From 247f9712c5a54f58b73e057b554398a36128aab7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: FloFluoro <3611705+FloFluoro@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Fri, 22 Jul 2022 13:38:07 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Fixes grammar/punctuation on beverage descriptions (#18499) --- .../food_and_drinks/drinks/drinks/cans.dm | 2 +- .../reagents/chemistry/reagents/drink_cold.dm | 4 ++-- .../reagents/chemistry/reagents/drinks.dm | 16 ++++++++-------- 3 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/modules/food_and_drinks/drinks/drinks/cans.dm b/code/modules/food_and_drinks/drinks/drinks/cans.dm index 3f139e6a509..087a9ba12fc 100644 --- a/code/modules/food_and_drinks/drinks/drinks/cans.dm +++ b/code/modules/food_and_drinks/drinks/drinks/cans.dm @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ /obj/item/reagent_containers/food/drinks/cans/cola name = "space cola" - desc = "Cola. in space." + desc = "Cola. In space." icon_state = "cola" list_reagents = list("cola" = 30) diff --git a/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/drink_cold.dm b/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/drink_cold.dm index a24cdec7d93..f9368509d1a 100644 --- a/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/drink_cold.dm +++ b/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/drink_cold.dm @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ adj_drowsy = -10 SECONDS drink_icon = "glass_brown" drink_name = "Glass of Space Cola" - drink_desc = "A glass of refreshing Space Cola" + drink_desc = "A glass of refreshing Space Cola." taste_description = "cola" /datum/reagent/consumable/drink/cold/nuka_cola @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ adj_sleepy = -4 SECONDS drink_icon = "nuka_colaglass" drink_name = "Nuka Cola" - drink_desc = "Don't cry, Don't raise your eye, It's only nuclear wasteland" + drink_desc = "Don't cry, Don't raise your eye, It's only nuclear wasteland." harmless = FALSE taste_description = "radioactive cola" diff --git a/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/drinks.dm b/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/drinks.dm index 3531541c8e4..0d631b06632 100644 --- a/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/drinks.dm +++ b/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/drinks.dm @@ -59,11 +59,11 @@ /datum/reagent/consumable/drink/carrotjuice name = "Carrot juice" id = "carrotjuice" - description = "It is just like a carrot but without crunching." + description = "Just like a carrot, but without the crunching." color = "#973800" // rgb: 151, 56, 0 drink_icon = "carrotjuice" drink_name = "Glass of carrot juice" - drink_desc = "It is just like a carrot but without crunching." + drink_desc = "Just like a carrot, but without the crunching." taste_description = "carrot juice" /datum/reagent/consumable/drink/carrotjuice/on_mob_life(mob/living/M) @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ color = "#863333" // rgb: 134, 51, 51 drink_icon = "berryjuice" drink_name = "Glass of berry juice" - drink_desc = "Berry juice. Or maybe its jam. Who cares?" + drink_desc = "Berry juice. Or maybe it's jam. Who cares?" taste_description = "berry juice" /datum/reagent/consumable/drink/poisonberryjuice @@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ adj_temp_hot = 5 drink_icon = "hot_coco" drink_name = "Glass of hot coco" - drink_desc = "Delicious and cozy" + drink_desc = "Delicious and cozy." taste_description = "chocolate" /datum/reagent/consumable/drink/coffee @@ -358,10 +358,10 @@ /datum/reagent/consumable/drink/coffee/cafe_latte/cafe_mocha name = "Cafe Mocha" id = "cafe_mocha" - description = "The perfect blend of coffe, milk, and chocolate." + description = "The perfect blend of coffee, milk, and chocolate." color = "#673629" drink_name = "Cafe Mocha" - drink_desc = "The perfect blend of coffe, milk, and chocolate." + drink_desc = "The perfect blend of coffee, milk, and chocolate." taste_description = "chocolatey coffee" /datum/reagent/consumable/drink/tea @@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ nutriment_factor = 4 * REAGENTS_METABOLISM drink_icon = "chocolatepudding" drink_name = "Chocolate Pudding" - drink_desc = "Tasty" + drink_desc = "A decadent chocolate dessert, in drinkable form." taste_description = "chocolate" /datum/reagent/consumable/drink/vanillapudding @@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ nutriment_factor = 4 * REAGENTS_METABOLISM drink_icon = "vanillapudding" drink_name = "Vanilla Pudding" - drink_desc = "Tasty." + drink_desc = "A rich vanilla dessert, in drinkable form." taste_description = "vanilla" /datum/reagent/consumable/drink/cherryshake