Embedding and Nutriment Pump Typos (#84239)

## About The Pull Request
Fixes small typo errors in the embedding text when removing shrapnel
from patients, or yourself. Added the closing parenthesis to the
messages missing them, and removed the unnecessary punctuation inside
them.

Also fixes a typo in the nutriment pump cybernetic implant description,
saying "with" instead of "will".
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IsaacExists
2024-06-24 17:38:23 -04:00
committed by GitHub
parent 9e08064654
commit 937e8b82e2
2 changed files with 6 additions and 6 deletions
+4 -4
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@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@
/// everything async that ripOut used to do
/datum/component/embedded/proc/complete_rip_out(mob/living/carbon/victim, obj/item/I, obj/item/bodypart/limb, time_taken)
victim.visible_message(span_warning("[victim] attempts to remove [weapon] from [victim.p_their()] [limb.plaintext_zone]."),span_notice("You attempt to remove [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(time_taken)].)"))
victim.visible_message(span_warning("[victim] attempts to remove [weapon] from [victim.p_their()] [limb.plaintext_zone]."),span_notice("You attempt to remove [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(time_taken)])"))
if(!do_after(victim, time_taken, target = victim))
return
if(!weapon || !limb || weapon.loc != victim || !(weapon in limb.embedded_objects))
@@ -279,12 +279,12 @@
var/pluck_time = rip_time * (weapon.w_class * 0.3) * (self_pluck ? 1.5 : 1) * tweezer_speed * (tweezer_safe ? 1 : 1.5)
if(self_pluck)
user.visible_message(span_danger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from [user.p_their()] [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]..."), span_notice("You start plucking [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)].)"),\
user.visible_message(span_danger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from [user.p_their()] [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]..."), span_notice("You start plucking [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)])"),\
vision_distance=COMBAT_MESSAGE_RANGE, ignored_mobs=victim)
else
user.visible_message(span_danger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from [victim]'s [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]..."),span_notice("You start plucking [weapon] from [victim]'s [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)]."), \
user.visible_message(span_danger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from [victim]'s [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]..."),span_notice("You start plucking [weapon] from [victim]'s [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)])"), \
vision_distance=COMBAT_MESSAGE_RANGE, ignored_mobs=victim)
to_chat(victim, span_userdanger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)]."))
to_chat(victim, span_userdanger("[user] begins plucking [weapon] from your [limb.plaintext_zone] with [possible_tweezers]... (It will take [DisplayTimeText(pluck_time)])"))
if(!do_after(user, pluck_time, victim))
if(self_pluck)
@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@
/datum/design/cyberimp_nutriment
name = "Nutriment Pump Implant"
desc = "This implant with synthesize and pump into your bloodstream a small amount of nutriment when you are starving."
desc = "This implant will synthesize and pump into your bloodstream a small amount of nutriment when you are starving."
id = "ci-nutriment"
build_type = PROTOLATHE | AWAY_LATHE | MECHFAB
construction_time = 4 SECONDS
@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@
/datum/design/cyberimp_nutriment_plus
name = "Nutriment Pump Implant PLUS"
desc = "This implant with synthesize and pump into your bloodstream a small amount of nutriment when you are hungry."
desc = "This implant will synthesize and pump into your bloodstream a small amount of nutriment when you are hungry."
id = "ci-nutrimentplus"
build_type = PROTOLATHE | AWAY_LATHE | MECHFAB
construction_time = 5 SECONDS