From cb215be40da3126d5d20dfeddc2480b698abba16 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Trilbyspaceclone <30435998+Trilbyspaceclone@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 4 Nov 2019 07:21:30 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code review

dap the hero

Co-Authored-By: dapnee <33661984+dapnee@users.noreply.github.com>
---
 code/modules/cargo/packs.dm         |  2 +-
 code/modules/cargo/packs/science.dm | 20 ++++++++++----------
 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/packs.dm b/code/modules/cargo/packs.dm
index 6e99b2fd2e..4c9ddfe3bc 100644
--- a/code/modules/cargo/packs.dm
+++ b/code/modules/cargo/packs.dm
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 	var/name = "Crate"
 	var/group = ""
 	var/hidden = FALSE //Aka emag only
-	var/contraband = FALSE //Hacking the console with a multy tool
+	var/contraband = FALSE //Hacking the console with a multitool
 	var/cost = 700 // Minimum cost, or infinite points are possible.
 	var/access = FALSE //What access does the Crate itself need?
 	var/access_any = FALSE //Do we care about access?
diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/packs/science.dm b/code/modules/cargo/packs/science.dm
index f6250bb1f7..8ec8ab9e50 100644
--- a/code/modules/cargo/packs/science.dm
+++ b/code/modules/cargo/packs/science.dm
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 
 /datum/supply_pack/science/aliens
 	name = "Advanced Alien Alloy Crate Crate"
-	desc = "Hello brothers from the stars!!! Are fellow brethren have made contact at long last and gave us gifts man! They really did build the prymi- Connection Error- Bro will send you a sheet of advanced alien alloy "
+	desc = "Hello brothers from the stars!!! Our fellow brethren have made contact at long last and gave us gifts man! They really did build the prymi- Connection Error- Bro we’ll send you a sheet of advanced alien alloy."
 	cost = 9000
 	contraband = TRUE
 	contains = list(/obj/item/stack/sheet/mineral/abductor)
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 
 /datum/supply_pack/science/beakers
 	name = "Chemistry Beackers Crate"
-	desc = "Glass ware for any chemistry! Contains four small beakers three large two plastic one metamaterial. As well as three droppers and two latex gloves"
+	desc = "Glassware for any chemistry lab! Contains four small beakers, three large, two plastic, and one metamaterial. As well as three droppers and two pairs of latex gloves."
 	cost = 1500
 	contains = list(/obj/item/reagent_containers/glass/beaker,
 					/obj/item/reagent_containers/glass/beaker,
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 					/obj/item/reagent_containers/dropper,
 					/obj/item/clothing/gloves/color/latex,
 					/obj/item/clothing/gloves/color/latex)
-	crate_name = "chemistry beacker crate"
+	crate_name = "chemistry beaker crate"
 
 /datum/supply_pack/science/robotics/mecha_odysseus
 	name = "Circuit Crate (Odysseus)"
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
 
 /datum/supply_pack/science/nitrilegloves
 	name = "Nitrile Gloves Crate"
-	desc = "Ever handling toxic chemicals? Well worry not to keep your flesh with some nitrile made gloves! Contains three pares of nitrile gloves."
+	desc = "Handling toxic chemicals? Well worry not, keep your flesh intact with some nitrile made gloves! Contains three pairs of nitrile gloves."
 	cost = 1500
 	contains = list(/obj/item/clothing/gloves/color/latex/nitrile,
 					/obj/item/clothing/gloves/color/latex/nitrile,
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
 	contains = list(/obj/item/nuke_core_container/nt,
 					/obj/item/screwdriver/nuke/nt,
 					/obj/item/paper/guides/nt/nuke_instructions)
-	crate_name = "safe defusal kit storge"
+	crate_name = "safe defusal kit storage"
 
 /datum/supply_pack/science/plasma
 	name = "Plasma Assembly Crate"
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
 
 /datum/supply_pack/science/relic
 	name = "Relic Crate"
-	desc = "Ever want to play with old discounted toys? Look no more. Contains two relic."
+	desc = "Ever want to play with old discounted toys? Look no more. Contains two relics.”
 	cost = 1000
 	contraband = TRUE
 	contains = list(/obj/item/relic,
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
 
 /datum/supply_pack/science/slime
 	name = "Slime Core Crate"
-	desc = "Ran out of slimes? No problem, contains one gray slime core. Requires Xenobio access to open"
+	desc = "Ran out of slimes? No problem, contains one gray slime core. Requires Xenobio access to open.”
 	cost = 1000
 	access = ACCESS_XENOBIOLOGY
 	contains = list(/obj/item/slime_extract/grey)
@@ -174,15 +174,15 @@
 	crate_type = /obj/structure/closet/crate/secure/science
 
 /datum/supply_pack/science/supermater
-	name = "Supermatter Exstraction Tools (Crate)"
-	desc = "Contains set of tools to exstract a sliver of supermatter."
+	name = "Supermatter Extraction Tools Crate"
+	desc = "Contains a set of tools to extract a sliver of supermatter. Consult your CE today!”
 	cost = 7500 //Usefull for traitors that fucked up
 	hidden = TRUE
 	contains = list(/obj/item/nuke_core_container/supermatter,
 					/obj/item/scalpel/supermatter,
 					/obj/item/hemostat/supermatter,
 					/obj/item/paper/guides/antag/supermatter_sliver)
-	crate_name = "supermatter exstraction kit crate"
+	crate_name = "supermatter extraction kit crate"
 
 /datum/supply_pack/science/tablets
 	name = "Tablet Crate"