Lore tweaks

code/modules/lore_codex/lore_data_vr/important_locations.dm

@@ -17,14 +17,14 @@
 /datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_erigone/add_content()
 	name = "Virgo-Erigone (Star System)"
 	keywords += list("Virgo-Erigone")
-	data = "Virgo-Erigone is an A-type main sequence star with 81% more mass than Sol (the humans' home star), and almost nine times as bright.  It \
-	has a white glow, and a diameter that is about 34% larger than Sol. It has five major planets in its orbit.\
+	data = "Virgo-Erigone is a dimming and dying star with a warm yellow/orange glow like that of burning candle. It has eight planets in its orbit.\
 	<br><br>\
-	'Virgo' is most notable for the presence of one of only two known [quick_link("Phoron")] gas giants, designated [quick_link("Virgo 3")]. This makes the \
+	Also known as 'Virgo', the system is most notable for the presence of one of only two known [quick_link("Phoron")] gas giants, designated [quick_link("Virgo 3")]. This makes the \
 	system a popular location for Phoron research and refining.\
 	<br><br>\
-	Virgo-Erigone is mainly administered by [quick_link("Federation","The Federation")] as it resides primarily in Federation space, however the majority of the enterprise and \
-	assets in the system belong to [quick_link("SolGov")] and [quick_link("NanoTrasen")], giving both a fairly large amount of control over the governance."
+	Virgo-Erigone is mainly administered by [quick_link("Virgo-Erigone Governmental Authority","the Virgo-Erigone Governmental Authority")], which is owned by [quick_link("NanoTrasen")],\
+	as it resides over 30,000 lightyears away from [quick_link("SolGov")]'s sphere of influence. Despite its isolation, it generally abides by Sol's laws, as NanoTrasen is a human-owned \
+	company."
 
 /datum/lore/codex/page/radiance_energy_chain/add_content()
 	name = "R.E.C. (Artificial Satellites)"
@@ -38,42 +38,36 @@
 	by [quick_link("positronic")] equipped units in shielded chassis, or very brave humans in voidsuits that protect from extreme heat, and radiation. There are \
 	currently 19 stations in operation."
 
-/datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_prime/add_content()
-	name = "Virgo Prime (Terrestrial Planet)"
-	keywords += list("Virgo Prime")
-	data = "Virgo Prime is the first planet of Virgo-Eirgone. Primarily desert, temperatures can reach up to a blistering 330 \
-	kelvin (57<35>C).  Despite being about the size of Earth, it is home to only about 750,000 known residents, most of whom live \
-	in the spaceport colony of Anur. \
-	<br><br> \
-	One of the most interesting facts about this planet is that it is the native [quick_link("Zorren")] race, who until recently \
-	were a primitive and nomadic species.  Due to the arrival of various [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")] over the last two decades, \
-	the Zorren have benefitted greatly from the introduction of advanced technology into their culture. It is not known how many \
-	Zorren occupy the planet, but it is believed that at least two million live scattered across the deserts and mountains, where \
-	they subsist off of underground water sources, and hunt for prey."
+/datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_one/add_content()
+	name = "Virgo 1 (Hot-Ice Giant)"
+	keywords += list("Virgo 1")
+	data = "Virgo 1 is a tidally locked hot ice giant located closest to the star. Temperatures soar and drop between 490<39>K and 120<32>K. Winds on the planet often surpass \
+	supersonic speeds."
 
 /datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_two/add_content()
-	name = "Virgo 2 (Terrestrial Planet)"
+	name = "Virgo 2 (Metal-Rich Planet)"
 	keywords += list("Virgo 2")
 	data = "The second closest planet to [quick_link("Virgo-Erigone")], this planet has a high concentration of minerals inside its crust, as well as active volcanism and plate tectonics.  \
 	The temperature on the surface can reach up to 405 degrees kelvin (132<33>C) due to the relatively high albedo of the surface, which has deterred most people from the planet, except for two [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")], \
-	Greyson Manufactories and [quick_link("Xion Manufacturing Group")].  In orbit, the two companies each have a space station, used to coordinate and \
-	control their stations on the surface without having to suffer the intense heat.  Xion's station also doubles as a control and oversight facility for their \
+	Greyson Manufactories and [quick_link("Xion Manufacturing Group")]. In orbit, the two companies each have a space station, used to coordinate and \
+	control their stations on the surface without having to suffer the intense heat. Xion's station also doubles as a control and oversight facility for their \
 	[quick_link("drones","autonomous mining drones")].\
 	<br><br>\
 	Remnants of both Greyson and Xion's mining operations dot the surface, as well as ruins of mining \
 	outposts build by an unknown alien civilization, which researchers have noted it appears to be similar to ruins found inside the rings of [quick_link("Kara")]. \
 	Below the surface of Virgo 2 are many natural cave systems, dangerous and easy to get lost inside, which both companies make heavy \
-	use of.  A noted rivalry exists between the two mining giants, as well as with smaller groups more interested in the xenoarcheological value of the alien ruins.\
+	use of. A noted rivalry exists between the two mining giants, as well as with smaller groups more interested in the xenoarcheological value of the alien ruins.\
 	<br><br>\
 	The very high temperatures, dangerous (sometimes magma-filled) caves, and the only presence of civilization being mining operations has made tourism \
 	for Virgo 2 mostly non-existent, with the exception of explorers who specifically seek out hellish landscapes, which are plentiful with all the ruins, \
-	volcanoes, twisting caves, and general lawlessness.  The occasional remains of previous explorers near certain hotspots somehow does not deter them."
+	volcanoes, twisting caves, and general lawlessness. The occasional remains of previous explorers near certain hotspots somehow does not deter them."
 
 /datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_three/add_content()
-	name = "Virgo 3 (Gas Giant)"
+	name = "Virgo 3 (Phoron Giant)"
 	keywords += list("Virgo 3")
-	data = "Virgo 3 is one of only two known gas giants composed primarily of [quick_link("Phoron")] in the known universe. This fact has attracted several [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")] into \
-	the system to exploit the resources available here for mining and research. Virgo 3 itself has several moons, though the only noteworthy moon is [quick_link("Virgo-3B")] which has native life. \
+	data = "Virgo 3 is one of only two gas giants composed primarily of [quick_link("Phoron")] in the known galaxy. This fact has attracted several [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")] into \
+	the system to exploit the resources available here for mining and research. Virgo 3 itself has several moons, though the only noteworthy moon is [quick_link("Virgo-3B")] which \
+	has native life and an abundance of phoron deposits, as well as a phoron rich atmosphere. \
 	<br><br>\
 	The largest TSC to exploit this planet is none other than Phoron research giant [quick_link("NanoTrasen")], having built several stations orbiting the planet \
 	for both research and phoron refining purposes."
@@ -91,10 +85,42 @@
 	The presence of several [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")] on the surface has introduced new life forms to the planet via bioengineering, and now several 'new' species are commonly sighted per year. \
 	Currently, [quick_link("NanoTrasen")] is constructing a 'space elevator' for commercial purposes, as the atmosphere of Virgo-3B is inimical to shuttles, and engines in particular."
 
+/datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_prime/add_content() // Virgo 4 technically.
+	name = "Virgo Prime (Terrestrial Planet)"
+	keywords += list("Virgo Prime")
+	data = "Virgo Prime is the fourth planet of Virgo-Eirgone. Although primarily desert, temperatures linger around only 287 kelvin (~14<31>C). \
+	It is the only planet in the system with an environment that supports oxygen-breathing lifeforms. \
+	<br><br> \
+	While being about the size of Earth, it is home to only about 750,000 known residents, most of whom live \
+	in the spaceport colony of Anur. The planet has a very shallow ocean, which is only an average of 1000 meters deep.\
+	<br><br> \
+	One of the most interesting facts about this planet is that it is the native [quick_link("Zorren")] race, who until recently \
+	were a primitive and nomadic species.  Due to the arrival of various [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")] over the last two decades, \
+	the Zorren have benefitted greatly from the introduction of advanced technology into their culture. It is not known how many \
+	Zorren occupy the planet, but it is believed that at least two million live scattered across the deserts and mountains, where \
+	they subsist off of underground water sources, and hunt for prey."
+
+/datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_five/add_content()
+	name = "Virgo 5 (Rocky Ice Planet)"
+	keywords += list("Virgo 5")
+	data = "Virgo 5 is a cold, inhospitable wasteland contaminated with toxic phoron-based compounds. At temperatures around 213 kelvin (-60<36>C), \
+	it can support only the most hardy of phoron-based life, such as space carp, which are unaffected by the frigid temperatures or deadly \
+	atmosphere. Scientists believe this planet was once closer to its host star, but over time was pushed out beyond the habitable zone by \
+	other large planets."
+
+/datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_five/add_content()
+	name = "The Outer Planets"
+	keywords += list("The Outer Planets")
+	data = "The last three planets in the system are two small rocky worlds, Virgo 6 and 7, and finally Virgo 8 which is a frozen gas giant \
+	whose temperatures reach only 49<34>K. The planet has several moons, but none of these worlds are of any significance. Virgo 6 and 7, as well \
+	as 8's moons have no substantial deposits of any useful minerals, nor do they have an abundance of phoron. They are left largely ignored by \
+	the local [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")], though this also makes them a safe haven for various pirate and smuggler stations."
+
+/* ToDo: ReDo.
 /datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_central_command/add_content()
-	name = "Virgo Central Command (Artificial Satellite)"
+	name = "Virgo Central Command (Colony)"
 	keywords += list("Virgo Central Command")
-	data = "The Virgo Central Command is a large facility in orbit of the planet [quick_link("Virgo 3")] which handles the loading and \
+	data = "The Virgo Central Command is a large facility on [quick_link("Virgo-3B")] which handles the loading and \
 	unloading, refuelling, and general maintenance of large spacecraft. The main structure is owned by \
 	[quick_link("NanoTrasen")], but individual offices, docking/loading bays, and warehouses are often leased to individuals \
 	or organisations.  The position of the spaceport allows it to function not only as a key node for transport inside the Virgo-Erigone \
@@ -104,28 +130,15 @@
 	nearby facilities owned by a mixture of corporations and entities may possess habitation space, the port itself is not \
 	designed to be a living habitat - its proximity to Virgo 3 makes transport of people and materials to and from \
 	the facility and the planet's stations via shuttle extremely cost-efficient."
-
-/datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_four/add_content()
-	name = "Virgo 4 (Ice Planet)"
-	keywords += list("Virgo 4")
-	data = "Although outside of the habitable zone, and with a surface temperature averaging only 202 kelvin (-71<37>C), somehow this barren world still manages to \
-	sustain a niche biome of largely undiscovered alien life."
+*/
 
 /datum/lore/codex/page/nsb_adephagia/add_content()
-	name = "NSB Adephagia (Artificial Satellite)"
-	keywords += list("NSB Adephagia")
-	data = "One of the most prominent installations in the [quick_link("Virgo 3")] subsystem, the NSB Adephagia is owned \
-	and operated by [quick_link("NanoTrasen")].  It was originally built to service the various mining operations \
-	occurring within the Virgo 3 system, however it has grown into what it is today due to what was discovered inside \
-	the interior of the rock.  Both phoron and alien artifacts were found inside, catapulting the asteroid outpost \
-	into a main attraction inside the subsystem.\
+	name = "NSB Adephagia (Space Elevator)"
+	keywords += list("NSB Adephagia", "Tether")
+	data = "Also known as the 'Tether', the NSB Adephagia is one of the most prominent installations in the [quick_link("Virgo-Erigone")] star system. \
+	Owned and operated by [quick_link("NanoTrasen")], the facility was built on [quick_link("Virgo-3B")] in 2561 to provide easy access to mining \
+	operations on the surface. Both phoron and alien artifacts are often found in the rocks, provoking substantial scientific interest into the moon's \
+	largely unknown history.\
 	<br><br>\
-	Today it houses a population of civilians, whom work to maintain \
-	the colony and support the local mining industry.  The colony also has managed to achieve a degree of \
-	self-sufficiency, and possesses many amenities and features that most other asteroid bases in the \
-	subsystem lack."
-
-/datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_five/add_content()
-	name = "Virgo 5 (Gas Giant)"
-	keywords += list("Virgo 5")
-	data = "An ice giant, with a beautiful ring system circling it. The average temperature for it is 165 kelvin (-157<35>C)."
+	Today it houses a population of civilians, whom work to maintain the facility and support the local mining industry. Employees often commute to the \
+	installation via an underground transit network that links the facility to a neighboring colony." // ToDo: Add link to CentCom colony.