From eb575d3ed5c1b1f6af7e04f31755c453cab255f2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: nl-208 <25735277+nl-208@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Fri, 10 Apr 2020 01:12:43 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Correct spelling and grammar in envirohelmet descriptions (#13165) * correct spelling and grammar for envirohelmets * fix two more grammar errors missed in the first commit --- code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/plasmamen.dm | 26 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/plasmamen.dm b/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/plasmamen.dm index 77d7b99fde0..8421feb96ff 100644 --- a/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/plasmamen.dm +++ b/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/plasmamen.dm @@ -93,14 +93,14 @@ /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/security name = "security plasma envirosuit helmet" - desc = "A plasmaman containment helmet designed for security officers, protecting them from being flashed and burning alive, along-side other undesirables." + desc = "A plasmaman containment helmet designed for security officers, protecting them from being flashed and burning alive, alongside other undesirables." icon_state = "security_envirohelm" item_state = "security_envirohelm" armor = list("melee" = 10, "bullet" = 0, "laser" = 0, "energy" = 0, "bomb" = 0, "bio" = 100, "rad" = 0, "fire" = 100, "acid" = 75) /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/security/warden name = "warden's plasma envirosuit helmet" - desc = "A plasmaman containment helmet designed for the warden, a pair of white stripes being added to differeciate them from other members of security." + desc = "A plasmaman containment helmet designed for the warden, a pair of white stripes being added to differentiate them from other members of security." icon_state = "warden_envirohelm" item_state = "warden_envirohelm" @@ -111,14 +111,14 @@ item_state = "hos_envirohelm" /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/medical - name = "medical's plasma envirosuit helmet" - desc = "An envriohelmet designed for plasmaman medical doctors, having two stripes down it's length to denote as much" + name = "medical plasma envirosuit helmet" + desc = "An envirohelmet designed for plasmaman medical doctors, having two stripes down its length to denote as much." icon_state = "doctor_envirohelm" item_state = "doctor_envirohelm" /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/cmo name = "chief medical officer's plasma envirosuit helmet" - desc = "An envriohelmet designed for plasmaman employed as the cheif medical officer." + desc = "An envirohelmet designed for plasmamen employed as the chief medical officer." icon_state = "cmo_envirohelm" item_state = "cmo_envirohelm" @@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/chemist name = "chemistry plasma envirosuit helmet" - desc = "A plasmaman envirosuit designed for chemists, two orange stripes going down it's face." + desc = "A plasmaman envirohelmet designed for chemists, two orange stripes going down its face." icon_state = "chemist_envirohelm" item_state = "chemist_envirohelm" @@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/engineering/ce name = "chief engineer's plasma envirosuit helmet" - desc = "A space-worthy helmet specially designed for chief engineer employed plasmamen." + desc = "A space-worthy helmet specially designed for plasmamen employed as the chief engineer." icon_state = "ce_envirohelm" item_state = "ce_envirohelm" @@ -179,13 +179,13 @@ /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/cargo name = "cargo plasma envirosuit helmet" - desc = "An plasmaman envirohelmet designed for cargo techs and quartermasters." + desc = "A plasmaman envirohelmet designed for cargo techs and quartermasters." icon_state = "cargo_envirohelm" item_state = "cargo_envirohelm" /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/mining name = "mining plasma envirosuit helmet" - desc = "A khaki helmet given to plasmamen miners operating on lavaland." + desc = "A khaki helmet given to plasmamen miners operating on Lavaland." icon_state = "explorer_envirohelm" item_state = "explorer_envirohelm" visor_icon = "explorer_envisor" @@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/librarian name = "librarian's plasma envirosuit helmet" - desc = "A slight modification on a tradiational voidsuit helmet, this helmet was Nano-Trasen's first solution to the *logistical problems* that come with employing plasmamen. Despite their limitations, these helmets still see use by historian and old-styled plasmamen alike." + desc = "A slight modification on a traditional voidsuit helmet, this helmet was Nanotrasen's first solution to the *logistical problems* that come with employing plasmamen. Despite their limitations, these helmets still see use by historian and old-styled plasmamen alike." icon_state = "prototype_envirohelm" item_state = "prototype_envirohelm" actions_types = list(/datum/action/item_action/toggle_welding_screen/plasmaman) @@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/botany name = "botany plasma envirosuit helmet" - desc = "A green and blue envirohelmet designating it's wearer as a botanist. While not specially designed for it, it would protect against minor planet-related injuries." + desc = "A green and blue envirohelmet designating its wearer as a botanist. While not specially designed for it, it would protect against minor plant-related injuries." icon_state = "botany_envirohelm" item_state = "botany_envirohelm" @@ -230,14 +230,14 @@ /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/mime name = "mime envirosuit helmet" - desc = "The make-up is painted on, it's a miracle it doesn't chip. It's not very colourful." + desc = "The makeup is painted on, it's a miracle it doesn't chip. It's not very colourful." icon_state = "mime_envirohelm" item_state = "mime_envirohelm" visor_icon = "mime_envisor" /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/plasmaman/clown name = "clown envirosuit helmet" - desc = "The make-up is painted on, it's a miracle it doesn't chip. 'HONK!'" + desc = "The makeup is painted on, it's a miracle it doesn't chip. 'HONK!'" icon_state = "clown_envirohelm" item_state = "clown_envirohelm" visor_icon = "clown_envisor"