From d53d11de6b5dafe4629a12ce6555a2f55ed7a857 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Trilbyspaceclone <30435998+Trilbyspaceclone@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 10 Jul 2019 18:21:03 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code review

Grammer and such

Co-Authored-By: Ghom <42542238+Ghommie@users.noreply.github.com>
---
 code/game/gamemodes/clock_cult/clock_cult.dm              | 8 ++++----
 code/modules/food_and_drinks/drinks/drinks/bottle.dm      | 2 +-
 .../modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/other_reagents.dm | 6 +++---
 3 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/code/game/gamemodes/clock_cult/clock_cult.dm b/code/game/gamemodes/clock_cult/clock_cult.dm
index 0216abb3f9..94ca86e0dd 100644
--- a/code/game/gamemodes/clock_cult/clock_cult.dm
+++ b/code/game/gamemodes/clock_cult/clock_cult.dm
@@ -338,10 +338,10 @@ Credit where due:
 	CLOCKCULTCHANGELOG\
 	</ul>\
 	<hr>\
-	<li><b>Brass Flasks:</b> These contain 30u of Zelus oil, this oil can be used to help stun people, and more son on Blood Cult\
-	It can also be used to splash onto metal to make brass. Grinding bass will give you some oil back as well.\
-	You can make more brass flasks to be used as throwing weaponds if you so wish, these will not have any oil in them. They have one throw before braking making them rather useless.\
-	Lastly the oil can be drank for a bost in combat, gives you stamina as well as heals quickly!\
+	<li><b>Zelus oil:</b> A new reagent. It can be used to heal the faithful to Ratvar, or kill heretics and moreso stun blood cultists,\
+	or splashed onto metal sheets to make brass. This chemical can be found in minimal quantities by grinding brass sheets.\
+	<li><b>Brass Flasks:</b>Intended to store Zelus Oil in, but can also be used as fragile single use throwing weapons in a pinch! \
+	These are crafted with a single sheet of brass and fit in the Clockwork Cuirass' suit storage.\
 	<b>Good luck!</b>"
 
 /obj/item/paper/servant_primer/Initialize()
diff --git a/code/modules/food_and_drinks/drinks/drinks/bottle.dm b/code/modules/food_and_drinks/drinks/drinks/bottle.dm
index d101375381..f85668d2b8 100644
--- a/code/modules/food_and_drinks/drinks/drinks/bottle.dm
+++ b/code/modules/food_and_drinks/drinks/drinks/bottle.dm
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@
 
 /obj/item/reagent_containers/food/drinks/holyoil
 	name = "flask of zelus oil"
-	desc = "A brass flask of the zelus oil."
+	desc = "A brass flask of Zelus oil, a viscous fluid with a scenting of brass - this flask may be sipped or thrown."
 	icon_state = "zelusflask"
 	list_reagents = list("holyoil" = 30) //Powerfull
 	volume = 30
diff --git a/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/other_reagents.dm b/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/other_reagents.dm
index 895465f1e3..95310d0500 100644
--- a/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/other_reagents.dm
+++ b/code/modules/reagents/chemistry/reagents/other_reagents.dm
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@
 
 /datum/reagent/water/holywater/reaction_mob(mob/living/M, method=TOUCH, reac_volume)
 	if(iscultist(M))
-		to_chat(M, "<span class='userdanger'>A fog spreads through your mind, weakening your connect to the viel and purging your mind of Nar-sen's influence</span>")
+		to_chat(M, "<span class='userdanger'>A fog spreads through your mind, weakening your connection to the veil and purging Nar-sie's influence</span>")
 	..()
 
 /datum/reagent/water/holywater/on_mob_life(mob/living/carbon/M)
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@
 	name = "Zelus Oil"
 	id = "holyoil"
 	description = "Oil blessed by a grater being."
-	taste_description = "oils"
+	taste_description = "metallic oil"
 
 /datum/reagent/fuel/holyoil/on_mob_life(mob/living/carbon/M)
 	if(is_servant_of_ratvar(M))
@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@
 		M.AdjustStun(-30, 0)
 		M.AdjustKnockdown(-70, 0)
 		M.adjustStaminaLoss(-15, 0)
-		M.adjustToxLoss(-5, 0)
+		M.adjustToxLoss(-5, 0, TRUE)
 		M.adjustOxyLoss(-3, 0)
 		M.adjustBruteLoss(-3, 0)
 		M.adjustFireLoss(-5, 0)