From 6ba56c73314da6642b471c3a466fc5280ebea03d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Ragolution Date: Sat, 12 Jan 2019 15:06:38 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code reviewer Rag Spell checker Co-Authored-By: Trilbyspaceclone <30435998+Trilbyspaceclone@users.noreply.github.com> --- code/modules/cargo/exports/manifest.dm | 4 ++-- code/modules/cargo/order.dm | 8 ++++---- code/modules/cargo/packs.dm | 4 ++-- 3 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/exports/manifest.dm b/code/modules/cargo/exports/manifest.dm index 9d12217982..e6603affba 100644 --- a/code/modules/cargo/exports/manifest.dm +++ b/code/modules/cargo/exports/manifest.dm @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ // Paper work retruned -/datum/export/paperwork_correct +/datum/export/paperwork_incorrect cost = 500 // Failed to meet NT standers - unit_name = "retruned late paperwork" + unit_name = "returned incorrect paperwork" export_types = list(/obj/item/paper/fluff/jobs/cargo/manifest/paperwork) diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/order.dm b/code/modules/cargo/order.dm index 0fa5116812..1f0d7d29b3 100644 --- a/code/modules/cargo/order.dm +++ b/code/modules/cargo/order.dm @@ -98,11 +98,11 @@ //Paperwork for NT /obj/item/paper/fluff/jobs/cargo/manifest/paperwork - name = "Undone Paper work" - desc = "Undone paper work that has been left undone for freelancers to complete." + name = "Incomplete Paperwork" + desc = "These should've been filled out four months ago! Unfinished grant papers issued by Nanotrasen's finance department. Complete this page for additional funding." icon = 'icons/obj/bureaucracy.dmi' /obj/item/paper/fluff/jobs/cargo/manifest/paperwork_correct - name = "Done Paper work" - desc = "Paper work that has been completed, has a nice pen attached to the papers making sure they don't become messy well in travel." + name = "Finished Paperwork" + desc = "A neat stack of filled-out forms, in triplicate and signed. Is there anything more satisfying? Make sure they get stamped." icon = 'icons/obj/bureaucracy.dmi' diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/packs.dm b/code/modules/cargo/packs.dm index 3ae15f5a8f..69b0f1ac99 100644 --- a/code/modules/cargo/packs.dm +++ b/code/modules/cargo/packs.dm @@ -2414,7 +2414,7 @@ /datum/supply_pack/misc/paper_work name = "Freelance Paper work" - desc = "Need a little more credits for that bike for little Timmy? Well I'm willing to pay ya for some accounting that needs to get done. I'll send ya umm ten copies of some paper work and a fountain pens. I want my pens back, send them with the papers or don't get paid! There is two more pens in the box then you will need just in case, keep em or don't." + desc = "The Nanotrasen Primary Bureaucratic Database Intelligence (PDBI) reports that the station has not completed its funding and grant paperwork this solar cycle. In order to gain further funding, your station is required to fill out (10) ten of these forms or no additional capital will be disbursed. We have sent you ten copies of the following form and we expect every one to be up to Nanotrasen Standards." // Disbursement. It's not a typo, look it up. cost = 400 // Net of 0 credits contains = list(/obj/item/paper/fluff/jobs/cargo/manifest/paperwork, /obj/item/paper/fluff/jobs/cargo/manifest/paperwork, @@ -2426,7 +2426,7 @@ /obj/item/paper/fluff/jobs/cargo/manifest/paperwork, /obj/item/paper/fluff/jobs/cargo/manifest/paperwork, /obj/item/storage/box/fountainpens) // Two spare pens just in case - crate_name = "paper work" + crate_name = "Paperwork" /datum/supply_pack/misc/toner name = "Toner Crate"