_op_stage = 2
fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -256,5 +256,5 @@
fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, failing to cut core out!", \
"\red Your hand slips, failing to cut core out!")
user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, causing \him to miss the core!", \
"\red Your hand slips, causing you to miss the core!")

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code/modules/surgery/face.dm
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@@ -85,13 +85,13 @@
return ..() && target.op_stage.face == 2
begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("[user] starts pulling skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].", \
"You start pulling skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].")
user.visible_message("[user] starts pulling the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].", \
"You start pulling the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].")
..()
end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("\blue [user] pulls skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].", \
"\blue You pull skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].")
user.visible_message("\blue [user] pulls the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].", \
"\blue You pull the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].")
target.op_stage.face = 3
fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)

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code/modules/surgery/generic.dm
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@@ -52,8 +52,8 @@
fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in a wrong spot with \the [tool]!", \
"\red Your hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in a wrong spot with \the [tool]!")
user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in the wrong place with \the [tool]!", \
"\red Your hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in the wrong place with \the [tool]!")
affected.createwound(CUT, 10)
/datum/surgery_step/generic/clamp_bleeders
@@ -133,14 +133,14 @@
fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, tearing the edges of incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!"
var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, tearing the edges of incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!"
var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, tearing the edges of the incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!"
var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, tearing the edges of the incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!"
if (target_zone == "chest")
msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!"
self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!"
msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!"
self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!"
if (target_zone == "groin")
msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]"
self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]!"
msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]"
self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]!"
user.visible_message(msg, self_msg)
target.apply_damage(12, BRUTE, affected)

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code/modules/surgery/implant.dm
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@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
user.visible_message("\blue [user] puts \the [tool] inside [target]'s [get_cavity(affected)] cavity.", \
"\blue You put \the [tool] inside [target]'s [get_cavity(affected)] cavity." )
if (tool.w_class > get_max_wclass(affected)/2 && prob(50))
user << "\red You tear some vessels trying to fit such big object in this cavity."
user << "\red You tear some blood vessels trying to fit such a big object in this cavity."
var/datum/wound/internal_bleeding/I = new (15)
affected.wounds += I
affected.owner.custom_pain("You feel something rip in your [affected.display_name]!", 1)

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code/modules/surgery/ribcage.dm
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@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@
..()
end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut through [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].", \
"\blue You have cut through [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].")
user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].", \
"\blue You have cut [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].")
target.op_stage.ribcage = 1
fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -111,14 +111,14 @@
target.op_stage.ribcage = 1
fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, bending [target]'s ribcage in a wrong shape!"
var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, bending [target]'s ribcage in a wrong shape!"
var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, bending [target]'s ribs the wrong way!"
var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, bending [target]'s ribs the wrong way!"
user.visible_message(msg, self_msg)
var/datum/organ/external/chest/affected = target.get_organ("chest")
affected.createwound(BRUISE, 20)
affected.fracture()
if (prob(40))
user.visible_message("\red Rib pierces the lung!")
user.visible_message("\red A rib pierces the lung!")
target.rupture_lung()
/datum/surgery_step/ribcage/mend_ribcage

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code/modules/surgery/robolimbs.dm
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@@ -65,8 +65,8 @@
begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
user.visible_message("[user] is beginning reposition flesh and nerve endings where where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].", \
"You start repositioning flesh and nerve endings where where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].")
user.visible_message("[user] is beginning to reposition flesh and nerve endings where where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].", \
"You start repositioning flesh and nerve endings where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].")
..()
end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -101,8 +101,8 @@
begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
user.visible_message("[user] starts adjusting area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool].", \
"You start adjusting area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]..")
user.visible_message("[user] starts adjusting the area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool].", \
"You start adjusting the area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool].")
..()
end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
@@ -140,14 +140,14 @@
begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
user.visible_message("[user] starts attaching [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.", \
"You start attaching [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.")
user.visible_message("[user] starts attaching \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.", \
"You start attaching \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.")
end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool)
var/obj/item/robot_parts/L = tool
var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone)
user.visible_message("\blue [user] has attached [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.", \
"\blue You have attached [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.")
user.visible_message("\blue [user] has attached \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.", \
"\blue You have attached \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.")
affected.robotize()
if(L.sabotaged)
affected.sabotaged = 1