diff --git a/code/datums/locations/qerrvallis.dm b/code/datums/locations/qerrvallis.dm index 2c70b2f7b2b..a3cc2468ba0 100644 --- a/code/datums/locations/qerrvallis.dm +++ b/code/datums/locations/qerrvallis.dm @@ -26,32 +26,32 @@ ..(creator) /datum/locations/qarrkloa - name = "Qarr’kloa" - desc = "Mythically considered the first State-City ever built by Skrellkind, Qarr’kloa attracts thousands of tourists and archeologists \ + name = "Qarr'kloa" + desc = "Mythically considered the first State-City ever built by Skrellkind, Qarr'kloa attracts thousands of tourists and archeologists \ every year thanks to the ancestral structures, built thousands of years ago by the Skrell, scattered in its vicinity." /datum/locations/moglar - name = "Mo’glar" - desc = "Built on the northern coast of Qorr’gloa, Mo’glar was, at the time of Xi’Krri’oal’s colonization, a major port of trade between \ + name = "Mo'glar" + desc = "Built on the northern coast of Qorr'gloa, Mo'glar was, at the time of Xi'Krri'oal's colonization, a major port of trade between \ the two continents of the planet. It has kept that role to this day, although it never truly adapted to inter-planetary trade, leaving the \ - task of exporting Qerrbalak’s goods to other planets to other cities, mainly on Xi’Krri’oal." + task of exporting Qerrbalak's goods to other planets to other cities, mainly on Xi'Krri'oal." /datum/locations/miqoxi - name = "Mi’qoxi" - desc = "This city, built on the small patch of islands north of Xi’Krri’oal, owes most of its current status to the infamous Qerr-Skria \ - Glo’morr Krrixi who, in the 23th century BCE, built a large empire spanning from the Qo’rria Sea to the current city of Qal’krrea, mostly \ - through military conquests. As the center of his empire, Mi’qoxi became a large center of population and industry and while the fall of \ - the empire at Krrixi’s death did put a halt to the city’s growth, it is still today one of the biggest cities of the continent." + name = "Mi'qoxi" + desc = "This city, built on the small patch of islands north of Xi'Krri'oal, owes most of its current status to the infamous Qerr-Skria \ + Glo'morr Krrixi who, in the 23th century BCE, built a large empire spanning from the Qo'rria Sea to the current city of Qal'krrea, mostly \ + through military conquests. As the center of his empire, Mi'qoxi became a large center of population and industry and while the fall of \ + the empire at Krrixi's death did put a halt to the city's growth, it is still today one of the biggest cities of the continent." /datum/locations/kallo - name = "Kal’lo" - desc = "A relatively recent city compared to the other major cities of the planet, Kal’lo quickly rose in status by fathering some of the most \ - important figures of modern skrellian society. It is notably the birthplace of Xikrra Kol’goa, who wrote the Lo’glo’mog’rri in 46 BCE, \ + name = "Kal'lo" + desc = "A relatively recent city compared to the other major cities of the planet, Kal'lo quickly rose in status by fathering some of the most \ + important figures of modern skrellian society. It is notably the birthplace of Xikrra Kol'goa, who wrote the Lo'glo'mog'rri in 46 BCE, \ the constitutional code that is still used by most of the skrellian states in the galaxy." /datum/locations/glimorr - name = "Gli’morr" - desc = "While Gli’morr is not as heavily-populated than its continental counterparts, its touristic potential made it rich enough to finance \ + name = "Gli'morr" + desc = "While Gli'morr is not as heavily-populated than its continental counterparts, its touristic potential made it rich enough to finance \ the biggest research center of the planet, covering dozens of scientific fields. Its Academy is just as much renowned, and even the lowest \ Qrri-Mog (although most of its students prefer to continue their studies until they become Qerr-Mog) coming out of its classrooms is \ considered part of the elite." diff --git a/code/datums/locations/vir.dm b/code/datums/locations/vir.dm index 2affc4ea54f..3a407f1dc88 100644 --- a/code/datums/locations/vir.dm +++ b/code/datums/locations/vir.dm @@ -17,12 +17,12 @@ /datum/locations/firnir name = "Firnir" - desc = "Tidally locked to Vir and having temperatures in excess of 570 degrees kelvin (299°C) on the day side has caused this planet to go mostly ignored." + desc = "Tidally locked to Vir and having temperatures in excess of 570 degrees kelvin (299°C) on the day side has caused this planet to go mostly ignored." /datum/locations/tyr name = "Tyr" desc = "Second closest planet, with a high concentration of minerals in the crust, but otherwise a typical planet. The surface temperature can reach \ - 405 degrees kelvin (132°C), which deter most mining operations, except for one, which has a mining base and a few orbitals established, utilizing \ + 405 degrees kelvin (132°C), which deter most mining operations, except for one, which has a mining base and a few orbitals established, utilizing \ specialized equipment, chiefly being autonomous synthetic mining drones, to retrieve precious ore in a rather expensive, but safer way, compared to the \ pirate haven that is asteroid mining." @@ -30,16 +30,16 @@ name = "Sif" desc = "Falling within Vir's 'habitable zone', the third planet was the first to be colonized, initially by a large group of colonists owing \ loyalty to their own employers. Unfortunate events discussed previously had forced the settlement to be abandoned, and then reclaimed. \ - The planet's mean temperature is 286 kelvin (13°C), chilly but habitable." + The planet's mean temperature is 286 kelvin (13°C), chilly but habitable." /datum/locations/magni name = "Magni" - desc = "Outside of the habitable zone, Vir D is generally at 202 kelvin (-71°C)." + desc = "Outside of the habitable zone, Vir D is generally at 202 kelvin (-71°C)." /datum/locations/kara name = "Kara" desc = "A gas giant, with a large number of moons. Captured asteroids, to be specific. Many of these asteroids are being used by different companies for \ - various purposes. The temperature of the gas giant is 150 kelvin (-108°C)" + various purposes. The temperature of the gas giant is 150 kelvin (-108°C)" /datum/locations/kara/New(var/creator) contents.Add( @@ -65,4 +65,4 @@ /datum/locations/rota name = "Rota" - desc = "A Neptune-like ice giant, with a beautiful ring system circling it. It is 165 kelvin (-157°C)." + desc = "A Neptune-like ice giant, with a beautiful ring system circling it. It is 165 kelvin (-157°C)." diff --git a/code/modules/examine/descriptions/devices.dm b/code/modules/examine/descriptions/devices.dm index 933d3cb2ceb..98b6b597166 100644 --- a/code/modules/examine/descriptions/devices.dm +++ b/code/modules/examine/descriptions/devices.dm @@ -9,12 +9,12 @@ that is the Exonet.
\
\ The Exonet is the predominant interstellar telecomm system, servicing trillions of devices across a large portion of human-controlled space. \ - It is distributed by a massive network of telecommunication satellites, some privately owned and others owned by the systems’ local governments, \ + It is distributed by a massive network of telecommunication satellites, some privately owned and others owned by the systems' local governments, \ that utilize FTL technologies to bounce data between satellites at speeds that would not be possible at sub-light technology. This communicator \ uses a protocol called Exonet Protocol Version 2, generally shortened to EPv2.
\
\ EPv2 is the most common communications protocol in the Exonet, and was specifically designed for it. It was designed to facilitate communication \ - between any device in a star system, and have the ability to forward interstellar requests at the root node of that system’s Exonet. \ + between any device in a star system, and have the ability to forward interstellar requests at the root node of that system's Exonet. \ It is also built to cope with the reality that the numerous nodes in a system will likely have frequent outages. The protocol allows for \ up to 18,446,744,073,709,551,616 unique addresses, one of which is assigned to this device." diff --git a/code/modules/lore_codex/lore_data/important_locations.dm b/code/modules/lore_codex/lore_data/important_locations.dm index bee3212a186..fdb49c2dc77 100644 --- a/code/modules/lore_codex/lore_data/important_locations.dm +++ b/code/modules/lore_codex/lore_data/important_locations.dm @@ -42,13 +42,13 @@ name = "Firnir (Terrestrial Planet)" keywords += list("Firnir") data = "Firnir is the first planet of Vir, tidally locked to it, and having temperatures in excess of 570 degrees \ - kelvin (299°C) on the day side has caused this planet to go mostly ignored." + kelvin (299°C) on the day side has caused this planet to go mostly ignored." /datum/lore/codex/page/tyr/add_content() name = "Tyr (Terrestrial Planet)" keywords += list("Tyr") data = "The second closest planet to [quick_link("Vir")], this planet has a high concentration of minerals inside its crust, as well as active volcanism and plate tectonics. \ - The temperature on the surface can reach up to 405 degrees kelvin (132°C), which has deterred most people from the planet, except for two [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")], \ + The temperature on the surface can reach up to 405 degrees kelvin (132°C), which has deterred most people from the planet, except for two [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")], \ Greyson Manufactories and [quick_link("Xion Manufacturing Group")]. In orbit, the two companies each have a space station, used to coordinate and \ control their stations on the surface without having to suffer the intense heat. Xion's station also doubles as a control and oversight facility for their \ [quick_link("drones","autonomous mining drones")].\ @@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ /datum/lore/codex/page/magni/add_content() name = "Magni (Terrestrial Planet)" keywords += list("Magni") - data = "Outside of the habitable zone, the barren world Magni is generally at 202 kelvin (-71°C)." + data = "Outside of the habitable zone, the barren world Magni is generally at 202 kelvin (-71°C)." /datum/lore/codex/page/kara/add_content() name = "Kara (Gas Giant)" @@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ to be the remnants of a much larger moon that was ripped apart by Kara, long ago. Curerntly, a large number of these \ asteroids are being used by many different businesses, and some governmental infrastructure has been built. The most prominent \ asteroid installation is the [quick_link("Northern Star", "NCS Northern Star")], a general purpose colony owned and operated by \ - [quick_link("NanoTrasen")]. The mid-atmospheric temperature of the gas giant averages to around 150 kelvin (-108°C)." + [quick_link("NanoTrasen")]. The mid-atmospheric temperature of the gas giant averages to around 150 kelvin (-108°C)." /datum/lore/codex/page/northern_star/add_content() name = "Northern Star (Artificial Satellite)" @@ -126,4 +126,4 @@ /datum/lore/codex/page/rota/add_content() name = "Rota (Gas Giant)" keywords += list("Rota") - data = "An ice giant, with a beautiful ring system circling it. The average temperature for it is 165 kelvin (-157°C)." + data = "An ice giant, with a beautiful ring system circling it. The average temperature for it is 165 kelvin (-157°C)." diff --git a/code/modules/lore_codex/lore_data_vr/important_locations.dm b/code/modules/lore_codex/lore_data_vr/important_locations.dm index f4cb30baedd..2cdc93ba8d6 100644 --- a/code/modules/lore_codex/lore_data_vr/important_locations.dm +++ b/code/modules/lore_codex/lore_data_vr/important_locations.dm @@ -41,14 +41,14 @@ /datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_one/add_content() name = "Virgo 1 (Hot-Ice Giant)" keywords += list("Virgo 1") - data = "Virgo 1 is a tidally locked hot ice giant located closest to the star. Temperatures soar and drop between 490°K and 120°K. Winds on the planet often surpass \ + data = "Virgo 1 is a tidally locked hot ice giant located closest to the star. Temperatures soar and drop between 490°K and 120°K. Winds on the planet often surpass \ supersonic speeds." /datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_two/add_content() name = "Virgo 2 (Metal-Rich Planet)" keywords += list("Virgo 2") data = "The second closest planet to [quick_link("Virgo-Erigone")], this planet has a high concentration of minerals inside its crust, as well as active volcanism and plate tectonics. \ - The temperature on the surface can reach up to 405 degrees kelvin (132°C) due to the relatively high albedo of the surface, which has deterred most people from the planet, except for two [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")], \ + The temperature on the surface can reach up to 405 degrees kelvin (132°C) due to the relatively high albedo of the surface, which has deterred most people from the planet, except for two [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")], \ Greyson Manufactories and [quick_link("Xion Manufacturing Group")]. In orbit, the two companies each have a space station, used to coordinate and \ control their stations on the surface without having to suffer the intense heat. Xion's station also doubles as a control and oversight facility for their \ [quick_link("drones","autonomous mining drones")].\ @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ /datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_prime/add_content() // Virgo 4 technically. name = "Virgo 4 / Virgo-Prime (Terrestrial Planet)" keywords += list("Virgo 4","Virgo-Prime") - data = "Virgo 4, also known as Virgo-Prime, is the fourth planet of Virgo-Eirgone. Although primarily desert, temperatures linger around only 287 kelvin (~14°C). \ + data = "Virgo 4, also known as Virgo-Prime, is the fourth planet of Virgo-Eirgone. Although primarily desert, temperatures linger around only 287 kelvin (~14°C). \ It is the only planet in the system with an environment that supports oxygen-breathing lifeforms. \

\ While being about the size of Earth, it is home to only about 750,000 known residents, most of whom live \ @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ /datum/lore/codex/page/virgo_five/add_content() name = "Virgo 5 (Rocky Ice Planet)" keywords += list("Virgo 5") - data = "Virgo 5 is a cold, inhospitable wasteland contaminated with toxic phoron-based compounds. At temperatures around 213 kelvin (-60°C), \ + data = "Virgo 5 is a cold, inhospitable wasteland contaminated with toxic phoron-based compounds. At temperatures around 213 kelvin (-60°C), \ it can support only the most hardy of phoron-based life, such as space carp, which are unaffected by the frigid temperatures or deadly \ atmosphere. Scientists believe this planet was once closer to its host star, but over time was pushed out beyond the habitable zone by \ other large planets." @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ name = "The Outer Worlds" keywords += list("The Outer Worlds") data = "The last three planets in the system are two small rocky worlds, Virgo 6 and 7, and finally Virgo 8 which is a frozen gas giant \ - whose temperatures reach only 49°K. The planet has several moons, but none of these worlds are of any significance. Virgo 6 and 7, as well \ + whose temperatures reach only 49°K. The planet has several moons, but none of these worlds are of any significance. Virgo 6 and 7, as well \ as 8's moons have no substantial deposits of any useful minerals, nor do they have an abundance of phoron. They are left largely ignored by \ the local [quick_link("TSC", "TSCs")], though this also makes them a safe haven for various pirate and smuggler stations."