Adds more feedback to traitor dehydrated space carp. Fixes spelling.

code/datums/uplink_item.dm

@@ -348,14 +348,14 @@ var/list/uplink_items = list()
 
 /datum/uplink_item/stealthy_weapons/throwingstars
 	name = "Box of Throwing Stars"
-	desc = "A box of throwing stars with a high chance of embedding themselves in people's limbs."
+	desc = "A box of throwing stars with a high chance of embedding themselves in victims' limbs."
 	item = /obj/item/weapon/storage/box/throwing_stars
 	cost = 6
 	excludefrom = list(/datum/game_mode/nuclear)
 
 /datum/uplink_item/stealthy_weapons/foampistol
 	name = "Toy Gun (with Stun Darts)"
-	desc = "An innocent looking toy pistol designed to fire foam darts. Comes loaded with riot grade darts, to incapacitate a target."
+	desc = "An innocent-looking toy pistol designed to fire foam darts. Comes loaded with riot grade darts, to incapacitate a target."
 	item = /obj/item/weapon/gun/projectile/automatic/toy/pistol/riot
 	cost = 6
 	surplus = 10
@@ -399,14 +399,14 @@ var/list/uplink_items = list()
 
 /datum/uplink_item/stealthy_weapons/pizza_bomb
 	name = "Pizza Bomb"
-	desc = "A pizza box with a bomb taped inside of it. The timer needs to be set by opening the box; afterwards, opening the box again will trigger the detonation."
+	desc = "A pizza box with a bomb taped inside it. The timer needs to be set by opening the box; afterwards, opening the box again will trigger the detonation."
 	item = /obj/item/device/pizza_bomb
 	cost = 4
 	surplus = 8
 
 /datum/uplink_item/stealthy_weapons/dehy_carp
 	name = "Dehydrated Space Carp"
-	desc = "Just add water to make your very own hostile to everything space carp. It looks just like a plushie."
+	desc = "Looks like a plush toy carp, but just add water and it becomes a real-life space carp! Activate before use."
 	item = /obj/item/toy/carpplushie/dehy_carp
 	cost = 3
 
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ var/list/uplink_items = list()
 
 /datum/uplink_item/stealthy_tools/chameleon_proj
 	name = "Chameleon-Projector"
-	desc = "Projects an image across a user, disguising them as an object scanned with it, as long as they don't move the projector from their hand. The disguised user cannot run and rojectiles pass over them."
+	desc = "Projects an image across a user, disguising them as an object scanned with it, as long as they don't move the projector from their hand. The disguised user cannot run, and projectiles pass over them."
 	item = /obj/item/device/chameleon
 	cost = 7
 	excludefrom = list(/datum/game_mode/gang)
@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ var/list/uplink_items = list()
 
 /datum/uplink_item/stealthy_tools/stimpack
 	name = "Stimpack"
-	desc = "Stimpacks, a tool of many great heroes, make you nearly immune to stuns and knockdowns for about 5 minutes after injection."
+	desc = "Stimpacks, the tool of many great heroes, make you nearly immune to stuns and knockdowns for about 5 minutes after injection."
 	item = /obj/item/weapon/reagent_containers/syringe/stimulants
 	cost = 8
 	surplus = 90
@@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ var/list/uplink_items = list()
 
 /datum/uplink_item/device_tools/emag
 	name = "Cryptographic Sequencer"
-	desc = "The emag is a small card that unlocks hidden functions in electronic devices, subverts intended functions and characteristically breaks security mechanisms."
+	desc = "The cryptographic sequencer, or emag, is a small card that unlocks hidden functions in electronic devices, subverts intended functions and characteristically breaks security mechanisms."
 	item = /obj/item/weapon/card/emag
 	cost = 6
 	excludefrom = list(/datum/game_mode/gang)
@@ -657,7 +657,7 @@ var/list/uplink_items = list()
 /datum/uplink_item/implants/uplink
 	name = "Uplink Implant"
 	desc = "An implant injected into the body, and later activated using a bodily gesture to open an uplink with 10 telecrystals. \
-	The ability for an agent to open an uplink after their posessions have been stripped from them makes this implant excellent for escaping confinement."
+	The ability for an agent to open an uplink after their possessions have been stripped from them makes this implant excellent for escaping confinement."
 	item = /obj/item/weapon/storage/box/syndie_kit/imp_uplink
 	cost = 14
 	surplus = 0

code/game/objects/items/dehy_carp.dm

@@ -6,22 +6,21 @@
 // Child of carpplushie because this should do everything the toy does and more
 /obj/item/toy/carpplushie/dehy_carp
 	var/mob/owner = null	// Carp doesn't attack owner, set when using in hand
-	var/owned = 1	// Boolean, no owner to begin with
+	var/owned = 0	// Boolean, no owner to begin with
 
 // Attack self
 /obj/item/toy/carpplushie/dehy_carp/attack_self(mob/user)
 	src.add_fingerprint(user)	// Anyone can add their fingerprints to it with this
-	if(owned)
-		user << "<span class='notice'>[src] stares up at you with friendly eyes.</span>"
+	if(!owned)
+		user << "<span class='notice'>You pet [src]. You swear it looks up at you.</span>"
 		owner = user
-		owned = 0
+		owned = 1
 	return ..()
 
 
 /obj/item/toy/carpplushie/dehy_carp/afterattack(obj/O, mob/user,proximity)
 	if(!proximity) return
 	if(istype(O,/obj/structure/sink))
-		user << "<span class='notice'>You place [src] under a stream of water...</span>"
 		user.drop_item()
 		loc = get_turf(O)
 		return Swell()
@@ -45,4 +44,8 @@
 			if(F == "neutral")
 				factions -= F
 		C.faction = factions
+	if (!owner || owner.faction != C.faction)
+		visible_message("<span class='warning'>You have a bad feeling about this.</span>") // welcome to the hostile carp enjoy your die
+	else
+		visible_message("<span class='notice'>The newly grown carp looks up at you with friendly eyes.</span>")
 	qdel(src)

code/game/objects/items/toys.dm

@@ -1132,6 +1132,7 @@
 // Attack self
 /obj/item/toy/carpplushie/attack_self(mob/user)
 	playsound(src.loc, bitesound, 20, 1)
+	user << "<span class='notice'>You pet [src]. D'awww.</span>"
 	return ..()
 
 /*