From b5671e8bd8afcfe5cea025cb1cb3e3d8f1199ee6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: LightningIron Date: Sun, 10 Nov 2013 12:48:23 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] Surgery grammar fixes --- code/modules/surgery/appendix.dm | 4 ++-- code/modules/surgery/bones.dm | 4 ++-- code/modules/surgery/braincore.dm | 28 ++++++++++++++-------------- code/modules/surgery/face.dm | 8 ++++---- code/modules/surgery/generic.dm | 16 ++++++++-------- code/modules/surgery/implant.dm | 2 +- code/modules/surgery/ribcage.dm | 10 +++++----- code/modules/surgery/robolimbs.dm | 18 +++++++++--------- 8 files changed, 45 insertions(+), 45 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/modules/surgery/appendix.dm b/code/modules/surgery/appendix.dm index 54a26427fc..ede75704ee 100644 --- a/code/modules/surgery/appendix.dm +++ b/code/modules/surgery/appendix.dm @@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ return ..() && target.op_stage.appendix == 0 begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("[user] starts to separating [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool].", \ - "You start to separating [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool]." ) + user.visible_message("[user] starts to separate [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool].", \ + "You start to separate [target]'s appendix from the abdominal wall with \the [tool]." ) target.custom_pain("The pain in your abdomen is living hell!",1) ..() diff --git a/code/modules/surgery/bones.dm b/code/modules/surgery/bones.dm index 75e3b6e099..d0d30cfd20 100644 --- a/code/modules/surgery/bones.dm +++ b/code/modules/surgery/bones.dm @@ -88,8 +88,8 @@ return affected.name == "head" && affected.open == 2 && affected.stage == 1 begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("[user] is beginning piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool]." , \ - "You are beginning piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool].") + user.visible_message("[user] is beginning to piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool]." , \ + "You are beginning to piece together [target]'s skull with \the [tool].") ..() end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) diff --git a/code/modules/surgery/braincore.dm b/code/modules/surgery/braincore.dm index c95904dcd7..d94615c953 100644 --- a/code/modules/surgery/braincore.dm +++ b/code/modules/surgery/braincore.dm @@ -27,8 +27,8 @@ ..() end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut through [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].", \ - "\blue You have cut through [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].") + user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].", \ + "\blue You have cut [target]'s skull open with \the [tool].") target.brain_op_stage = 2 fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) @@ -122,13 +122,13 @@ return ..() && target.brain_op_stage == 2 begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("[user] starts taking out bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].", \ - "You start taking out bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].") + user.visible_message("[user] starts taking bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].", \ + "You start taking bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].") ..() end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("\blue [user] takes out all bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].", \ - "\blue You take out all bone chips out of [target]'s brain with \the [tool].") + user.visible_message("\blue [user] takes out all the bone chips in [target]'s brain with \the [tool].", \ + "\blue You take out all the bone chips in [target]'s brain with \the [tool].") target.brain_op_stage = 3 @@ -189,12 +189,12 @@ return ..() && target.brain_op_stage == 0 begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("[user] starts cutting [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].", \ - "You start cutting [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].") + user.visible_message("[user] starts cutting through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].", \ + "You start cutting through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].") end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].", \ - "\blue You cut [target]'s flesh with \the [tool], exposing the cores") + user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool].", \ + "\blue You cut through [target]'s flesh with \the [tool], exposing the cores.") target.brain_op_stage = 1 fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) @@ -219,8 +219,8 @@ "You start cutting [target]'s silky innards apart with \the [tool].") end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores", \ - "\blue You cut [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores") + user.visible_message("\blue [user] cuts [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores.", \ + "\blue You cut [target]'s innards apart with \the [tool], exposing the cores.") target.brain_op_stage = 2 fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) @@ -256,5 +256,5 @@ fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/slime/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, failing to cut core out!", \ - "\red Your hand slips, failing to cut core out!") \ No newline at end of file + user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, causing \him to miss the core!", \ + "\red Your hand slips, causing you to miss the core!") \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/code/modules/surgery/face.dm b/code/modules/surgery/face.dm index e215487d0b..b3569b0887 100644 --- a/code/modules/surgery/face.dm +++ b/code/modules/surgery/face.dm @@ -85,13 +85,13 @@ return ..() && target.op_stage.face == 2 begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("[user] starts pulling skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].", \ - "You start pulling skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].") + user.visible_message("[user] starts pulling the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].", \ + "You start pulling the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].") ..() end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("\blue [user] pulls skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].", \ - "\blue You pull skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].") + user.visible_message("\blue [user] pulls the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].", \ + "\blue You pull the skin on [target]'s face back in place with \the [tool].") target.op_stage.face = 3 fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) diff --git a/code/modules/surgery/generic.dm b/code/modules/surgery/generic.dm index ede924d8b4..9ebf546d44 100644 --- a/code/modules/surgery/generic.dm +++ b/code/modules/surgery/generic.dm @@ -52,8 +52,8 @@ fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone) - user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in a wrong spot with \the [tool]!", \ - "\red Your hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in a wrong spot with \the [tool]!") + user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in the wrong place with \the [tool]!", \ + "\red Your hand slips, slicing open [target]'s [affected.display_name] in the wrong place with \the [tool]!") affected.createwound(CUT, 10) /datum/surgery_step/generic/clamp_bleeders @@ -133,14 +133,14 @@ fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone) - var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, tearing the edges of incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!" - var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, tearing the edges of incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!" + var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, tearing the edges of the incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!" + var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, tearing the edges of the incision on [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]!" if (target_zone == "chest") - msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!" - self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!" + msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!" + self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s torso with \the [tool]!" if (target_zone == "groin") - msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]" - self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]!" + msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]" + self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, damaging several organs in [target]'s lower abdomen with \the [tool]!" user.visible_message(msg, self_msg) target.apply_damage(12, BRUTE, affected) diff --git a/code/modules/surgery/implant.dm b/code/modules/surgery/implant.dm index edc89ac0ac..01d54bedaa 100644 --- a/code/modules/surgery/implant.dm +++ b/code/modules/surgery/implant.dm @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ user.visible_message("\blue [user] puts \the [tool] inside [target]'s [get_cavity(affected)] cavity.", \ "\blue You put \the [tool] inside [target]'s [get_cavity(affected)] cavity." ) if (tool.w_class > get_max_wclass(affected)/2 && prob(50)) - user << "\red You tear some vessels trying to fit such big object in this cavity." + user << "\red You tear some blood vessels trying to fit such a big object in this cavity." var/datum/wound/internal_bleeding/I = new (15) affected.wounds += I affected.owner.custom_pain("You feel something rip in your [affected.display_name]!", 1) diff --git a/code/modules/surgery/ribcage.dm b/code/modules/surgery/ribcage.dm index 48a22b27e1..747d8a4363 100644 --- a/code/modules/surgery/ribcage.dm +++ b/code/modules/surgery/ribcage.dm @@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ ..() end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut through [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].", \ - "\blue You have cut through [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].") + user.visible_message("\blue [user] has cut [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].", \ + "\blue You have cut [target]'s ribcage open with \the [tool].") target.op_stage.ribcage = 1 fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) @@ -111,14 +111,14 @@ target.op_stage.ribcage = 1 fail_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) - var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, bending [target]'s ribcage in a wrong shape!" - var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, bending [target]'s ribcage in a wrong shape!" + var/msg = "\red [user]'s hand slips, bending [target]'s ribs the wrong way!" + var/self_msg = "\red Your hand slips, bending [target]'s ribs the wrong way!" user.visible_message(msg, self_msg) var/datum/organ/external/chest/affected = target.get_organ("chest") affected.createwound(BRUISE, 20) affected.fracture() if (prob(40)) - user.visible_message("\red Rib pierces the lung!") + user.visible_message("\red A rib pierces the lung!") target.rupture_lung() /datum/surgery_step/ribcage/mend_ribcage diff --git a/code/modules/surgery/robolimbs.dm b/code/modules/surgery/robolimbs.dm index 97db284622..8faa6b6511 100644 --- a/code/modules/surgery/robolimbs.dm +++ b/code/modules/surgery/robolimbs.dm @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if (affected.parent) affected = affected.parent user.visible_message("\red [user]'s hand slips, cutting [target]'s [affected.display_name] open!", \ - "\red Your hand slips, cutting [target]'s [affected.display_name] open!") + "\red Your hand slips, cutting [target]'s [affected.display_name] open!") affected.createwound(CUT, 10) @@ -65,8 +65,8 @@ begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone) - user.visible_message("[user] is beginning reposition flesh and nerve endings where where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].", \ - "You start repositioning flesh and nerve endings where where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].") + user.visible_message("[user] is beginning to reposition flesh and nerve endings where where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].", \ + "You start repositioning flesh and nerve endings where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be with [tool].") ..() end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) @@ -101,8 +101,8 @@ begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone) - user.visible_message("[user] starts adjusting area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool].", \ - "You start adjusting area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool]..") + user.visible_message("[user] starts adjusting the area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool].", \ + "You start adjusting the area around [target]'s [affected.display_name] with \the [tool].") ..() end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) @@ -140,14 +140,14 @@ begin_step(mob/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone) - user.visible_message("[user] starts attaching [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.", \ - "You start attaching [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.") + user.visible_message("[user] starts attaching \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.", \ + "You start attaching \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.") end_step(mob/living/user, mob/living/carbon/human/target, target_zone, obj/item/tool) var/obj/item/robot_parts/L = tool var/datum/organ/external/affected = target.get_organ(target_zone) - user.visible_message("\blue [user] has attached [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.", \ - "\blue You have attached [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.") + user.visible_message("\blue [user] has attached \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.", \ + "\blue You have attached \the [tool] where [target]'s [affected.display_name] used to be.") affected.robotize() if(L.sabotaged) affected.sabotaged = 1