From 95b7ecfe391245098ebca93678cb51450d9fc8db Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Trilbyspaceclone <30435998+Trilbyspaceclone@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 10 Nov 2018 12:36:21 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Better item descriptions --- code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm | 11 ++++++----- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm b/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm index 14ac449179..fe667cdac8 100644 --- a/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm +++ b/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm @@ -128,8 +128,8 @@ Contains: //Space pirate outfit /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/pirate - name = "pirate hat" - desc = "Yarr." + name = "royal tricorne" + desc = "A tricorne form the Space Queen herself, that is space proof as well as made with padded armor." icon_state = "pirate" item_state = "pirate" armor = list("melee" = 30, "bullet" = 50, "laser" = 30,"energy" = 15, "bomb" = 30, "bio" = 30, "rad" = 30, "fire" = 60, "acid" = 75) @@ -139,13 +139,14 @@ Contains: flags_cover = HEADCOVERSEYES /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/pirate/bandana - name = "pirate bandana" + name = "royal bandana" + desc = "A special bandana that is space proof as well as made with padded armor." icon_state = "bandana" item_state = "bandana" /obj/item/clothing/suit/space/pirate - name = "pirate coat" - desc = "Yarr." + name = "royal waistcoat " + desc = "A royal waistcoat made to be spaceproof as well as padded with armor." icon_state = "pirate" item_state = "pirate" w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_NORMAL From 6694add91ec0e284b6be14f90111ab5912d2b211 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Trilbyspaceclone <30435998+Trilbyspaceclone@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 10 Nov 2018 12:43:20 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] ''honorable'' --- code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm b/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm index fe667cdac8..8273c1bac0 100644 --- a/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm +++ b/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm @@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ Contains: //Space pirate outfit /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/pirate name = "royal tricorne" - desc = "A tricorne form the Space Queen herself, that is space proof as well as made with padded armor." + desc = "A tricorne form the Honorable Space Queen herself, that is space proof as well as made with padded armor." icon_state = "pirate" item_state = "pirate" armor = list("melee" = 30, "bullet" = 50, "laser" = 30,"energy" = 15, "bomb" = 30, "bio" = 30, "rad" = 30, "fire" = 60, "acid" = 75) From 5feebdc7d38b105c9621b976495cd22a2cd4d9e7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Trilbyspaceclone <30435998+Trilbyspaceclone@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sun, 18 Nov 2018 06:10:23 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] "Better Grammar or something" --- code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm b/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm index 8273c1bac0..89f114f7e5 100644 --- a/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm +++ b/code/modules/clothing/spacesuits/miscellaneous.dm @@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ Contains: //Space pirate outfit /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/pirate name = "royal tricorne" - desc = "A tricorne form the Honorable Space Queen herself, that is space proof as well as made with padded armor." + desc = "A thick, space-proof tricorne from the royal Space Queen. It's lined with a layer of reflective kevlar." icon_state = "pirate" item_state = "pirate" armor = list("melee" = 30, "bullet" = 50, "laser" = 30,"energy" = 15, "bomb" = 30, "bio" = 30, "rad" = 30, "fire" = 60, "acid" = 75) @@ -140,13 +140,13 @@ Contains: /obj/item/clothing/head/helmet/space/pirate/bandana name = "royal bandana" - desc = "A special bandana that is space proof as well as made with padded armor." + desc = "A space-proof bandanna crafted with reflective kevlar." icon_state = "bandana" item_state = "bandana" /obj/item/clothing/suit/space/pirate name = "royal waistcoat " - desc = "A royal waistcoat made to be spaceproof as well as padded with armor." + desc = "A royal, space-proof waistcoat. The inside of it is lined with reflective kevlar." icon_state = "pirate" item_state = "pirate" w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_NORMAL