[NO GBP] Fix NT Frontier Partner Typo & Better Experiment Descriptions For Ordnance (#69408)

* Fix typo

* Better descriptions

* Fix errant the

* Better perf hint

code/modules/experisci/experiment/experiments.dm

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
 
 /datum/experiment/ordnance/explosive/lowyieldbomb
 	name = "Low-Yield Explosives"
-	description = "Low-yield explosives may prove useful for our asset protection teams. Perform research and publish papers on this field. Explosion from any source is allowed."
+	description = "Low-yield explosives may prove useful for our asset protection teams. Capture a small explosion with a Doppler Array and publish the data in a paper."
 	gain = list(10,15,20)
 	target_amount = list(5,10,20)
 	experiment_proper = TRUE
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
 
 /datum/experiment/ordnance/explosive/highyieldbomb
 	name = "High-Yield Explosives"
-	description =  "Several reactions react very energetically and can be utilized for bigger explosives. Perform research and publish papers on this field. Any gas reaction is allowed."
+	description =  "Several reactions react very energetically and can be utilized for bigger explosives. Capture any tank explosion with a Doppler Array and publish the data in a paper. Any gas reaction is allowed."
 	gain = list(10,50,100)
 	target_amount = list(50,100,300)
 	experiment_proper = TRUE
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
 
 /datum/experiment/ordnance/explosive/hydrogenbomb
 	name = "Hydrogen Explosives"
-	description = "Combustion of Hydrogen and it's derivatives can be very powerful. Perform research and publish papers on this field. Only the specified gas reactions are allowed."
+	description = "Combustion of Hydrogen and it's derivatives can be very powerful. Capture any tank explosion with a Doppler Array and publish the data in a paper. Only Hydrogen or Tritium Fires are allowed."
 	gain = list(15,40,60)
 	target_amount = list(50,75,150)
 	experiment_proper = TRUE
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
 
 /datum/experiment/ordnance/explosive/nobliumbomb
 	name = "Noblium Explosives"
-	description = "The formation of Hyper-Noblium is very energetic and can be harnessed for explosives. Perform research and publish papers on this field. Only the specified gas reaction is allowed."
+	description = "The formation of Hyper-Noblium is very energetic and can be harnessed for explosives. Capture any tank explosion with a Doppler Array and publish the data in a paper. Only Hyper-Noblium Condensation is allowed."
 	gain = list(15,60,120)
 	target_amount = list(50,100,300)
 	experiment_proper = TRUE
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
 
 /datum/experiment/ordnance/explosive/pressurebomb
 	name = "Reactionless Explosives"
-	description = "Gases with high specific heat can heat up those with a low one and produce a lot of pressure. Perform research and publish papers on this field. No gas reactions are allowed."
+	description = "Gases with high specific heat can heat up those with a low one and produce a lot of pressure.Capture any tank explosion with a Doppler Array and publish the data in a paper. No gas reactions are allowed."
 	gain = list(10,50,100)
 	target_amount = list(20,50,100)
 	experiment_proper = TRUE
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
 
 /datum/experiment/ordnance/gaseous/nitrous_oxide
 	name = "Nitrous Oxide Gas Shells"
-	description = "The delivery of N2O into an area of operation might prove useful. Perform research and publish papers on this field."
+	description = "The delivery of N2O into an area of operation might prove useful. Pack the specified gas into a tank and burst it using a Tank Compressor. Publish the data in a paper."
 	gain = list(10,40)
 	target_amount = list(200,600)
 	experiment_proper = TRUE
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
 
 /datum/experiment/ordnance/gaseous/bz
 	name = "BZ Gas Shells"
-	description = "The delivery of BZ gas into an area of operation might prove useful. Perform research and publish papers on this field."
+	description = "The delivery of BZ gas into an area of operation might prove useful. Pack the specified gas into a tank and burst it using a Tank Compressor. Publish the data in a paper."
 	gain = list(10,30,60)
 	target_amount = list(50,125,400)
 	experiment_proper = TRUE
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
 
 /datum/experiment/ordnance/gaseous/noblium
 	name = "Hypernoblium Gas Shells"
-	description = "The delivery of Hypernoblium gas into an area of operation might prove useful. Perform research and publish papers on this field."
+	description = "The delivery of Hypernoblium gas into an area of operation might prove useful. Pack the specified gas into a tank and burst it using a Tank Compressor. Publish the data in a paper."
 	gain = list(10,40,80)
 	target_amount = list(15,55,250)
 	experiment_proper = TRUE

code/modules/experisci/experiment/types/ordnance.dm

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 	name = "Toxin Research"
 	description = "An experiment conducted in the ordnance subdepartment."
 	exp_tag = "ordnance"
-	performance_hint = "Perform research experiments in the ordnance lab and publish them with NT Frontier."
+	performance_hint = "Perform research experiments in the ordnance lab using the specified equipment, print them unto a data disk, and publish them with the NT Frontier app."
 	/// Lookup experiments are initialized using subtypes, 
 	/// this lets us ignore the ones made for subtyping.
 	var/experiment_proper = FALSE

code/modules/research/ordnance/scipaper_partner.dm

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 
 /datum/scientific_partner/medical
 	name = "Biological Research Division"
-	flufftext = "A collegiate of the best medical researchers Nanotrason employs. They seem to be interested in the biological effects of some more exotic gases. Especially stimulants and neurosupressants."
+	flufftext = "A collegiate of the best medical researchers Nanotrasen employs. They seem to be interested in the biological effects of some more exotic gases. Especially stimulants and neurosupressants."
 	accepted_experiments = list(
 		/datum/experiment/ordnance/gaseous/nitrous_oxide, 
 		/datum/experiment/ordnance/gaseous/bz,