yeehaw it's done

code/modules/awaymissions/corpse.dm

@@ -13,7 +13,9 @@
 	var/death = TRUE //Kill the mob
 	var/roundstart = TRUE //fires on initialize
 	var/instant = FALSE	//fires on New
-	var/flavour_text = "The mapper forgot to set this!"
+	var/short_desc = "The mapper forgot to set this!"
+	var/flavour_text = ""
+	var/important_info = ""
 	var/faction = null
 	var/permanent = FALSE	//If true, the spawner will not disappear upon running out of uses.
 	var/random = FALSE		//Don't set a name or gender, just go random
@@ -110,7 +112,12 @@
 	if(ckey)
 		M.ckey = ckey
 		if(show_flavour)
-			to_chat(M, "[flavour_text]")
+			var/output_message = "<span class='big bold'>[short_desc]</span>"
+			if(flavour_text != "")
+				output_message += "\n<span class='bold'>[flavour_text]</span>"
+			if(important_info != "")
+				output_message += "\n<span class='userdanger'>[important_info]</span>"
+			to_chat(M, output_message)
 		var/datum/mind/MM = M.mind
 		var/datum/antagonist/A
 		if(antagonist_type)
@@ -340,7 +347,7 @@
 	name = "sleeper"
 	icon = 'icons/obj/machines/sleeper.dmi'
 	icon_state = "sleeper"
-	flavour_text = "<span class='big bold'>You are a space doctor!</span>"
+	short_desc = "You are a space doctor!"
 	assignedrole = "Space Doctor"
 	job_description = "Off-station Doctor"
 
@@ -397,7 +404,8 @@
 	name = "bartender sleeper"
 	icon = 'icons/obj/machines/sleeper.dmi'
 	icon_state = "sleeper"
-	flavour_text = "<span class='big bold'>You are a space bartender!</span><b> Time to mix drinks and change lives. Smoking space drugs makes it easier to understand your patrons' odd dialect.</b>"
+	short_desc = "You are a space bartender!"
+	flavour_text = "Time to mix drinks and change lives. Smoking space drugs makes it easier to understand your patrons' odd dialect."
 	assignedrole = "Space Bartender"
 	id_job = "Bartender"
 
@@ -422,7 +430,8 @@
 	name = "beach bum sleeper"
 	icon = 'icons/obj/machines/sleeper.dmi'
 	icon_state = "sleeper"
-	flavour_text = "<span class='big bold'>You're, like, totally a dudebro, bruh.</span><b> Ch'yea. You came here, like, on spring break, hopin' to pick up some bangin' hot chicks, y'knaw?</b>"
+	short_desc = "You're a spunky lifeguard!"
+	flavour_text = "It's up to you to make sure nobody drowns or gets eaten by sharks and stuff."
 	assignedrole = "Beach Bum"
 
 /obj/effect/mob_spawn/human/beach/alive/lifeguard
@@ -511,7 +520,7 @@
 	name = "sleeper"
 	icon = 'icons/obj/machines/sleeper.dmi'
 	icon_state = "sleeper"
-	flavour_text = "<span class='big bold'>You are a Nanotrasen Commander!</span>"
+	short_desc = "You are a Nanotrasen Commander!"
 
 /obj/effect/mob_spawn/human/nanotrasensoldier/alive
 	death = FALSE
@@ -522,7 +531,7 @@
 	icon = 'icons/obj/machines/sleeper.dmi'
 	icon_state = "sleeper"
 	faction = "nanotrasenprivate"
-	flavour_text = "<span class='big bold'>You are a Nanotrasen Private Security Officer!</span>"
+	short_desc = "You are a Nanotrasen Private Security Officer!"
 
 
 /////////////////Spooky Undead//////////////////////
@@ -539,7 +548,8 @@
 	job_description = "Skeleton"
 	icon = 'icons/effects/blood.dmi'
 	icon_state = "remains"
-	flavour_text = "<span class='big bold'>By unknown powers, your skeletal remains have been reanimated!</span><b> Walk this mortal plain and terrorize all living adventurers who dare cross your path.</b>"
+	short_desc = "By unknown powers, your skeletal remains have been reanimated!"
+	flavour_text = "Walk this mortal plain and terrorize all living adventurers who dare cross your path."
 	assignedrole = "Skeleton"
 
 /obj/effect/mob_spawn/human/zombie
@@ -554,7 +564,9 @@
 	job_description = "Zombie"
 	icon = 'icons/effects/blood.dmi'
 	icon_state = "remains"
-	flavour_text = "<span class='big bold'>By unknown powers, your rotting remains have been resurrected!</span><b> Walk this mortal plain and terrorize all living adventurers who dare cross your path.</b>"
+	short_desc = "By unknown powers, your rotting remains have been resurrected!"
+	flavour_text = "Walk this mortal plain and terrorize all living adventurers who dare cross your path."
+
 
 
 /obj/effect/mob_spawn/human/abductor

code/modules/awaymissions/mission_code/snowdin.dm

@@ -595,8 +595,9 @@
 	job_description = "Syndicate Snow Operative"
 	faction = ROLE_SYNDICATE
 	outfit = /datum/outfit/snowsyndie
-	flavour_text = "<span class='big bold'>You are a syndicate operative recently awoken from cryostasis in an underground outpost. Monitor Nanotrasen communications and record information. All intruders should be \
-	disposed of swiftly to assure no gathered information is stolen or lost. Try not to wander too far from the outpost as the caves can be a deadly place even for a trained operative such as yourself.</span>"
+	short_desc = "You are a syndicate operative recently awoken from cryostasis in an underground outpost."
+	flavour_text = "You are a syndicate operative recently awoken from cryostasis in an underground outpost. Monitor Nanotrasen communications and record information. All intruders should be \
+	disposed of swiftly to assure no gathered information is stolen or lost. Try not to wander too far from the outpost as the caves can be a deadly place even for a trained operative such as yourself."
 
 /datum/outfit/snowsyndie
 	name = "Syndicate Snow Operative"

code/modules/awaymissions/zlevel.dm

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(potentialRandomZlevels, generateMapList(filename = "[global.con
 		t = trim(t)
 		if (length(t) == 0)
 			continue
-		else if (copytext(t, 1, 2) == "#")
+		else if (t[1] == "#")
 			continue
 
 		var/pos = findtext(t, " ")