/tg/ era language pass (#8962)

* /tg/ era language pass

* Another pass, more generally inc. code comments

* Even more word tweakies

code/game/objects/items/devices/flash.dm

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 /obj/item/flash
 	name = "flash"
-	desc = "Used for blinding and being an asshole."
+	desc = "Used to blind and disorient."
 	icon = 'icons/obj/device.dmi'
 	pickup_sound = 'sound/items/pickup/device.ogg'
 	drop_sound = 'sound/items/drop/device.ogg'

code/game/objects/items/devices/radio/headset.dm

@@ -212,37 +212,37 @@
 
 /obj/item/radio/headset/heads/rd
 	name = "research director's headset"
-	desc = "Headset of the researching God."
+	desc = "Headset of the eccentric-in-chief."
 	icon_state = "com_headset"
 	ks2type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/heads/rd
 
 /obj/item/radio/headset/heads/rd/alt
 	name = "research director's bowman headset"
-	desc = "Headset of the researching God."
+	desc = "Headset of the eccentric-in-chief."
 	icon_state = "com_headset_alt"
 	ks2type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/heads/rd
 
 /obj/item/radio/headset/heads/hos
 	name = "head of security's headset"
-	desc = "The headset of the man who protects your worthless lifes."
+	desc = "The headset of the hardass who protects your worthless lifes."
 	icon_state = "com_headset"
 	ks2type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/heads/hos
 
 /obj/item/radio/headset/heads/hos/alt
 	name = "head of security's bowman headset"
-	desc = "The headset of the man who protects your worthless lifes."
+	desc = "The headset of the hardass who protects your worthless lifes."
 	icon_state = "com_headset_alt"
 	ks2type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/heads/hos
 
 /obj/item/radio/headset/heads/ce
 	name = "chief engineer's headset"
-	desc = "The headset of the guy who is in charge of morons"
+	desc = "The headset of the clown who is in charge of the circus."
 	icon_state = "com_headset"
 	ks2type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/heads/ce
 
 /obj/item/radio/headset/heads/ce/alt
 	name = "chief engineer's bowman headset"
-	desc = "The headset of the guy who is in charge of morons"
+	desc = "The headset of the clown who is in charge of the circus."
 	icon_state = "com_headset_alt"
 	ks2type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/heads/ce
 
@@ -260,13 +260,13 @@
 
 /obj/item/radio/headset/heads/hop
 	name = "head of personnel's headset"
-	desc = "The headset of the guy who will one day be Site Manager."
+	desc = "The headset of the poor fool who will one day be Site Manager."
 	icon_state = "com_headset"
 	ks2type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/heads/hop
 
 /obj/item/radio/headset/heads/hop/alt
 	name = "head of personnel's bowman headset"
-	desc = "The headset of the guy who will one day be Site Manager."
+	desc = "The headset of the poor fool who will one day be Site Manager."
 	icon_state = "com_headset_alt"
 	ks2type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/heads/hop
 
@@ -279,13 +279,13 @@
 
 /obj/item/radio/headset/headset_cargo
 	name = "supply radio headset"
-	desc = "A headset used by the QM and his slaves."
+	desc = "A headset used by the QM and their cronies."
 	icon_state = "cargo_headset"
 	ks2type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/headset_cargo
 
 /obj/item/radio/headset/headset_cargo/alt
 	name = "supply bowman headset"
-	desc = "A bowman headset used by the QM and his slaves."
+	desc = "A bowman headset used by the QM and their cronies."
 	icon_state = "cargo_headset_alt"
 	ks2type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/headset_cargo
 

code/game/objects/items/trash.dm

@@ -234,31 +234,31 @@
 	return
 
 
-/obj/item/trash/beef //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/beef
 	name = "empty beef can"
 	icon_state = "beef"
 	drop_sound = 'sound/items/drop/soda.ogg'
 	pickup_sound = 'sound/items/pickup/soda.ogg'
 
-/obj/item/trash/beans //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/beans
 	name = "empty bean can"
 	icon_state = "beans"
 	drop_sound = 'sound/items/drop/soda.ogg'
 	pickup_sound = 'sound/items/pickup/soda.ogg'
 
-/obj/item/trash/spinach //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/spinach
 	name = "empty spinach can"
 	icon_state = "spinach"
 	drop_sound = 'sound/items/drop/soda.ogg'
 	pickup_sound = 'sound/items/pickup/soda.ogg'
 
-/obj/item/trash/fishegg //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/fishegg
 	name = "empty fisheggs can"
 	icon_state = "fisheggs"
 	drop_sound = 'sound/items/drop/soda.ogg'
 	pickup_sound = 'sound/items/pickup/soda.ogg'
 
-/obj/item/trash/carpegg //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/carpegg
 	name = "empty carpeggs can"
 	icon_state = "carpeggs"
 	drop_sound = 'sound/items/drop/soda.ogg'
@@ -270,124 +270,124 @@
 	drop_sound = 'sound/items/drop/soda.ogg'
 	pickup_sound = 'sound/items/pickup/soda.ogg'
 
-/obj/item/trash/salo //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/salo
 	name = "salo pack"
 	icon_state = "pigfat"
 
-/obj/item/trash/croutons //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/croutons
 	name = "suhariki pack"
 	icon_state = "croutons"
 
-/obj/item/trash/squid //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/squid
 	name = "calamari pack"
 	icon_state = "squid"
 
-/obj/item/trash/driedfish //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/driedfish
 	name = "vobla pack"
 	icon_state = "driedfish"
 
-/obj/item/trash/lunacakewrap //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/lunacakewrap
 	name = "cake wrapper"
 	icon_state = "cakewrap"
 
-/obj/item/trash/mochicakewrap //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/mochicakewrap
 	name = "cake wrapper"
 	icon_state = "mochicakewrap"
 
-/obj/item/trash/mooncakewrap //ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/mooncakewrap
 	name = "cake wrapper"
 	icon_state = "mooncakewrap"
 
-/obj/item/trash/tidegobs//ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/tidegobs
 	name = "tide gob bag"
 	icon_state = "tidegobs"
 
-/obj/item/trash/saturno//ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/saturno
 	name = "\improper saturn-Os bag"
 	icon_state = "saturn0s"
 
-/obj/item/trash/jupiter//ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/jupiter
 	name = "gello cup"
 	icon_state = "jupiter"
 
-/obj/item/trash/pluto//ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/pluto
 	name = "rod bag"
 	icon_state = "pluto"
 
-/obj/item/trash/venus//ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/venus
 	name = "hot cakes bag"
 	icon_state = "venus"
 
-/obj/item/trash/mars//ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/mars
 	name = "frouka box"
 	icon_state = "mars"
 
-/obj/item/trash/oort//ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/oort
 	name = "oort rock bag"
 	icon_state = "oort"
 
-/obj/item/trash/weebonuts//ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/weebonuts
 	name = "red alert nuts bag"
 	icon_state = "weebonuts"
 
-/obj/item/trash/stick//ADDITION 04/11/2021
+/obj/item/trash/stick
 	name = "stick"
 	desc = "a stick from some snack or other food item, not even useful as crafting material."
 	icon_state = "stick"
 
-/obj/item/trash/maps//ADDITION 04/13/2021
+/obj/item/trash/maps
 	name = "empty MAPS can"
 	icon_state = "maps"
 	drop_sound = 'sound/items/drop/soda.ogg'
 	pickup_sound = 'sound/items/pickup/soda.ogg'
 
-/obj/item/trash/spacer_cake_wrap//ADDITION 04/14/2021
+/obj/item/trash/spacer_cake_wrap
 	name = "snack cake wrapper"
 	icon_state = "spacer_cake_wrap"
 
-/obj/item/trash/sun_snax//ADDITION 04/14/2021
+/obj/item/trash/sun_snax
 	name = "sun snax bag"
 	icon_state = "sun_snax"
 
-/obj/item/trash/wasabi_peas//ADDITION 04/14/2021
+/obj/item/trash/wasabi_peas
 	name = "wasabi peas bag"
 	icon_state = "wasabi_peas"
 
-/obj/item/trash/namagashi//ADDITION 04/14/2021
+/obj/item/trash/namagashi
 	name = "namagashi bag"
 	icon_state = "namagashi"
 
-/obj/item/trash/pocky//ADDITION 04/14/2021
+/obj/item/trash/pocky
 	name = "pocky bag"
 	icon_state = "pocky"
 
-/obj/item/trash/appleberry//ADDITION 04/14/2021
+/obj/item/trash/appleberry
 	name = "appleberry can"
 	icon_state = "appleberry"
 	drop_sound = 'sound/items/drop/soda.ogg'
 	pickup_sound = 'sound/items/pickup/soda.ogg'
 
-/obj/item/trash/hakarl//ADDITION 04/22/2021
+/obj/item/trash/hakarl
 	name = "\improper Indigo Co. Hákarl bag"
 	icon_state = "hakarl"
 
-/obj/item/trash/pretzel//ADDITION 04/22/2021
+/obj/item/trash/pretzel
 	name = "\improper Value Pretzel Snack"
 	icon_state = "pretzel"
 
-/obj/item/trash/sweetration//ADDITION 04/20/2021
+/obj/item/trash/sweetration
 	name = "desert ration bag"
 	icon_state = "baseration"
 
-/obj/item/trash/genration//ADDITION 04/20/2021
+/obj/item/trash/genration
 	name = "generic ration bag"
 	icon_state = "genration"
 
-/obj/item/trash/meatration//ADDITION 04/20/2021
+/obj/item/trash/meatration
 	name = "meat ration bag"
 	icon_state = "meatration"
 
-/obj/item/trash/vegration//ADDITION 04/20/2021
+/obj/item/trash/vegration
 	name = "veggie ration bag"
 	icon_state = "vegration"
 
@@ -405,4 +405,4 @@
 
 /obj/item/trash/candybowl
 	name = "candy bowl"
-	icon_state = "candy_bowl"
+	icon_state = "candy_bowl"

code/game/objects/items/weapons/AI_modules.dm

@@ -430,8 +430,8 @@ AI MODULES
 /******************** Syndicate Directives ********************/
 
 /obj/item/aiModule/syndicate_override
-	name = "\improper 'Syndicate Directives' core AI module"
-	desc = "A 'Syndicate Directives' Core AI Module: 'Reconfigures the AI's core laws.'"
+	name = "\improper 'Mercenary Directives' core AI module"
+	desc = "A 'Mercenary Directives' Core AI Module: 'Reconfigures the AI's core laws.'"
 	origin_tech = list(TECH_DATA = 4, TECH_ILLEGAL = 4)
 	laws = new/datum/ai_laws/syndicate_override()
 

code/game/objects/items/weapons/chewables.dm

@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@
 	color = reagents.get_color()
 	update_icon()
 
-/obj/item/storage/box/pocky //ADDITION 04/17/2021
+/obj/item/storage/box/pocky
 	name = "\improper Totemo yoi Pocky"
 	desc = "A bundle of chocolate-coated bisquit sticks."
 	icon = 'icons/obj/food_snacks.dmi'
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@
 	foldable = null
 	trash = /obj/item/trash/pocky
 
-/obj/item/clothing/mask/chewable/candy/pocky //ADDITION 04/17/2021
+/obj/item/clothing/mask/chewable/candy/pocky
 	name = "chocolate pocky"
 	desc = "A chocolate-coated biscuit stick."
 	icon_state = "pocky"

code/game/objects/items/weapons/flamethrower.dm

@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@
 	//TODO: DEFERRED Consider checking to make sure tank pressure is high enough before doing this...
 	//Transfer 5% of current tank air contents to turf
 	var/datum/gas_mixture/air_transfer = ptank.air_contents.remove_ratio(0.02*(throw_amount/100))
-	//air_transfer.toxins = air_transfer.toxins * 5 // This is me not comprehending the air system. I realize this is retarded and I could probably make it work without fucking it up like this, but there you have it. -- TLE
+	//air_transfer.toxins = air_transfer.toxins * 5 // This is me not comprehending the air system. I realize this is mischievious and I could probably make it work without fucking it up like this, but there you have it. -- TLE
 	new/obj/effect/decal/cleanable/liquid_fuel/flamethrower_fuel(target,air_transfer.gas["phoron"],get_dir(loc,target))
 	air_transfer.gas["phoron"] = 0
 	target.assume_air(air_transfer)

code/game/objects/items/weapons/id cards/station_ids.dm

@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@
 
 /obj/item/card/id/gold/captain/spare
 	name = "\improper Site Manager's spare ID"
-	desc = "The spare ID of the High Lord himself."
+	desc = "The emergency spare ID for the station's very own Big Cheese."
 	icon_state = "gold-id-alternate"
 	registered_name = "Site Manager"
 

code/game/objects/items/weapons/id cards/syndicate_ids.dm

@@ -217,9 +217,9 @@
 	return name
 
 /obj/item/card/id/syndicate_command
-	name = "syndicate ID card"
-	desc = "An ID straight from the Syndicate."
-	registered_name = "Syndicate"
-	assignment = "Syndicate Commander"
+	name = "operative ID card"
+	desc = "An ID straight from a mercenary organisation."
+	registered_name = "Operative"
+	assignment = "Operative Commander"
 	icon_state = "syndicate-id"
-	access = list(access_syndicate, access_external_airlocks)
+	access = list(access_syndicate, access_external_airlocks)

code/game/objects/items/weapons/manuals.dm

@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@
 
 				<h2>Power outage</h2>
 
-				A power problem has made the entire station lose power? Could be station-wide wiring problems or syndicate power sinks. In any case follow these steps:
+				A power problem has made the entire station lose power? Could be station-wide wiring problems or illegal power sinks. In any case follow these steps:
 
 				<ol>
 					<li><b><font color='red'>PANIC!</font></b></li>
@@ -1095,7 +1095,7 @@
 	name = "Fission Mailed: Nuclear Sabotage 101"
 	icon_state ="bookNuclear"
 	item_state = "book8"
-	author = "Syndicate"
+	author = "Stealth Assault Enterprises"
 	title = "Fission Mailed: Nuclear Sabotage 101"
 
 	dat = {"<html>
@@ -1111,7 +1111,7 @@
 				</head>
 				<body>
 				<h1>Nuclear Explosives 101</h1>
-				Hello and thank you for choosing the Syndicate for your nuclear information needs. Today's crash course will deal with the operation of a Nuclear Fission Device.<br><br>
+				Hello and thank you for choosing Stealth Assault Enterprises for your nuclear information needs. Today's crash course will deal with the operation of a Nuclear Fission Device.<br><br>
 
 				First and foremost, DO NOT TOUCH ANYTHING UNTIL THE BOMB IS IN PLACE. Pressing any button on the compacted bomb will cause it to extend and bolt itself into place. If this is done, to unbolt it, one must completely log in, which at this time may not be possible.<br>
 
@@ -1127,7 +1127,7 @@
 
 				You now have activated the device. To deactivate the buttons at anytime, for example when you've already prepped the bomb for detonation, remove the authentication disk OR press R on the keypad.<br><br>
 				Now the bomb CAN ONLY be detonated using the timer. Manual detonation is not an option. Toggle off the SAFETY.<br>
-				<b>Note</b>: You wouldn't believe how many Syndicate Operatives with doctorates have forgotten this step.<br><br>
+				<b>Note</b>: You wouldn't believe how many SAARE Operatives with doctorates have forgotten this step.<br><br>
 
 				So use the - - and + + to set a detonation time between 5 seconds and 10 minutes. Then press the timer toggle button to start the countdown. Now remove the authentication disk so that the buttons deactivate.<br>
 				<b>Note</b>: THE BOMB IS STILL SET AND WILL DETONATE<br><br>

code/game/objects/items/weapons/storage/toolbox.dm

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 /obj/item/storage/toolbox
 	name = "toolbox"
-	desc = "Danger. Very robust."
+	desc = "A metal toolbox with remarkably robust construction."
 	icon = 'icons/obj/storage.dmi'
 	icon_state = "red"
 	item_state_slots = list(slot_r_hand_str = "toolbox_red", slot_l_hand_str = "toolbox_red")

code/game/objects/structures/janicart.dm

@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_BOILERPLATE(all_janitorial_carts, /obj/structure/janitorialcart)
 
 
 
-//old style retardo-cart
+//old style mischievio-cart
 /obj/structure/bed/chair/janicart
 	name = "janicart"
 	icon = 'icons/obj/vehicles.dmi'

code/game/objects/structures/signs.dm

@@ -255,12 +255,12 @@
 
 /obj/structure/sign/redcross
 	name = "medbay"
-	desc = "The Intergalactic symbol of Medical institutions. You'll probably get help here."
+	desc = "An international symbol of medical institutions. You'll probably get help here."
 	icon_state = "bluecross"
 
 /obj/structure/sign/greencross
 	name = "medbay"
-	desc = "The Intergalactic symbol of Medical institutions. You'll probably get help here."
+	desc = "An international symbol of medical institutions. You'll probably get help here."
 	icon_state = "bluecross2"
 
 /obj/structure/sign/goldenplaque