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Da Cool Boss 19b595632f Typo fixes and rewrites for some heretic items & traumas (#84214)
## About The Pull Request
Fixes some typos.
Rewrote some weird sentences that didn't scan right or weren't clear.
Rewrites a lot of descriptions for the heretic paintings.
Rewrites the painting-related traumas, made them more medical themed and
vague. For example, the health scanner will no longer identify the ghost
haunting someone and ruining their mood, it will instead report that the
patient is hallucinating and depressed.
Painting knowledge description got minor rewrites.
The painting moodlets are rewritten to be a little more clear where
they're coming from.

## Why It's Good For The Game
Typo fixes mean players see less typos, which is self evidently good.
The rewrites were because I didn't feel like a lot of this stuff was
written to a high standard. It was riddled with typos, overly vague in a
lot of places, and defaulted to using all caps for horror value far too
often. It needed to be a little bit more direct and a little bit more
subtle. I've tried hard to keep the original tone and intent but
hopefully it's a little spookier now.
Codex description got expanded because the old description didn't
describe how the book looks which annoyed me a lil.
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