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[MIRROR] Spellchecks a lot of Heretic stuff [MDB IGNORE] (#18999)
Spellchecks a lot of Heretic stuff (#72995) ## About The Pull Request Heretic is awesome, but I've always noticed a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes in a lot of its descriptions and explanations, which I feel detract from the otherwise very high quality feeling of heretic. ps. I've never touched tgUI before and it gave me a bunch of unrelated errors while working on some minor fixes in the main heretic screen, while compiling fine. Tell me if I did a bad, thanks! ## Why It's Good For The Game Fixes a bunch of small errors and changes wording around in some cases to be, in my opinion, clearer in meaning. ## Changelog 🆑 spellcheck: Heretic has received a minor grammar and spelling check over. Wrong kind of heresy, there. /🆑 Co-authored-by: Unit2E <41054578+Unit2E@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: Unit2E <ccupbestcup@protonmail.com>
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/obj/item/clothing/neck/heretic_focus
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name = "Amber Focus"
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desc = "A amber focusing glass that provides a link to the world beyond. The necklace seems to twitch, but only when you look at it from the corner of your eye."
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desc = "An amber focusing glass that provides a link to the world beyond. The necklace seems to twitch, but only when you look at it from the corner of your eye."
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icon_state = "eldritch_necklace"
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w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_SMALL
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resistance_flags = FIRE_PROOF
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// The spooky "void" / "abyssal" / "madness" mask for heretics.
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/obj/item/clothing/mask/madness_mask
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name = "Abyssal Mask"
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desc = "A mask created from the suffering of existance. Looking down it's eyes, you notice something gazing back at you."
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desc = "A mask created from the suffering of existence. Looking down it's eyes, you notice something gazing back at you."
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icon_state = "mad_mask"
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inhand_icon_state = null
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w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_SMALL
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/ultimate/ash_final
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name = "Ashlord's Rite"
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desc = "The ascension ritual of the Path of Ash. \
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Bring 3 burning or husked corpses to a transumation rune to complete the ritual. \
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Bring 3 burning or husked corpses to a transmutation rune to complete the ritual. \
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When completed, you become a harbinger of flames, gaining two abilites. \
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Cascade, which causes a massive, growing ring of fire around you, \
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and Oath of Flame, causing you to passively create a ring of flames as you walk. \
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*/
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/limited_amount/starting/base_blade
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name = "The Cutting Edge"
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desc = "Opens up the path of blades to you. \
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desc = "Opens up the Path of Blades to you. \
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Allows you to transmute a knife with two bars of silver to create a Sundered Blade. \
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You can create up to five at a time."
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gain_text = "Our great ancestors forged swords and practiced sparring on the eve of great battles."
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/spell/realignment
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name = "Realignment"
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desc = "Grants you Realignment a spell that wil realign your body rapidly for a short period. \
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During this process, you will rapidly regenerate stamina and stuns, however, you will be unable to attack. \
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This spell can be casted in rapid succession, but doing so will increase the cooldown."
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During this process, you will rapidly regenerate stamina and quickly recover from stuns, however, you will be unable to attack. \
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This spell can be cast in rapid succession, but doing so will increase the cooldown."
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gain_text = "In the flurry of death, he found peace within himself. Despite insurmountable odds, he forged on."
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next_knowledge = list(/datum/heretic_knowledge/duel_stance)
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spell_to_add = /datum/action/cooldown/spell/realignment
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These blades will protect you from all attacks, but are consumed on use. \
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Your Furious Steel spell will also have a shorter cooldown. \
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Additionally, you become a master of combat, gaining full wound and stun immunity. \
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Your Sundered Blades deal bonus damage and healing you on attack for a portion of the damage dealt."
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Your Sundered Blades deal bonus damage and heal you on attack for a portion of the damage dealt."
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gain_text = "The Torn Champion is freed! I will become the blade reunited, and with my greater ambition, \
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I AM UNMATCHED! A STORM OF STEEL AND SILVER IS UPON US! WITNESS MY ASCENSION!"
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route = PATH_BLADE
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/ultimate/flesh_final
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name = "Priest's Final Hymn"
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desc = "The ascension ritual of the Path of Flesh. \
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Bring 4 corpses to a transumation rune to complete the ritual. \
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Bring 4 corpses to a transmutation rune to complete the ritual. \
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When completed, you gain the ability to shed your human form \
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and become the Lord of the Night, a supremely powerful creature. \
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Just the act of transforming causes nearby heathens great fear and trauma. \
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/ultimate/rust_final
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name = "Rustbringer's Oath"
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desc = "The ascension ritual of the Path of Rust. \
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Bring 3 corpses to a transumation rune on the bridge of the station to complete the ritual. \
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Bring 3 corpses to a transmutation rune on the bridge of the station to complete the ritual. \
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When completed, the ritual site will endlessly spread rust onto any surface, stopping for nothing. \
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Additionally, you will become extremely resilient on rust, healing at triple the rate \
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and becoming immune to many effects and dangers."
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/hunt_and_sacrifice
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name = "Heartbeat of the Mansus"
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desc = "Allows you to sacrifice targets to the Mansus by bringing them to a rune in critical (or worse) condition. \
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If you have no targets, stand on a transmutation rune and invoke it to aquire some."
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If you have no targets, stand on a transmutation rune and invoke it to acquire some."
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required_atoms = list(/mob/living/carbon/human = 1)
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cost = 0
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priority = MAX_KNOWLEDGE_PRIORITY // Should be at the top
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desc = "Allows you to transmute any ballistic weapon, such as a pipegun, with hide \
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from any animal, a plank of wood, and a camera to create the Lionhunter's rifle. \
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The Lionhunter's Rifle is a long ranged ballistic weapon with three shots. \
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These shots function as normal, albiet weak high caliber mutitions when fired from \
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These shots function as normal, albeit weak high caliber mutitions when fired from \
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close range or at inanimate objects. You can aim the rifle at distant foes, \
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causing the shot to deal massively increased damage and hone in on them."
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gain_text = "I met an old man in an anique shop who wielded a very unusual weapon. \
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desc = "Allows you to transmute a tank of water and a glass shard into a Flask of Eldritch Essence. \
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Eldritch water can be consumed for potent healing, or given to heathens for deadly poisoning."
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gain_text = "This is an old recipe. The Owl whispered it to me. \
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Created by the Priest - the Liquid that is both was and is not."
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Created by the Priest - the Liquid that both was and is not."
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next_knowledge = list(
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/rust_regen,
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/spell/ash_passage,
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/curse/corrosion
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name = "Curse of Corrosion"
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desc = "Allows you to transmute wirecutters, a pool of vomit, and a heart to cast a curse of sickness on a crew member.\
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desc = "Allows you to transmute wirecutters, a pool of vomit, and a heart to cast a curse of sickness on a crew member. \
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While cursed, the victim will repeatedly vomit while their organs will take constant damage. You can additionally supply an item \
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that a victim has touched or is covered in the victim's blood to empower the curse."
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gain_text = "The body of humanity is temporary. Their weaknesses cannot be stopped, like iron falling to rust. Show them all."
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*/
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/limited_amount/starting/base_void
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name = "Glimmer of Winter"
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desc = "Opens up the path of void to you. \
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desc = "Opens up the Path of Void to you. \
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Allows you to transmute a knife in sub-zero temperatures into a Void Blade. \
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You can only create five at a time." //SKYRAT EDIT two to five
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gain_text = "I feel a shimmer in the air, the air around me gets colder. \
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I start to realize the emptiness of existance. Something's watching me."
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I start to realize the emptiness of existence. Something's watching me."
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next_knowledge = list(/datum/heretic_knowledge/void_grasp)
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required_atoms = list(/obj/item/knife = 1)
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result_atoms = list(/obj/item/melee/sickly_blade/void)
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/cold_snap
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name = "Aristocrat's Way"
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desc = "Grants you immunity to cold temperatures, and removing your need breathe. \
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You can still take damage due to lack of pressure."
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desc = "Grants you immunity to cold temperatures, and removes your need breathe. \
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You can still take damage due to a lack of pressure."
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gain_text = "I found a thread of cold breath. It lead me to a strange shrine, all made of crystals. \
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Translucent and white, a depiction of a nobleman stood before me."
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next_knowledge = list(
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/spell/void_cone
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name = "Void Blast"
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desc = "Grants you Void Blast, a spell that shoots out a freezing blast in a code ahead of you, \
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desc = "Grants you Void Blast, a spell that shoots out a freezing blast in a cone in front of you, \
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freezing the ground and any victims within."
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gain_text = "Every door I open racks my body. I am afraid of what is behind them. Someone is expecting me, \
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and my legs start to drag. Is that... snow?"
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name = "Void Pull"
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desc = "Grants you Void Pull, a spell that pulls all nearby heathens towards you, stunning them briefly."
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gain_text = "All is fleeting, but what else stays? I'm close to ending what was started. \
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The Aristocrat reveals themself to me again. They tell me I am late. Their pull is immense, I cannot turn back."
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The Aristocrat reveals themselves to me again. They tell me I am late. Their pull is immense, I cannot turn back."
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next_knowledge = list(
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/ultimate/void_final,
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/spell/cleave,
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/datum/heretic_knowledge/ultimate/void_final
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name = "Waltz at the End of Time"
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desc = "The ascension ritual of the Path of Void. \
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Bring 3 corpses to a transumation rune in sub-zero temperatures to complete the ritual. \
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Bring 3 corpses to a transmutation rune in sub-zero temperatures to complete the ritual. \
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When completed, causes a violent storm of void snow \
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to assault the station, freezing and damaging heathens. Those nearby will be silenced and frozen even quicker. \
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Additionally, you will become immune to the effects of space."
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<Stack.Item>
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- Follow your <span style={hereticRed}>Living Heart</span> to find
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your targets. Bring them back to a
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<span style={hereticGreen}>transmutation rune</span> in critical
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or worse condition to
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<span style={hereticGreen}>transmutation rune</span> in critical or
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worse condition to
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<span style={hereticRed}>sacrifice</span> them for
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<span style={hereticBlue}>knowledge points</span>. The Mansus{' '}
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<b>ONLY</b> accepts targets pointed to by the
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<span style={hereticRed}>Living Heart</span>.
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</Stack.Item>
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<Stack.Item>
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- Make yourself a <span style={hereticYellow}>focus</span> to be
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able to cast various advanced spells to assist you in acquire
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harder and harder sacrifices.
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- Make yourself a <span style={hereticYellow}>focus</span> to be able
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to cast various advanced spells to assist you in acquiring harder and
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harder sacrifices.
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</Stack.Item>
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<Stack.Item>
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- Accomplish all of your objectives to be able to learn the{' '}
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