From ae252508e471f5b8a09dde15e18b550dd8e647cd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: tigercat2000 Date: Sat, 15 Jul 2017 06:36:46 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Grammar & Formatting --- .../game/machinery/computer/communications.dm | 2 +- code/modules/busy_space/air_traffic.dm | 14 +- code/modules/busy_space/organizations.dm | 226 +++++++++--------- 3 files changed, 117 insertions(+), 125 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/game/machinery/computer/communications.dm b/code/game/machinery/computer/communications.dm index fb5fbb31bff..bcb086827ef 100644 --- a/code/game/machinery/computer/communications.dm +++ b/code/game/machinery/computer/communications.dm @@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ event_announcement.Announce("Docking request for trading ship denied.", "Docking request") if("ToggleATC") atc.squelched = !atc.squelched - to_chat(usr, "ATC traffic is now: [atc.squelched ? "Disabled" : "Enabled"]") + to_chat(usr, "ATC traffic is now: [atc.squelched ? "Disabled" : "Enabled"].") nanomanager.update_uis(src) return 1 diff --git a/code/modules/busy_space/air_traffic.dm b/code/modules/busy_space/air_traffic.dm index 178433623f1..e327b8ce37f 100644 --- a/code/modules/busy_space/air_traffic.dm +++ b/code/modules/busy_space/air_traffic.dm @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ var/datum/lore/atc_controller/atc = new/datum/lore/atc_controller var/next_message //When the next message should happen in world.time var/force_chatter_type //Force a specific type of messages - var/squelched = 0 //If ATC is squelched currently + var/squelched = FALSE //If ATC is squelched currently /datum/lore/atc_controller/New() spawn(30 SECONDS) //Lots of lag at the start of a shift. @@ -36,11 +36,11 @@ var/datum/lore/atc_controller/atc = new/datum/lore/atc_controller if(yes) if(!squelched) msg("Rerouting traffic away from [using_map.station_name].") - squelched = 1 + squelched = TRUE else if(squelched) msg("Resuming normal traffic routing around [using_map.station_name].") - squelched = 0 + squelched = FALSE /datum/lore/atc_controller/proc/shift_ending(var/evac = 0) msg("Automated Shuttle departing [using_map.station_name] for [using_map.dock_name] on routine transfer route.", "NT Automated Shuttle") @@ -62,10 +62,10 @@ var/datum/lore/atc_controller/atc = new/datum/lore/atc_controller var/destname = pick(dest.destination_names) //Pick a random holding from the destination var/combined_name = "[owner] [prefix] [shipname]" - var/alt_atc_names = list("[using_map.station_short] TraCon","[using_map.station_short] Control","[using_map.station_short] STC","[using_map.station_short] Airspace") - var/wrong_atc_names = list("Sol Command","Orion Control", "[using_map.dock_name]") - var/mission_noun = list("flight","mission","route") - var/request_verb = list("requesting","calling for","asking for") + var/alt_atc_names = list("[using_map.station_short] TraCon", "[using_map.station_short] Control", "[using_map.station_short] STC", "[using_map.station_short] Airspace") + var/wrong_atc_names = list("Sol Command", "Orion Control", "[using_map.dock_name]") + var/mission_noun = list("flight", "mission", "route") + var/request_verb = list("requesting", "calling for", "asking for") //First response is 'yes', second is 'no' var/requests = list("[using_map.station_short] transit clearance" = list("permission for transit granted", "permission for transit denied, contact regional on 953.5"), diff --git a/code/modules/busy_space/organizations.dm b/code/modules/busy_space/organizations.dm index d8d34267713..65291f32a88 100644 --- a/code/modules/busy_space/organizations.dm +++ b/code/modules/busy_space/organizations.dm @@ -1,15 +1,15 @@ //Datums for different companies that can be used by busy_space /datum/lore/organization var/name = "" // Organization's name - var/short_name = "" // Organization's shortname (NanoTrasen for "NanoTrasen Incorporated") - var/acronym = "" // Organization's acronym, e.g. 'NT' for NanoTrasen'. + var/short_name = "" // Organization's shortname (Nanotrasen for "Nanotrasen Incorporated") + var/acronym = "" // Organization's acronym, e.g. 'NT' for Nanotrasen'. var/desc = "" // One or two paragraph description of the organization, but only current stuff. Currently unused. - var/history = "" // Historical discription of the organization's origins Currently unused. + var/history = "" // Historical description of the organization's origins Currently unused. var/work = "" // Short description of their work, eg "an arms manufacturer" var/headquarters = "" // Location of the organization's HQ. Currently unused. var/motto = "" // A motto/jingle/whatever, if they have one. Currently unused. - var/list/ship_prefixes = list() //Some might have more than one! Like NanoTrasen. Value is the mission they perform, e.g. ("ABC" = "mission desc") + var/list/ship_prefixes = list() //Some might have more than one! Like Nanotrasen. Value is the mission they perform, e.g. ("ABC" = "mission desc") var/list/ship_names = list( //Names of spaceships. This is a mostly generic list that all the other organizations inherit from if they don't have anything better. "Kestrel", "Beacon", @@ -54,18 +54,18 @@ // TSCs /datum/lore/organization/tsc/nanotrasen - name = "NanoTrasen Incorporated" - short_name = "NanoTrasen" + name = "Nanotrasen Incorporated" + short_name = "Nanotrasen" acronym = "NT" - desc = "NanoTrasen is one of the foremost research and development companies in SolGov space. \ - Originally focused on consumer products, their swift move into the field of Phoron has lead to \ - them being the foremost experts on the substance and its uses. In the modern day, NanoTrasen prides \ + desc = "Nanotrasen is one of the foremost research and development companies in SolGov space. \ + Originally focused on consumer products, their swift move into the field of Plasma has lead to \ + them being the foremost experts on the substance and its uses. In the modern day, Nanotrasen prides \ itself on being an early adopter to as many new technologies as possible, often offering the newest \ products to their employees. In an effort to combat complaints about being 'guinea pigs', Nanotrasen \ also offers one of the most comprehensive medical plans in SolGov space, up to and including cloning \ and therapy.\

\ - NT's most well known products are its phoron based creations, especially those used in Cryotherapy. \ + NT's most well known products are its plasma based creations, especially those used in Cryotherapy. \ It also boasts an prosthetic line, which is provided to its employees as needed, and is used as an incentive \ for newly tested posibrains to remain with the company." history = "" // To be written someday. @@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ name = "Hephaestus Industries" short_name = "Hephaestus" acronym = "HI" - desc = "Hephaestus Industries is the largest supplier of arms, ammunition, and small millitary vehicles in Sol space. \ + desc = "Hephaestus Industries is the largest supplier of arms, ammunition, and small military vehicles in Sol space. \ Hephaestus products have a reputation for reliability, and the corporation itself has a noted tendency to stay removed \ from corporate politics. They enforce their neutrality with the help of a fairly large asset-protection contingent which \ prevents any contracting polities from using their own materiel against them. SolGov itself is one of Hephastus� largest \ @@ -117,12 +117,12 @@ name = "Vey Medical" short_name = "Vey Med" acronym = "VM" - desc = "Vey-Med is one of the newer TSCs on the block and is notable for being largely owned and opperated by Skrell. \ + desc = "Vey-Med is one of the newer TSCs on the block and is notable for being largely owned and operated by Skrell. \ Despite the suspicion and prejudice leveled at them for their alien origin, Vey-Med has obtained market dominance in \ - the sale of medical equipment-- from surgical tools to large medical devices to the Oddyseus trauma response mecha \ + the sale of medical equipment-- from surgical tools to large medical devices to the Odysseus trauma response mecha \ and everything in between. Their equipment tends to be top-of-the-line, most obviously shown by their incredibly \ human-like FBP designs. Vey�s rise to stardom came from their introduction of ressurective cloning, although in \ - recent years they�ve been forced to diversify as their patents expired and NanoTrasen-made medications became \ + recent years they�ve been forced to diversify as their patents expired and Nanotrasen-made medications became \ essential to modern cloning." history = "" work = "medical equipment supplier" @@ -138,10 +138,10 @@ name = "Zeng-Hu pharmaceuticals" short_name = "Zeng-Hu" acronym = "ZH" - desc = "Zeng-Hu is an old TSC, based in the Sol system. Until the discovery of Phoron, Zeng-Hu maintained a stranglehold \ + desc = "Zeng-Hu is an old TSC, based in the Sol system. Until the discovery of Plasma, Zeng-Hu maintained a stranglehold \ on the market for medications, and many household names are patentted by Zeng-Hu-- Bicaridyne, Dylovene, Tricordrizine, \ and Dexalin all came from a Zeng-Hu medical laboratory. Zeng-Hu�s fortunes have been in decline as Nanotrasen�s near monopoly \ - on phoron research cuts into their R&D and Vey-Med�s superior medical equipment effectively decimated their own equipment \ + on plasma research cuts into their R&D and Vey-Med�s superior medical equipment effectively decimated their own equipment \ interests. The three-way rivalry between these companies for dominance in the medical field is well-known and a matter of \ constant economic speculation." history = "" @@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ and odds and ends like implanted wrist-watches. Their business model tends towards smaller, boutique operations, giving \ it a reputation for high price and luxury, with Bishop cyberware often rivalling Vey-Med�s for cost. Bishop�s reputation \ for catering towards the interests of human augmentation enthusiasts instead of positronics have earned it ire from the \ - Positronic Rights Group and puts it in ideological (but not economic) comptetition with Morpheus Cyberkinetics." + Positronic Rights Group and puts it in ideological (but not economic) competition with Morpheus Cyberkinetics." history = "" work = "cybernetics and augmentation manufacturer" headquarters = "" @@ -251,9 +251,7 @@ "Great White Snark", "No Shirt No Shoes", "Callsign" - - - ) + ) destination_names = list( "a dockyard on New Canaan" ) @@ -291,22 +289,21 @@ ship_prefixes = list("FSS-T" = "transportation", "FSS-D" = "diplomatic", "FSS-F" = "freight") destination_names = list( - "Venus", - "Earth", - "Luna", - "Mars", - "Titan", - "Ahdomai", - "Kelune", - "Dalstadt", - "New Canaan", - "Jargon 4", - "Hoorlm", - "Xarxis 5", - "Aurum", - "Moghes" - - ) + "Venus", + "Earth", + "Luna", + "Mars", + "Titan", + "Ahdomai", + "Kelune", + "Dalstadt", + "New Canaan", + "Jargon 4", + "Hoorlm", + "Xarxis 5", + "Aurum", + "Moghes" + ) /datum/lore/organization/gov/tajara name = "The Alchemist's Council" @@ -323,22 +320,21 @@ ship_prefixes = list("FSS-T" = "transportation", "FSS-D" = "diplomatic", "FSS-F" = "freight")//copyed from solgov until new ones can be thought of destination_names = list( - "Venus", - "Earth", - "Luna", - "Mars", - "Titan", - "Ahdomai", - "Kelune", - "Dalstadt", - "New Canaan", - "Jargon 4", - "Hoorlm", - "Xarxis 5", - "Aurum", - "Moghes" - - ) + "Venus", + "Earth", + "Luna", + "Mars", + "Titan", + "Ahdomai", + "Kelune", + "Dalstadt", + "New Canaan", + "Jargon 4", + "Hoorlm", + "Xarxis 5", + "Aurum", + "Moghes" + ) /datum/lore/organization/gov/vulp name = "The Assembly" @@ -355,22 +351,21 @@ ship_prefixes = list("FSS-T" = "transportation", "FSS-D" = "diplomatic", "FSS-F" = "freight")//copyed from solgov until new ones can be thought of destination_names = list( - "Venus", - "Earth", - "Luna", - "Mars", - "Titan", - "Ahdomai", - "Kelune", - "Dalstadt", - "New Canaan", - "Jargon 4", - "Hoorlm", - "Xarxis 5", - "Aurum", - "Moghes", - - ) + "Venus", + "Earth", + "Luna", + "Mars", + "Titan", + "Ahdomai", + "Kelune", + "Dalstadt", + "New Canaan", + "Jargon 4", + "Hoorlm", + "Xarxis 5", + "Aurum", + "Moghes" + ) /datum/lore/organization/gov/synth name = "Synthetic Union" @@ -387,22 +382,21 @@ ship_prefixes = list("01" = "transportation", "10" = "diplomatic", "112" = "freight")//copyed from solgov until new ones can be thought of destination_names = list( - "Venus", - "Earth", - "Luna", - "Mars", - "Titan", - "Ahdomai", - "Kelune", - "Dalstadt", - "New Canaan", - "Jargon 4", - "Hoorlm", - "Xarxis 5", - "Aurum", - "Moghes" - - ) + "Venus", + "Earth", + "Luna", + "Mars", + "Titan", + "Ahdomai", + "Kelune", + "Dalstadt", + "New Canaan", + "Jargon 4", + "Hoorlm", + "Xarxis 5", + "Aurum", + "Moghes" + ) /datum/lore/organization/gov/grey name = "The Technocracy" @@ -419,22 +413,21 @@ ship_prefixes = list("GT" = "transportation", "GD" = "diplomatic", "GF" = "freight")//copyed from solgov until new ones can be thought of destination_names = list( - "Venus", - "Earth", - "Luna", - "Mars", - "Titan", - "Ahdomai", - "Kelune", - "Dalstadt", - "New Canaan", - "Jargon 4", - "Hoorlm", - "Xarxis 5", - "Aurum", - "Moghes" - - ) + "Venus", + "Earth", + "Luna", + "Mars", + "Titan", + "Ahdomai", + "Kelune", + "Dalstadt", + "New Canaan", + "Jargon 4", + "Hoorlm", + "Xarxis 5", + "Aurum", + "Moghes" + ) /datum/lore/organization/gov/vox name = "The Shoal" @@ -442,7 +435,7 @@ acronym = "SHA" desc = "The Shoal is the primary ark ship of the reclusive Vox species.\ Little is known about The Shoal's political structure as Vox typically shy away from diplomatic engagements.\ - Subsequently, it is considered a politically neutral entity in galactic affairs by most governments.." + Subsequently, it is considered a politically neutral entity in galactic affairs by most governments." history = "" // Todo work = "Traders" headquarters = "Shoal" @@ -451,19 +444,18 @@ ship_prefixes = list("Legitimate Transport" = "transportation", "Legitimate Trader" = "freight") destination_names = list( - "Venus", - "Earth", - "Luna", - "Mars", - "Titan", - "Ahdomai", - "Kelune", - "Dalstadt", - "New Canaan", - "Jargon 4", - "Hoorlm", - "Xarxis 5", - "Aurum", - "Moghes", - - ) \ No newline at end of file + "Venus", + "Earth", + "Luna", + "Mars", + "Titan", + "Ahdomai", + "Kelune", + "Dalstadt", + "New Canaan", + "Jargon 4", + "Hoorlm", + "Xarxis 5", + "Aurum", + "Moghes" + ) \ No newline at end of file