diff --git a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/grey.dm b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/grey.dm index 3f77302caf9..9902aaf0c1b 100644 --- a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/grey.dm +++ b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/grey.dm @@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ icobase = 'icons/mob/human_races/r_grey.dmi' language = "Psionic Communication" - blurb = "The Grey, known for their psionic abilities and unique appearance, hail from beyond the Milky Way, with an undisclosed homeworld. \ + blurb = "The Grey, known for their psionic abilities and unique appearance, hail from beyond the Milky Way and have an undisclosed homeworld. \ They rely heavily on cloning technology and are governed by a technocratic council of scientists.

\ Focused on technological advancement and the study of the universe, the Grey lack religious or spiritual beliefs. \ - Their objective perspective and advanced knowledge often position them to focus on their own projects rather then the disputes of other species." + Their objective perspective and advanced knowledge often position them to focus on their own projects rather than the disputes of other species." eyes = "grey_eyes_s" butt_sprite = "grey" diff --git a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/human_species.dm b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/human_species.dm index 9d19d16404f..8fdf5a0af38 100644 --- a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/human_species.dm +++ b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/human_species.dm @@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ bodyflags = HAS_ICON_SKIN_TONE | HAS_BODY_MARKINGS dietflags = DIET_OMNI blurb = "Humanity, originating from the Sol system, has expanded over five centuries, branching out to forge a variety of governments and powerful corporations. \ - These range from the militaristic Trans Solar Federation, the Union of Soviet Socialist Planets, and megacorps like Nanotrasen.

\ - With a constant desire to colonize and spread their influence onto other species, they have began to develop alliances and enemies. \ - Making human's one of the most recongnizeable and socially diverse species in the sector." + These range from the militaristic Trans Solar Federation, the Union of Soviet Socialist Planets, and mega corporations like Nanotrasen.

\ + With a constant desire to colonize and spread their influence onto other species, they have begun to develop alliances and enemies, \ + making humans one of the most recognizable and socially diverse species in the sector." icon_skin_tones = list( //Organized to be from Light to Dark. 1 = "Default White", diff --git a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/kidan.dm b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/kidan.dm index 0da9b54e8fe..6ae58289f77 100644 --- a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/kidan.dm +++ b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/kidan.dm @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ icobase = 'icons/mob/human_races/r_kidan.dmi' language = "Chittin" - blurb = "The Kidan are ant-like beings possessing a hardened exoskeleton and a strict adherence to social castes. \ + blurb = "The Kidan are ant-like beings possessing a hardened exoskeleton and strict adherence to social castes. \ They originate from the planet Aurum — a barren bombarded world that suffered after the war with the Solar-Central Compact, having lost decisively after the Battle of Argos.

\ They are relatively minor players in galactic affairs and presently suffer heavy sanctions from the SCC, \ though they are tentatively re-establishing relations with other galactic powers, even after the crumbling of their once powerful empire." diff --git a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/skrell.dm b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/skrell.dm index 9509b3ae879..873864b78e4 100644 --- a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/skrell.dm +++ b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/skrell.dm @@ -5,8 +5,8 @@ language = "Skrellian" primitive_form = /datum/species/monkey/skrell - blurb = "Skrell are a amphibious species, that come from the planet Jargon 4, a humid planet filled with swamps and archipelagos. \ - Skrell are a highly advanced and logical race who live under the rule of the Qerr'Katish, the main govermental body.

\ + blurb = "Skrell are an amphibious species, that come from the planet Jargon 4, a humid planet filled with swamps and archipelagos. \ + Skrell are a highly advanced and logical race who live under the rule of the Qerr'Katish, the main governmental body.

\ Skrell are herbivores and opulent in nature thanks to central tenets of the Skrellian religion. \ While classically preferring diplomacy, the Skrell participate in the largest military alliance in the galaxy, the Solar-Central Compact." diff --git a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/slimepeople.dm b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/slimepeople.dm index 4af69cfe0c7..69df4f74bf2 100644 --- a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/slimepeople.dm +++ b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/slimepeople.dm @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ language = "Bubblish" blurb = "Slime People are gelatinous and translucent beings from the vast oceans of Xarxis 5. \ - They are recent entrants to the galactic scene, having been discovered by a TSF exploratory company during space expedetions.

\ + They are recent entrants to the galactic scene, having been discovered by a TSF exploratory company during space expeditions.

\ Slime People traditionally operate in roaming bands and tribes that migrate according to orbital patterns and tides. \ A great deal of Slime People prefer the comforts and traditions of their homeworld, though many more have decided to take their chances among the stars, trying \ to find a better life for themselves and their species." diff --git a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/tajaran.dm b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/tajaran.dm index 8bebeaefc4e..2ec13166f02 100644 --- a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/tajaran.dm +++ b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/tajaran.dm @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ unarmed_type = /datum/unarmed_attack/claws blurb = "Tajaran hail from the mineral-rich arctic moon of Ahdomai. \ - They were introduced into the galactic scene after Skrellian discovery and uplifted to be an associate to the Solar-Central Compact.

\ + They were introduced into the galactic scene after the Skrellian discovery and were elevated to be associates to the Solar-Central Compact.

\ The teachings of S'randarr and solar iconography dominate their religious practices, \ and Tajaran often speak in the third person due to the lack of first-person references in their native tongue." diff --git a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/unathi.dm b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/unathi.dm index 4be61f83bec..a463c0c29e0 100644 --- a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/unathi.dm +++ b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/unathi.dm @@ -10,8 +10,8 @@ primitive_form = /datum/species/monkey/unathi blurb = "Unathi are a scaled species of reptilian beings from the desert world of Moghes, within the Uuosa-Eso system. \ - Organizing themselves in highly competitive feudal kingdoms, Unathi lack any sort of wide-scale unification, and their culture and history consist of centuries of internal conflict and struggle.

\ - Despite clans having a sizeable military force, inter-clan rivalries and constant civil war prevents the Unathi from achieving much more in the wider galactic scene." + Organizing themselves in highly competitive feudal kingdoms, the Unathi lack any sort of wide-scale unification, and their culture and history consist of centuries of internal conflict and struggle.

\ + Despite clans having a sizeable military force, inter-clan rivalries and constant civil war prevent the Unathi from achieving much more in the wider galactic scene." species_traits = list(LIPS) inherent_biotypes = MOB_ORGANIC | MOB_HUMANOID | MOB_REPTILE diff --git a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/vulpkanin.dm b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/vulpkanin.dm index 139ba4761d1..f98b03002e2 100644 --- a/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/vulpkanin.dm +++ b/code/modules/mob/living/carbon/human/species/vulpkanin.dm @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ blurb = "Vulpkanin are bipedal canid-like beings from the Vazzend binary system, having been forced from their homeworld by a cataclysmic event and scattered throughout the Orion Sector. \ While Vulpkanin are chiefly led by independent planetary governments, they also serve under a loose federation known as The Assembly.

\ Their religious systems traditionally pay tribute to an all-infusing universal will called 'Racht'. \ - Vulpkanin groups are minor players in galactic affairs, and are largely concerned with the focus of restoration of their homeworld." + Vulpkanin groups are minor players in galactic affairs, as they are largely concerned with the restoration of their homeworld." species_traits = list(LIPS) clothing_flags = HAS_UNDERWEAR | HAS_UNDERSHIRT | HAS_SOCKS