Corrects grammar and typos for Species Blurbs (#23672)

* surprised these went unnoticed ngl

* ebbeebe

* more corrections
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icobase = 'icons/mob/human_races/r_grey.dmi'
language = "Psionic Communication"
blurb = "The Grey, known for their psionic abilities and unique appearance, hail from beyond the Milky Way, with an undisclosed homeworld. \
blurb = "The Grey, known for their psionic abilities and unique appearance, hail from beyond the Milky Way and have an undisclosed homeworld. \
They rely heavily on cloning technology and are governed by a technocratic council of scientists.<br/><br/> \
Focused on technological advancement and the study of the universe, the Grey lack religious or spiritual beliefs. \
Their objective perspective and advanced knowledge often position them to focus on their own projects rather then the disputes of other species."
Their objective perspective and advanced knowledge often position them to focus on their own projects rather than the disputes of other species."
eyes = "grey_eyes_s"
butt_sprite = "grey"
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
bodyflags = HAS_ICON_SKIN_TONE | HAS_BODY_MARKINGS
dietflags = DIET_OMNI
blurb = "Humanity, originating from the Sol system, has expanded over five centuries, branching out to forge a variety of governments and powerful corporations. \
These range from the militaristic Trans Solar Federation, the Union of Soviet Socialist Planets, and megacorps like Nanotrasen.<br/><br/> \
With a constant desire to colonize and spread their influence onto other species, they have began to develop alliances and enemies. \
Making human's one of the most recongnizeable and socially diverse species in the sector."
These range from the militaristic Trans Solar Federation, the Union of Soviet Socialist Planets, and mega corporations like Nanotrasen.<br/><br/> \
With a constant desire to colonize and spread their influence onto other species, they have begun to develop alliances and enemies, \
making humans one of the most recognizable and socially diverse species in the sector."
icon_skin_tones = list( //Organized to be from Light to Dark.
1 = "Default White",
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
icobase = 'icons/mob/human_races/r_kidan.dmi'
language = "Chittin"
blurb = "The Kidan are ant-like beings possessing a hardened exoskeleton and a strict adherence to social castes. \
blurb = "The Kidan are ant-like beings possessing a hardened exoskeleton and strict adherence to social castes. \
They originate from the planet Aurum — a barren bombarded world that suffered after the war with the Solar-Central Compact, having lost decisively after the Battle of Argos.<br/><br/> \
They are relatively minor players in galactic affairs and presently suffer heavy sanctions from the SCC, \
though they are tentatively re-establishing relations with other galactic powers, even after the crumbling of their once powerful empire."
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
language = "Skrellian"
primitive_form = /datum/species/monkey/skrell
blurb = "Skrell are a amphibious species, that come from the planet Jargon 4, a humid planet filled with swamps and archipelagos. \
Skrell are a highly advanced and logical race who live under the rule of the Qerr'Katish, the main govermental body.<br/><br/> \
blurb = "Skrell are an amphibious species, that come from the planet Jargon 4, a humid planet filled with swamps and archipelagos. \
Skrell are a highly advanced and logical race who live under the rule of the Qerr'Katish, the main governmental body.<br/><br/> \
Skrell are herbivores and opulent in nature thanks to central tenets of the Skrellian religion. \
While classically preferring diplomacy, the Skrell participate in the largest military alliance in the galaxy, the Solar-Central Compact."
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
language = "Bubblish"
blurb = "Slime People are gelatinous and translucent beings from the vast oceans of Xarxis 5. \
They are recent entrants to the galactic scene, having been discovered by a TSF exploratory company during space expedetions.<br/><br/> \
They are recent entrants to the galactic scene, having been discovered by a TSF exploratory company during space expeditions.<br/><br/> \
Slime People traditionally operate in roaming bands and tribes that migrate according to orbital patterns and tides. \
A great deal of Slime People prefer the comforts and traditions of their homeworld, though many more have decided to take their chances among the stars, trying \
to find a better life for themselves and their species."
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
unarmed_type = /datum/unarmed_attack/claws
blurb = "Tajaran hail from the mineral-rich arctic moon of Ahdomai. \
They were introduced into the galactic scene after Skrellian discovery and uplifted to be an associate to the Solar-Central Compact.<br/><br/> \
They were introduced into the galactic scene after the Skrellian discovery and were elevated to be associates to the Solar-Central Compact.<br/><br/> \
The teachings of S'randarr and solar iconography dominate their religious practices, \
and Tajaran often speak in the third person due to the lack of first-person references in their native tongue."
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@
primitive_form = /datum/species/monkey/unathi
blurb = "Unathi are a scaled species of reptilian beings from the desert world of Moghes, within the Uuosa-Eso system. \
Organizing themselves in highly competitive feudal kingdoms, Unathi lack any sort of wide-scale unification, and their culture and history consist of centuries of internal conflict and struggle.<br/><br/> \
Despite clans having a sizeable military force, inter-clan rivalries and constant civil war prevents the Unathi from achieving much more in the wider galactic scene."
Organizing themselves in highly competitive feudal kingdoms, the Unathi lack any sort of wide-scale unification, and their culture and history consist of centuries of internal conflict and struggle.<br/><br/> \
Despite clans having a sizeable military force, inter-clan rivalries and constant civil war prevent the Unathi from achieving much more in the wider galactic scene."
species_traits = list(LIPS)
inherent_biotypes = MOB_ORGANIC | MOB_HUMANOID | MOB_REPTILE
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
blurb = "Vulpkanin are bipedal canid-like beings from the Vazzend binary system, having been forced from their homeworld by a cataclysmic event and scattered throughout the Orion Sector. \
While Vulpkanin are chiefly led by independent planetary governments, they also serve under a loose federation known as The Assembly.<br/><br/> \
Their religious systems traditionally pay tribute to an all-infusing universal will called 'Racht'. \
Vulpkanin groups are minor players in galactic affairs, and are largely concerned with the focus of restoration of their homeworld."
Vulpkanin groups are minor players in galactic affairs, as they are largely concerned with the restoration of their homeworld."
species_traits = list(LIPS)
clothing_flags = HAS_UNDERWEAR | HAS_UNDERSHIRT | HAS_SOCKS