[MIRROR] Fixes some grammar issues with pirates [MDB IGNORE] (#20743)

* Fixes some grammar issues with pirates (#74937) ## About The Pull Request Read title ## Why It's Good For The Game ## Changelog 🆑 spellcheck: Fixes grammar issues located in Pirates and item descriptions related to the folder /🆑 --------- Co-authored-by: san7890 <the@ san7890.com> * Fixes some grammar issues with pirates --------- Co-authored-by: Rex9001 <120136161+Rex9001@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: san7890 <the@ san7890.com>
2026-07-19 20:15:47 +01:00 · 2023-04-24 23:39:57 +01:00
parent 47b2a9f47e
commit 020a596eb3
8 changed files with 16 additions and 16 deletions
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@

 /datum/antagonist/pirate/greet()
 	. = ..()
-	to_chat(owner, "<B>The station refused to pay for your protection, protect the ship, siphon the credits from the station and raid it for even more loot.</B>")
+	to_chat(owner, "<B>The station refused to pay for your protection. Protect the ship, siphon the credits from the station, and raid it for even more loot.</B>")
 	owner.announce_objectives()

 /datum/antagonist/pirate/get_team()
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@

 /datum/objective/loot
 	var/obj/machinery/computer/piratepad_control/cargo_hold
-	explanation_text = "Acquire valuable loot and store it in designated area."
+	explanation_text = "Acquire valuable loot and store it in the designated area."
 	var/target_value = 50000


@@ -73,9 +73,9 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(heavy_pirate_gangs, init_pirate_gangs(is_heavy = TRUE))
 	threat_title = "Sector protection offer"
 	threat_content = "Hey, pal, this is the %SHIPNAME. Can't help but notice you're rocking a wild \
 		and crazy shuttle there with NO INSURANCE! Crazy. What if something happened to it, huh?! We've \
-		done a quick evaluation on your rates in this sector and we're offering %PAYOFF to cover for your \
+		done a quick evaluation of your rates in this sector, and we're offering %PAYOFF to cover your \
 		shuttle in case of any disaster."
-	arrival_announcement = "Do you want to reconsider our offer? Unfortunately, the time for negotiations has passed. Open up, we're coming aboard soon."
+	arrival_announcement = "Do you want to reconsider our offer? Unfortunately, the time for negotiations has passed. Open up; we're coming aboard soon."
 	possible_answers = list("Purchase Insurance.","Reject Offer.")

 	response_received = "Sweet, free cash. Let's get outta here, boys."
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(heavy_pirate_gangs, init_pirate_gangs(is_heavy = TRUE))

 	threat_title = "Transfer of goods"
 	threat_content = "Ahoy! This be the %SHIPNAME. Cough up %PAYOFF credits or you'll walk the plank."
-	arrival_announcement = "The Jolly Roger won't wait forever, maties; we're laying alongside ready to send you some gifts."
+	arrival_announcement = "The Jolly Roger won't wait forever, maties; we're lying alongside, ready to send you some gifts."
 	possible_answers = list("We'll pay.","We will not be extorted.")

 	response_received = "Thanks for the credits, landlubbers."
@@ -125,9 +125,9 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(heavy_pirate_gangs, init_pirate_gangs(is_heavy = TRUE))

 	threat_title = "Junkie tribute"
 	threat_content = "Hello, you psychically dormant pawn-pieces. It's the %SHIPNAME! Our funds are running a little low, and we're not going to be able to continue our gore-binge! %PAYOFF credits should do, wanna help us out?"
-	arrival_announcement = "We didn't blaze this far just to send some idle threats. Just you wait, we'll make you wish you were in a mental asylum."
+	arrival_announcement = "We didn't blaze this far just to send some idle threats. Just you wait; we'll make you wish you were in a mental asylum."
 	possible_answers = list("Send some funds so they go away.","We're not funding these junkies.")

-	response_received = "You guys aren't so bad for being dormants. Next gore-fest goes to you guys. Peace!"
+	response_received = "You guys aren't so bad for being dormants. The next gore-fest goes to you guys. Peace!"
 	response_too_late = "Oh, now you think we're worth the money. Pathetic dormants."
 	response_not_enough = "You really shouldn't have messed with us. You're in for a psychic nightmare."
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 	density = FALSE
 	show_flavor = FALSE //Flavour only exists for spawners menu
 	you_are_text = "You are a space pirate."
-	flavour_text = "The station refused to pay for your protection, protect the ship, siphon the credits from the station and raid it for even more loot."
+	flavour_text = "The station refused to pay for your protection. Protect the ship, siphon the credits from the station, and raid it for even more loot."
 	spawner_job_path = /datum/job/space_pirate
 	///Rank of the pirate on the ship, it's used in generating pirate names!
 	var/rank = "Deserter"
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@

 /obj/effect/mob_spawn/ghost_role/human/pirate/skeleton
 	name = "pirate remains"
-	desc = "Some unanimated bones. They feel like they could spring to life any moment!"
+	desc = "Some inanimate bones. They feel like they could spring to life at any moment!"
 	density = FALSE
 	icon = 'icons/effects/blood.dmi'
 	icon_state = "remains"
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 	AddComponent(/datum/component/gps, "Nautical Signal")
 	active = TRUE
 	to_chat(user,span_notice("You toggle [src] [active ? "on":"off"]."))
-	to_chat(user,span_warning("The scrambling signal can be now tracked by GPS."))
+	to_chat(user,span_warning("The scrambling signal can now be tracked by GPS."))
 	START_PROCESSING(SSobj,src)

 /obj/machinery/shuttle_scrambler/interact(mob/user)
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
 		to_chat(user,span_notice("There's nothing to withdraw."))

 /obj/machinery/shuttle_scrambler/proc/send_notification()
-	priority_announce("Data theft signal detected, source registered on local gps units.")
+	priority_announce("Data theft signal detected; source registered on local GPS units.")

 /obj/machinery/shuttle_scrambler/proc/toggle_off(mob/user)
 	SSshuttle.clearTradeBlockade(src)
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@

 /obj/machinery/computer/camera_advanced/shuttle_docker/syndicate/pirate/psyker
 	name = "psyker navigation warper"
-	desc = "Used to designate a precise transit location for the psyker shuttle, using sent out brainwaves as detailed sight."
+	desc = "Uses amplified brainwaves to designate and map a precise transit location for the psyker shuttle."
 	icon_screen = "recharge_comp_on"
 	interaction_flags_machine = INTERACT_MACHINE_ALLOW_SILICON | INTERACT_MACHINE_SET_MACHINE //blind friendly
 	x_offset = 0
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 /obj/item/reagent_containers/hypospray/medipen/gore
 	name = "gore autoinjector"
-	desc = "A ghetto looking autoinjector filled with gore, aka dirty kronkaine. Probably shouldn't take this while in the job, but it is a super-stimulant. Don't take two at once."
+	desc = "A ghetto-looking autoinjector filled with gore, aka dirty kronkaine. You probably shouldn't take this while on the job, but it is a super-stimulant. Don't take two at once."
 	volume = 15
 	amount_per_transfer_from_this = 15
 	list_reagents = list(/datum/reagent/drug/kronkaine/gore = 15)
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 	// SKYRAT EDIT ADDITION END
 /obj/item/clothing/gloves/fingerless
 	name = "fingerless gloves"
-	desc = "Plain black gloves without fingertips for the hard working."
+	desc = "Plain black gloves without fingertips for the hard-working."
 	icon_state = "fingerless"
 	greyscale_colors = "#2f2e31"
 	strip_delay = 40
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@

 /obj/item/clothing/suit/space/pirate
 	name = "modified EVA suit"
-	desc = "A modified suit to allow space pirates to board shuttles and stations while avoiding the maw of the void. Comes with additional protection, and is lighter to move in."
+	desc = "A modified suit to allow space pirates to board shuttles and stations while avoiding the maw of the void. Comes with additional protection and is lighter to move in."
 	icon_state = "spacepirate"
 	w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_NORMAL
 	allowed = list(/obj/item/gun, /obj/item/ammo_box, /obj/item/ammo_casing, /obj/item/melee/baton, /obj/item/restraints/handcuffs, /obj/item/tank/internals, /obj/item/melee/energy/sword/pirate, /obj/item/clothing/glasses/eyepatch, /obj/item/reagent_containers/cup/glass/bottle/rum)
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@

 /obj/item/clothing/under/syndicate/sniper
 	name = "tactical turtleneck suit"
-	desc = "A double seamed tactical turtleneck disguised as a civilian grade silk suit. Intended for the most formal operator. The collar is really sharp."
+	desc = "A double seamed tactical turtleneck disguised as a civilian-grade silk suit. Intended for the most formal operator. The collar is really sharp."
 	icon_state = "tactical_suit"
 	inhand_icon_state = "bl_suit"
 	can_adjust = FALSE