diff --git a/code/datums/mind.dm b/code/datums/mind.dm
index 6c861f1b714..80ffd082f68 100644
--- a/code/datums/mind.dm
+++ b/code/datums/mind.dm
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@
new_objective.explanation_text = "Absorb [target_number] compatible genomes."
if("blood")
new_objective = new /datum/objective/blood
- new_objective.explanation_text = "Accumulate at least [target_number] units of blood in total."
+ new_objective.explanation_text = "Accumulate at least [target_number] total units of blood."
new_objective.owner = src
new_objective.target_amount = target_number
@@ -713,7 +713,7 @@
if(src in ticker.mode.head_revolutionaries)
ticker.mode.head_revolutionaries -= src
ticker.mode.update_rev_icons_removed(src)
- to_chat(current, "\red Revolution has been disappointed of your leader traits! You are a regular revolutionary now!")
+ to_chat(current, "\red Revolution has been disappointed of your leadership traits! You are a regular revolutionary now!")
else if(!(src in ticker.mode.revolutionaries))
to_chat(current, "\red You are now a revolutionary! Help your cause. Do not harm your fellow freedom fighters. You can identify your comrades by the red \"R\" icons, and your leaders by the blue \"R\" icons. Help them kill the heads to win the revolution!")
else
@@ -728,7 +728,7 @@
if(src in ticker.mode.revolutionaries)
ticker.mode.revolutionaries -= src
ticker.mode.update_rev_icons_removed(src)
- to_chat(current, "\red You have proved your devotion to revolution! You are a head revolutionary now!")
+ to_chat(current, "\red You have proven your devotion to revolution! You are a head revolutionary now!")
else if(!(src in ticker.mode.head_revolutionaries))
to_chat(current, "\blue You are a member of the revolutionaries' leadership now!")
else
@@ -857,7 +857,7 @@
special_role = SPECIAL_ROLE_WIZARD
//ticker.mode.learn_basic_spells(current)
ticker.mode.update_wiz_icons_added(src)
- to_chat(current, "You are the Space Wizard!")
+ to_chat(current, "You are a Space Wizard!")
current.faction = list("wizard")
log_admin("[key_name(usr)] has wizarded [key_name(current)]")
message_admins("[key_name_admin(usr)] has wizarded [key_name_admin(current)]")
@@ -898,7 +898,7 @@
ticker.mode.grant_changeling_powers(current)
ticker.mode.update_change_icons_added(src)
special_role = SPECIAL_ROLE_CHANGELING
- to_chat(current, "Your powers are awoken. A flash of memory returns to us... we are a changeling!")
+ to_chat(current, "Your powers have awoken. A flash of memory returns to us... we are a changeling!")
log_admin("[key_name(usr)] has changelinged [key_name(current)]")
message_admins("[key_name_admin(usr)] has changelinged [key_name_admin(current)]")
@@ -942,7 +942,7 @@
slaved.masters += src
som = slaved //we MIGT want to mindslave someone
special_role = SPECIAL_ROLE_VAMPIRE
- to_chat(current, "Your powers are awoken. Your lust for blood grows... You are a Vampire!")
+ to_chat(current, "Your powers have awoken. Your lust for blood grows... You are a Vampire!")
log_admin("[key_name(usr)] has vampired [key_name(current)]")
message_admins("[key_name_admin(usr)] has vampired [key_name_admin(current)]")
@@ -1360,7 +1360,7 @@
to_chat(H, "A tome, a message from your new master, appears in your [where].")
if(!ticker.mode.equip_cultist(current))
- to_chat(H, "Spawning an amulet from your Master failed.")
+ to_chat(H, "Summoning an amulet from your Master failed.")
/datum/mind/proc/make_Rev()
if(ticker.mode.head_revolutionaries.len>0)
diff --git a/code/game/gamemodes/objective.dm b/code/game/gamemodes/objective.dm
index 61d6d15e9ba..6dabdcf49d6 100644
--- a/code/game/gamemodes/objective.dm
+++ b/code/game/gamemodes/objective.dm
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ var/list/potential_theft_objectives = subtypesof(/datum/theft_objective) \
return shuttle_master.emergency.is_hijacked()
/datum/objective/hijackclone
- explanation_text = "Hijack the emergency shuttle by ensuring only you (or your copies) escape."
+ explanation_text = "Hijack the shuttle by ensuring only you (or your copies) escape."
martyr_compatible = 0
/datum/objective/hijackclone/check_completion()
@@ -489,7 +489,7 @@ var/list/potential_theft_objectives = subtypesof(/datum/theft_objective) \
/datum/objective/blood/proc/gen_amount_goal(low = 150, high = 400)
target_amount = rand(low,high)
target_amount = round(round(target_amount/5)*5)
- explanation_text = "Accumulate at least [target_amount] units of blood in total."
+ explanation_text = "Accumulate at least [target_amount] total units of blood."
return target_amount
/datum/objective/blood/check_completion()
diff --git a/code/game/objects/items/weapons/tools.dm b/code/game/objects/items/weapons/tools.dm
index 0b3711b6f7d..6200d6dbf85 100644
--- a/code/game/objects/items/weapons/tools.dm
+++ b/code/game/objects/items/weapons/tools.dm
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
toolspeed = 1
/obj/item/weapon/wrench/suicide_act(mob/user)
- user.visible_message("[user] is beating themself to death with [src]! It looks like they're trying to commit suicide!")
+ user.visible_message("[user] is beating themselves to death with [src]! It looks like they're trying to commit suicide!")
playsound(loc, 'sound/weapons/genhit.ogg', 50, 1, -1)
return (BRUTELOSS)
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@
toolspeed = 0.5
/obj/item/weapon/wirecutters/power
- name = "Jaws of Life"
+ name = "jaws of life"
desc = "A set of jaws of life, the magic of science has managed to fit it down into a device small enough to fit in a tool belt. It's fitted with a cutting head."
icon_state = "jaws_cutter"
item_state = "jawsoflife"
@@ -670,7 +670,7 @@ obj/item/weapon/weldingtool/experimental/process()
/obj/item/weapon/crowbar/large
name = "crowbar"
- desc = "It's a big crowbar. It doesn't fit in your pockets, because it's big."
+ desc = "It's a big crowbar. It doesn't fit in your pockets, because its too big."
force = 12
w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_NORMAL
throw_speed = 3
@@ -688,8 +688,8 @@ obj/item/weapon/weldingtool/experimental/process()
toolspeed = 0.5
/obj/item/weapon/crowbar/power
- name = "Jaws of Life"
- desc = "A set of jaws of life, the magic of science has managed to fit it down into a device small enough to fit in a tool belt. It's fitted with a prying head"
+ name = "jaws of life"
+ desc = "A set of jaws of life, the magic of science has managed to fit it down into a device small enough to fit in a tool belt. It's fitted with a prying head."
icon_state = "jaws_pry"
item_state = "jawsoflife"
materials = list(MAT_METAL=150,MAT_SILVER=50,MAT_TITANIUM=25)
@@ -714,7 +714,7 @@ obj/item/weapon/weldingtool/experimental/process()
// Conversion kit
/obj/item/weapon/conversion_kit
name = "\improper Revolver Conversion Kit"
- desc = "A professional conversion kit used to convert any knock off revolver into the real deal capable of shooting lethal .357 rounds without the possibility of catastrophic failure"
+ desc = "A professional conversion kit used to convert any knock off revolver into the real deal capable of shooting lethal .357 rounds without the possibility of catastrophic failure."
icon = 'icons/obj/weapons.dmi'
icon_state = "kit"
flags = CONDUCT
diff --git a/code/game/objects/structures/door_assembly.dm b/code/game/objects/structures/door_assembly.dm
index 1d45a83bba2..c2c5fc083fa 100644
--- a/code/game/objects/structures/door_assembly.dm
+++ b/code/game/objects/structures/door_assembly.dm
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@
if(do_after(user, 40 * W.toolspeed, target = src))
if(!src) return
- to_chat(user, "\blue You cut the airlock wires!")
+ to_chat(user, "\blue You cut the airlock's wires!")
if(state == 1)
new/obj/item/stack/cable_coil(src.loc, 1)
src.state = 0