Fixes a large amount of spelling and grammatical errors in the Exploration Drones section. Also fixes an angry pine tree quip. (#77095)

## About The Pull Request
Title

## Why It's Good For The Game
It bothered me

## Changelog

🆑 Licks-The-Crystal
spellcheck: Corrected a large quantity of spelling, grammatical and
phrasing errors with Exploration Drone content.
/🆑

---------

Co-authored-by: tattle <66640614+dragomagol@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Zephyr <12817816+ZephyrTFA@users.noreply.github.com>

code/datums/ai/basic_mobs/basic_subtrees/speech_subtree.dm

@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@
 
 /datum/ai_planning_subtree/random_speech/tree
 	speech_chance = 3
-	emote_see = list("photosynthesizes angirly.")
+	emote_see = list("photosynthesizes angrily.")
 
 /datum/ai_planning_subtree/random_speech/pig
 	speech_chance = 3

code/modules/explorer_drone/exodrone.dm

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_EMPTY(exodrone_launchers)
 /// Exploration drone
 /obj/item/exodrone
 	name = "exploration drone"
-	desc = "long range semi-autonomous exploration drone"
+	desc = "A long range, semi-autonomous exploration drone."
 	icon = 'icons/obj/exploration.dmi'
 	icon_state = "drone"
 	w_class = WEIGHT_CLASS_BULKY
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_EMPTY(exodrone_launchers)
 	if(!fuel_canister)
 		return
 
-	to_chat(user, span_notice("You remove [fuel_canister] from [src]."))
+	to_chat(user, span_notice("You remove the [fuel_canister] from the [src]."))
 	fuel_canister.forceMove(drop_location())
 	fuel_canister = null
 	update_icon()

code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/danger.dm

@@ -35,12 +35,12 @@
 	name = "space carp attack"
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SPACE)
 	blacklisted_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_CIVILIZED)
-	deep_scan_description = "You detect damage patterns to the site hinting at a presence of space carp."
+	deep_scan_description = "You detect damage patterns to the site indicating the presence of space carp."
 	description = "You are ambushed by a solitary space carp!"
 	has_tool_action_text = "Fight"
 	no_tool_action_text = "Escape!"
 	has_tool_description = "You charge your laser to fend it off."
-	no_tool_description = "Unfortunately you have no weaponry so the only option is flight."
+	no_tool_description = "Without any weaponry, you can only attempt a hasty escape!"
 	avoid_log = "Defeated a space carp."
 
 /// They get everywhere
@@ -55,15 +55,15 @@
 	has_tool_action_text = "Fight"
 	no_tool_action_text = "Escape!"
 	has_tool_description = "You charge your laser to fend it off."
-	no_tool_description = "Unfortunately you have no weaponry so the only option is flight."
+	no_tool_description = "Without any weaponry, you can only attempt a hasty escape!"
 	avoid_log = "Defeated an assistant."
 
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/danger/collapse
 	name = "collapse"
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_DRILL
-	deep_scan_description = "The architecture of the site is unstable, caution advised."
-	description = "A damaged ceiling gives up as you search an unexplored passage! You're trapped by the debris."
+	deep_scan_description = "The scan indicates that the site's structure is decrepit; caution is advised."
+	description = "A damaged ceiling gives out as you search an unexplored passage! You're trapped by the debris."
 	has_tool_action_text = "Dig out"
 	no_tool_action_text = "Squeeze."
 	has_tool_description = "You can use your drill to get out."
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
 	name = "loose wires"
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL
-	deep_scan_description = "Damaged wiring detected on site."
+	deep_scan_description = "Scans indicate a huge quantity of damaged wiring detected on site."
 	description = "You hear a loud snap behind you! A stack of sparking high-voltage wires is blocking you way out."
 	has_tool_action_text = "Disable power"
 	no_tool_action_text = "Get fried."
@@ -87,24 +87,24 @@
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL
 	deep_scan_description = "Site is exposed to space radiation. Using self-diagnostic multiool attachment advised."
-	description = "Drone feed suddenly goes haywire! It seems that the drone got hit by extremely rare cosmic ray burst! You'll have to wait for signal to be restored."
-	has_tool_description = "Multitool extension self-diagnostic attachement should deal with most of the damage automatically."
-	no_tool_description = "Nothing more to be done than wait and asses the damage."
+	description = "The drone feed suddenly goes haywire! It seems that the drone got hit by a burst of cosmic rays! You'll have to wait for the signal to be restored."
+	has_tool_description = "Your multitool should allow a significant amount of the damage to be repaired on its own." //wait, what? 
+	no_tool_description = "Nothing more to be done than to wait and assess the damage."
 	has_tool_action_text = "Wait"
 	no_tool_action_text = "Wait"
-	avoid_log = "Prevented cosmic ray damage with multitool"
+	avoid_log = "Prevented cosmic ray damage with multitool."
 
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/danger/alien_sentry
 	name = "alien security measure"
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_ALIEN)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_TRANSLATOR
 	deep_scan_description = "Automated security measures of unknown origin detected on site."
-	description = "A dangerous looking machine slides out the floor and start flashing strange glyphs while emitting high-pitched sound."
-	has_tool_description = "Your translator recognizes the glyphs as security hail and suggests identyfing yourself as guest."
+	description = "A dangerous looking machine slides out the floor and start flashing strange glyphs while emitting a high-pitched sound!"
+	has_tool_description = "Your translator recognizes the glyphs as security hail and suggests identyfing yourself as a guest."
 	no_tool_description = "The machine start shooting soon after."
 	has_tool_action_text = "Identify yourself"
 	no_tool_action_text = "Escape"
-	avoid_log = "Avoided alien security"
+	avoid_log = "Avoided alien security."
 
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/danger/beast
 	name = "alien encounter"
@@ -112,12 +112,12 @@
 	blacklisted_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_CIVILIZED)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_LASER
 	deep_scan_description = "Dangerous fauna detected on site."
-	description = "You encounter BEAST. It prepares to strike."
+	description = "You encounter an unusual beast! It prepares to strike."
 	has_tool_action_text = "Fight"
 	no_tool_action_text = "Escape"
 	has_tool_description = "You ready your laser."
-	no_tool_description = "Time to run."
-	avoid_log = "Defeated BEAST"
+	no_tool_description = "Without any weaponry, you can only attempt a hasty escape!"
+	avoid_log = "Defeated a beast."
 
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/danger/beast/New()
 	. = ..()
@@ -129,10 +129,10 @@
 	name = "irradiated section"
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SHIP)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL
-	deep_scan_description = "Sections of the vessel are irradiated."
+	deep_scan_description = "Scans indicate dangerous radioactive presence."
 	description = "You enter a nondescript ship section."
 	has_tool_action_text = "Detour"
 	no_tool_action_text = "Escape and mitigate damage."
-	has_tool_description = "Your multitool suddenly screams in warning! Section ahead is irradiated, you'll have to go around"
-	no_tool_description = "Suddenly the drone reports significant damage, it seems this section was heavily irradiated."
-	avoid_log = "Avoided irradiated section"
+	has_tool_description = "Your multitool suddenly flashes in warning! The section ahead is irradiated, you'll have to go around to avoid damage."
+	no_tool_description = "Suddenly the drone reports significant damage, it seems that this section was heavily irradiated."
+	avoid_log = "Avoided irradiated section."

code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/resource.dm

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 /// Simple event type that checks if you have a tool and after a retrieval delay adds loot to drone.
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/resource
-	name = "Retrievable resource"
+	name = "retrievable resource"
 	root_abstract_type = /datum/exploration_event/simple/resource
-	discovery_log = "Encountered recoverable resource"
+	discovery_log = "Encountered recoverable resource."
 	action_text = "Extract"
 	/// Tool type required to recover this resource
 	var/required_tool
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@
 	/// Message logged on success
 	var/success_log = "Retrieved something"
 	/// Description shown when you don't have the tool
-	var/no_tool_description = "You can't retrieve it without a tool"
+	var/no_tool_description = "You can't retrieve it without a drill."
 	/// Description shown when you have the necessary tool
-	var/has_tool_description = "You can get it out with that tool."
+	var/has_tool_description = "You can get it out with your drill!"
 	var/delay = 30 SECONDS
 	var/delay_message = "Recovering resource..."
 	/// How many times can this be extracted
@@ -71,13 +71,13 @@
 
 // All
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/resource/concealed_cache
-	name = "Concealed Cache"
+	name = "concealed cache"
 	band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_DENSITY=1)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_WELDER
-	discovery_log = "Discovered concealed and locked cache."
+	discovery_log = "Discovered a concealed, locked cache."
 	description = "You spot a cleverly hidden metal container."
 	no_tool_description = "You see no way to open it without a welder."
-	has_tool_description = "You can try to open it with your welder"
+	has_tool_description = "You can try and open it with your welder."
 	action_text = "Weld open"
 	delay_message = "Welding open the cache..."
 	loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/maintenance
@@ -87,10 +87,10 @@
 	name = "dessicated corpse"
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL
-	discovery_log = "You discovered a corpse of a humanoid."
-	description = "You find a dessicated corpose of a humanoid, it's too damaged to identify. A locked briefcase is lying nearby."
-	no_tool_description = "You can't open it without a multiool"
-	has_tool_description = "You can try to hack it open"
+	discovery_log = "Discovered a corpse of a humanoid."
+	description = "You find a dessicated corpose of a humanoid, though it's too damaged to identify. A locked briefcase is lying nearby."
+	no_tool_description = "You can't open it without a multiool."
+	has_tool_description = "You can try to hack it open with your multitool!"
 	action_text = "Hack open"
 	delay_message = "Hacking..."
 	loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/simple/cash
@@ -99,9 +99,10 @@
 	name = "gunfight leftovers"
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_DRILL
-	discovery_log = "You discovered a site of some past gunfight."
-	description = "You find a site full of gun casing and scorched with laser marks. You notice something under rubble nearby."
-	no_tool_description = "You can't get to it without a drill"
+	discovery_log = "Discovered a site of a past gunfight."
+	description = "You find a site full of gun casings and scorched with laser marks. You notice something under some nearby rubble."
+	no_tool_description = "You can't get to it without a drill."
+	has_tool_description = "You can remove the rubble with your drill!"
 	action_text = "Remove rubble"
 	delay_message = "Drilling..."
 	loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/simple/weapons
@@ -111,10 +112,11 @@
 	name = "locked maintenance room"
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY,EXPLORATION_SITE_STATION)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL
-	discovery_log = "You discovered a locked maintenance room."
-	success_log = "Retrieved contents of maintenance room."
-	description = "You discover a locked maintenance room. You can see marks of something being moved often from it nearby."
-	no_tool_description = "You can't open it without a multitool"
+	discovery_log = "Discovered a locked maintenance room."
+	success_log = "Retrieved the contents of a locked maintenance room."
+	description = "You discover a locked maintenance room. You can see marks from frequent movement nearby."
+	no_tool_description = "You can't open it without a multitool."
+	has_tool_description = "You can try to open it with your multitool!"
 	action_text = "Hack"
 	delay_message = "Hacking..."
 	loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/maintenance
@@ -124,10 +126,11 @@
 	name = "storage room"
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY,EXPLORATION_SITE_STATION)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_TRANSLATOR
-	discovery_log = "You discovered a storage room full of crates."
-	success_log = "Used translated manifest to find a crate with double bottom."
-	description = "You find a storage room full of empty crates. There's a manifest in some obscure language pinned near the entrance."
-	no_tool_description = "You can only see empty crates, and can't understand the manifest without a translator."
+	discovery_log = "Discovered a storage room full of crates."
+	success_log = "Used a translated manifest to find a crate of medication."
+	description = "You find a storage room full of unidentified crates. There's a manifest in an obscure language pinned near the entrance."
+	no_tool_description = "All the crates around are devoid of useful contents, and the manifest is unreadable without a translator."
+	has_tool_description = "You can translate the manifest with your translator!"
 	action_text = "Translate"
 	delay_message = "Translating manifest..."
 	loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/simple/drugs
@@ -138,10 +141,10 @@
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_ALIEN)
 	band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH=1,EXOSCANNER_BAND_RADIATION=1)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_TRANSLATOR
-	discovery_log = "Discovered a alien sarcophagus covered in unknown glyphs"
-	success_log = "Retrieved contents of alien sarcophagus"
-	description = "You find an giant sarcophagus of alien origin covered in unknown script."
-	no_tool_description = "You see no way to open the sarcophagus or translate the glyphs without a tool."
+	discovery_log = "Discovered an alien sarcophagus covered in unknown glyphs."
+	success_log = "Retrieved contents of an alien sarcophagus."
+	description = "You find a giant sarcophagus of alien origin, covered in unknown script."
+	no_tool_description = "You see no way to open the sarcophagus nor translate the glyphs without a multitool."
 	has_tool_description = "You translate the glyphs and find a description of a hidden mechanism for unlocking the tomb."
 	delay_message = "Opening..."
 	action_text = "Open"
@@ -153,10 +156,10 @@
 	band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE=1)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_LASER
 	discovery_log = "Discovered an alien pod."
-	success_log = "Retrieved contents of the alien pod"
-	description = "You encounter an alien biomachinery full of sacks containing some lifeform."
-	no_tool_description = "You can't open them without precise laser."
-	has_tool_description = "You can try to cut one open with a laser."
+	success_log = "Retrieved contents of the alien pod."
+	description = "You encounter an alien biopod full of strange sacks containing abducted lifeforms."
+	no_tool_description = "You can't breach the biopod without a precise laser."
+	has_tool_description = "You can try to cut one open with your laser!"
 	delay_message = "Opening..."
 	action_text = "Open"
 	loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/pet
@@ -168,9 +171,10 @@
 	band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_PLASMA=1)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL
 	discovery_log = "Discovered ship fuel storage."
-	description = "You find the ship fuel storage. Unfortunately it's locked with electronic lock."
+	description = "You find the ship's fuel storage. Unfortunately, it has an electronic lock."
 	success_log = "Retrieved fuel from storage."
-	no_tool_description = "You'll need multitool to open it."
+	no_tool_description = "You can't breach the lock without a multitool."
+	has_tool_description = "You can try and short circuit the lock with your multitool!"
 	delay_message = "Opening..."
 	action_text = "Open"
 	loot_type = /obj/item/fuel_pellet/exotic
@@ -180,9 +184,10 @@
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SHIP)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_TRANSLATOR
 	discovery_log = "Discovered ship navigation systems."
-	description = "You find the ship navigation systems. With proper tools you can retrieve any data stored here."
+	description = "You find the ship's navigation systems encoded in a strange language. You'll be able to use the data with a translator."
 	success_log = "Retrieved shipping data from navigation systems."
 	no_tool_description = "You'll need a translator to decipher the data."
+	has_tool_description = "You can try and translate the navigation data with your multitool!"
 	delay_message = "Retrieving data..."
 	action_text = "Retrieve data"
 	loot_type = /datum/adventure_loot_generator/cargo
@@ -195,7 +200,8 @@
 	discovery_log = "Discovered a isolated microbiome."
 	description = "You discover a giant fungus colony."
 	success_log = "Retrieved samples of the fungus for future study."
-	no_tool_description = "With a laser tool you could slice off a sample for study."
+	no_tool_description = "With a precise laser, you could slice off a sample for study."
+	has_tool_description = "You can carefully cut a sample from the colony with your laser!"
 	delay_message = "Taking samples..."
 	action_text = "Take sample"
 	loot_type = /obj/item/petri_dish/random
@@ -206,9 +212,9 @@
 	band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE=1)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_TRANSLATOR
 	discovery_log = "Met a creepy stranger."
-	description = "You meet an inhabitant of this site. Smelling horribly and clearly agitated about something."
-	no_tool_description = "You have no idea what it wants from you without a translator."
-	has_tool_description = "Your best translation is that it wants to share its hobby with you. "
+	description = "You meet an inhabitant of this site, looking ragged and clearly agitated about something."
+	no_tool_description = "You can't tell what it's trying to convey without a translator."
+	has_tool_description = "Your best translation dictates that it would like to share its hobby with you!"
 	success_log = "Recieved a gift from a stranger."
 	delay_message = "Enduring..."
 	action_text = "Accept gift."
@@ -219,10 +225,11 @@
 	name = "derelict comms satellite"
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SPACE)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_MULTITOOL
-	discovery_log = "You discovered a derelict communication satellite."
-	description = "You discover a derelict communication satellite. Its encryption module seem intact and can be retrieved."
-	no_tool_description = "You'll need a multiool to crack open the lock."
-	success_log = "Retrieved encryption keys from derelict satellite"
+	discovery_log = "Discovered a derelict communication satellite."
+	description = "You discover a derelict communication satellite. Its encryption key is intact, but has a complicated electronic lock."
+	no_tool_description = "You'll need a multiool to retrieve the encryption key."
+	has_tool_description = "You can disable the lock to retrieve the key with your multitool!"
+	success_log = "Retrieved an encryption key from a derelict satellite."
 	delay_message = "Hacking..."
 	action_text = "Hack lock"
 	loot_type = /obj/item/encryptionkey/heads/captain
@@ -231,9 +238,10 @@
 	name = "welded locker"
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SPACE)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_WELDER
-	discovery_log = "You discovered a welded shut locker."
-	description = "You discover a welded shut locker floating through space. What could be inside ?"
-	success_log = "Retrieved bones of unfortunate spaceman from a welded locker."
+	discovery_log = "Discovered a hastily welded locker."
+	description = "You discover a welded locker floating through space. What could be inside...?"
+	no_tool_description = "You'll need a welding tool to take the contents of the locker."
+	success_log = "Retrieved... a severed head."
 	delay_message = "Welding open..."
 	action_text = "Weld open"
 	loot_type = /obj/item/bodypart/head
@@ -253,11 +261,11 @@
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE)
 	band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_PLASMA=3)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_DRILL
-	discovery_log = "Discovered a sizeable plasma deposit"
-	success_log = "Extracted plasma."
+	discovery_log = "Discovered a sizeable plasma deposit."
+	success_log = "Extracted the plasma from the deposit."
 	description = "You locate a rich surface deposit of plasma."
-	no_tool_description = "You'll need to come back with a drill to mine it."
-	has_tool_description = ""
+	no_tool_description = "You'll need a drill to take anything from the deposit."
+	has_tool_description = "Your drill will allow you to extract the deposit!"
 	action_text = "Mine"
 	delay_message = "Mining..."
 	loot_type = /obj/item/stack/sheet/mineral/plasma/thirty
@@ -267,11 +275,11 @@
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE)
 	band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_DENSITY=3)
 	required_tool = EXODRONE_TOOL_DRILL
-	discovery_log = "Discovered a sizeable MATRIAL deposit"
-	success_log = "Extracted MATERIAL."
+	discovery_log = "Discovered a sizeable MATRIAL deposit."
+	success_log = "Extracted the MATERIAL from the deposit."
 	description = "You locate a rich surface deposit of MATERIAL."
-	no_tool_description = "You'll need to come back with a drill to mine it."
-	has_tool_description = ""
+	no_tool_description = "You'll need a drill to take anything from the deposit."
+	has_tool_description = "Your drill will allow you to extract the deposit!"
 	action_text = "Mine"
 	delay_message = "Mining..."
 	var/static/list/possible_materials = list(/datum/material/silver,/datum/material/bananium,/datum/material/pizza) //only add materials with sheet type here

code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_events/trader.dm

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/proc/trade(obj/item/exodrone/drone)
 	var/obj/trade_good = locate(required_path) in drone.contents
 	var/obj/loot = new traded_path()
-	drone.drone_log("Traded [trade_good] for [loot]")
+	drone.drone_log("Traded [trade_good] for [loot].")
 	qdel(trade_good)
 	drone.try_transfer(loot)
 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
 
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/farmer_market
 	name = "farmer's market"
-	deep_scan_description = "You detect a spot with unusal concentraction of edibles on the site."
+	deep_scan_description = "You detect an area with an unusually high concentration of edibles on site."
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE)
 	band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE=2)
 	required_path = /obj/item/stock_parts/servo/nano
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/fish
 	name = "interstellar fish trader"
 	requires_translator = FALSE
-	deep_scan_description = "You spot gian \"FRESH FISH\" sign on the site."
+	deep_scan_description = "You spot a giant \"FRESH FISH\" sign on site."
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE)
 	band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE=2)
 	required_path = /obj/item/stock_parts/cell/high
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
 
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/surplus
 	name = "military surplus trader"
-	deep_scan_description = "You decrypt a transmission advertising military surplus sale on the site."
+	deep_scan_description = "You decrypt a transmission advertising military surplus for sale on site."
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_CIVILIZED)
 	band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE=1)
 	required_path = list(/obj/item/clothing/suit/armor,/obj/item/clothing/shoes/jackboots)
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
 
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/flame_card
 	name = "id card artisan"
-	deep_scan_description = "You spy a adveristment for an id card customization workshop."
+	deep_scan_description = "You spy an advertisment for an ID card customisation workshop."
 	required_site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_CIVILIZED)
 	band_values = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH=1)
 	required_path = list(/obj/item/card/id) //If you trade a better card for worse that's on you
@@ -114,10 +114,10 @@
 	var/static/list/possible_card_states = list("card_flames","card_carp","card_rainbow")
 
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/flame_card/get_discovery_message(obj/item/exodrone/drone)
-	return "Encountered [name] willing to customize any id card you bring them."
+	return "Encountered [name] willing to customise any ID card you bring them."
 
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/flame_card/get_description(obj/item/exodrone/drone)
-	return "You encounter local craftsman willing to improve an id card for you free of charge."
+	return "You encounter a local craftsman willing to customise an ID card for you, free of charge."
 
 /datum/exploration_event/simple/trader/flame_card/trade(obj/item/exodrone/drone)
 	var/obj/item/card/id/card = locate(required_path) in drone.contents

code/modules/explorer_drone/exploration_site.dm

@@ -190,13 +190,13 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_EMPTY(exploration_sites)
 
 /datum/exploration_site/abandoned_refueling_station
 	name = "abandoned refueling station"
-	description = "old shuttle refueling station drifting through the void."
+	description = "An old shuttle refueling station drifting through the void."
 	band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH = 1)
 	site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS,EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY,EXPLORATION_SITE_STATION)
 
 /datum/exploration_site/trader_post
 	name = "unregistered trading station"
-	description = "Weak radio transmission advertises this place as RANDOMIZED_NAME"
+	description = "A weak radio transmission advertises this place as RANDOMIZED_NAME"
 	band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH = 1, EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE = 1)
 	site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY,EXPLORATION_SITE_STATION,EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_CIVILIZED)
 	fluff_type = "fluff_trading"
@@ -209,19 +209,19 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_EMPTY(exploration_sites)
 
 /datum/exploration_site/cargo_wreck
 	name = "interstellar cargo ship wreckage"
-	description = "wreckage of long-range cargo shuttle"
+	description = "Wreckage of a long-range cargo shuttle."
 	band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH = 1, EXOSCANNER_BAND_DENSITY = 1)
 	site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SHIP,EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY)
 
 /datum/exploration_site/alien_spaceship
 	name = "ancient alien spaceship"
-	description = "a gigantic spaceship of unknown origin, it doesnt respond to your hails but does not prevent you boarding either"
+	description = "A gigantic spaceship of unknown origin. It doesn't respond to your hails but does not prevent you boarding, either."
 	band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_TECH = 1, EXOSCANNER_BAND_RADIATION = 1)
 	site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SHIP,EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_ALIEN)
 
 /datum/exploration_site/uncharted_planet
 	name = "uncharted planet"
-	description = "planet missing from nanotrasen starcharts."
+	description = "A planet missing from Nanotrasen starcharts."
 	band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_LIFE = 3)
 	site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE)
 
@@ -240,26 +240,26 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_EMPTY(exploration_sites)
 
 /datum/exploration_site/alien_ruins
 	name = "alien ruins"
-	description = "alien ruins on small moon surface."
+	description = "Alien ruins on a small moon's surface."
 	site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE,EXPLORATION_SITE_ALIEN,EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS)
 	fluff_type = "fluff_ruins"
 
 /datum/exploration_site/asteroid_belt
 	name = "asteroid belt"
-	description = "dense asteroid belt"
+	description = "A dense asteroid belt."
 	site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE)
 	fluff_type = "fluff_space"
 
 /datum/exploration_site/spacemine
 	name = "mining facility"
-	description = "abandoned mining facility attached to ore-heavy asteroid"
+	description = "An abandoned mining facility attached to an ore-rich asteroid."
 	band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_PLASMA = 3)
 	site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_RUINS,EXPLORATION_SITE_HABITABLE,EXPLORATION_SITE_SURFACE)
 	fluff_type = "fluff_ruins"
 
 /datum/exploration_site/junkyard
 	name = "space junk field"
-	description = "a giant cluster of space junk."
+	description = "A giant cluster of space junk."
 	band_info = list(EXOSCANNER_BAND_DENSITY = 3)
 	site_traits = list(EXPLORATION_SITE_TECHNOLOGY,EXPLORATION_SITE_SPACE)
 	fluff_type = "fluff_space"

code/modules/explorer_drone/loot.dm

@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(adventure_loot_generator_index,generate_generator_index())
 
 /obj/item/antique
 	name = "antique"
-	desc = "Valuable and completly incomprehensible."
+	desc = "Valuable and completely incomprehensible."
 	icon = 'icons/obj/exploration.dmi'
 	icon_state = "antique"
 

code/modules/explorer_drone/scanner_array.dm

@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(scan_conditions,init_scan_conditions())
 	name = "Scanner array"
 	icon = 'icons/obj/exploration.dmi'
 	icon_state = "scanner_off"
-	desc = "Sophisticated scanning array. Easily influenced by enviroment."
+	desc = "A sophisticated scanning array. Easily influenced by its environment."
 
 /obj/machinery/exoscanner/Initialize(mapload)
 	. = ..()
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(scan_conditions,init_scan_conditions())
 
 /datum/scan_condition/nebula
 	name = "Nebula"
-	description = "Site is within a unusually dense nebula, to reduce scanner noise position dishes at least 15 tiles apart"
+	description = "Site is within an unusually dense nebula. To reduce scanner noise, position dishes at least 15 tiles apart."
 	var/distance = 15
 
 /datum/scan_condition/nebula/check_dish(obj/machinery/exoscanner/dish)
@@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(scan_conditions,init_scan_conditions())
 
 /datum/scan_condition/pulsar
 	name = "Pulsar"
-	description = "Pulsar near the site requires dishes to be shielded from electomagnetic noise, ensure no other machines are working near the dish."
+	description = "A pulsar near the site requires dishes to be shielded from electomagnetic noise. Ensure no other machines are working near the dish."
 	var/distance = 2
 
 /datum/scan_condition/pulsar/check_dish(obj/machinery/exoscanner/dish)
@@ -342,7 +342,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(scan_conditions,init_scan_conditions())
 
 /datum/scan_condition/asteroid_belt
 	name = "Asteroid Belt"
-	description = "An asteroid belt is obscuring the direct line of sight from the station to the site, ensure the dishes are placed outside of station z level."
+	description = "An asteroid belt is obscuring the direct line of sight from the station to the site. Ensure the dishes are placed outside of the station z level."
 
 /datum/scan_condition/asteroid_belt/check_dish(obj/machinery/exoscanner/dish)
 	var/turf/dish_turf = get_turf(dish)
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(scan_conditions,init_scan_conditions())
 
 /datum/scan_condition/black_hole
 	name = "Black Hole"
-	description = "Background black hole requires you to focus the scan point precisely, ensure the dishes isolated from rest of the station with at least 6 walls around them."
+	description = "A background black hole requires you to focus the scan point precisely. Ensure the dishes are isolated from rest of the station with at least 6 walls around them."
 
 /datum/scan_condition/black_hole/check_dish(obj/machinery/exoscanner/dish)
 	var/wall_count = 0